Witcher of Old

As an investor, I have a few things to say to the author: First, the most fascinating thing about the Witcher is the overly real world, the contempt and fear of others, the vicissitudes of the world that the Witcher has seen, the seemingly emotionless coldness, and the unacceptable coldness of the Trial of Grass. Therefore, when describing, you can add some environmental descriptions and expressions of the Witcher's personal character to make it more flavorful. Second, the witcher itself has its own alchemy system, sigils, and bombs. These conflict with the potion system, but they must not be removed. How can you call a witcher with only two swords? The two systems take up too much space, so try not to explain it, just give it a name. As for why readers are not interested. My personal opinion, let's just listen to it

On a whim, I drew the map diagram of the first volume. I have no experience. I will write the book first and then add the pictures. If there are any deviations in details, just ignore them😠

If I hadn't read Lord of Mysteries, I wouldn't be able to understand what you wrote. The setting you wrote is too confusing.

1. The new book issue, every collection, recommendation, and comment is very exciting, thank you~ 2. Fei Xiaobai's writing, I want to try my best to design a reasonable but innovative world structure and background, and use some hidden clues to let the true self hidden under the surface emerge little by little, so it is inevitable to lay the groundwork at the beginning, but the plot has already unfolded quickly, and I don't think it is long-winded. 3. The rough outline of the story, several main clues, and the extraordinary ability system have been sorted out, ensuring that there will be no major problems later. 4. The detailed outline of the first volume is basically finished. I will write at least 3,000 words every day in the near future. I will keep some manuscripts in my hand so that I can review and revise according to the latest content. I want to lay down the basic design at the beginning. 5. The story framework has been completed, and the ending should be completed as expected. 6. If you have any comments or suggestions, please feel free to submit them directly in the comment area. I apologize for any omissions. 7. If you think the content is good, be sure to add it to your favorites and make recommendations, even if it leaves a comment, otherwise I will be too lonely. Thank you again~~~

In the early stage, there was darkness and conspiracy everywhere, but then it gradually became clear. But I am still very curious about Tarklian's identity. I think it would be great if he was the protagonist, hahaha ~ A powerful soul who doesn't know what his purpose is (*^ω^*) Are you very curious? Unexpectedly, Anna is a programmer who has lost his memory. At first, I thought he fell into the game world. Hahaha~ His identity is a mystery~ His true identity is not a very great god, right? Hahaha~ Now there are two people living in one body, I am very much looking forward to Anna's growth~

Based on readers' suggestions, we have modified the beginning of Chapters 4, 5, and 6. We have only streamlined and deleted part of the setting descriptions to make reading smoother. This is not a modification of the plot logic~~ The title has been changed to a more popular one, and the cover has also been updated. Old readers may need to delete the cache to see the new cover, 😵~ Also, thank you for the suggestion~

Collected! Please comment and comment!

Collected, keep going. Keep it first

See The author said that he needs to revise it from the beginning. I don't know if he has revised it yet.