Lao Gou Comes to Another World

The writing is quite interesting. When I saw the words dnf, I thought of my lost youth again.

Not bad! Collected! Take your time and watch! Keep it up! Welcome to visit us again!

I actually brought DNF to play with CS, so I decided to collect it.

Is there anyone? If there is anyone, please leave a paw. You can also complain🤪

Come and visit with your books, cheers

I watched the beginning and it felt very smooth and natural. I will watch it slowly tomorrow weekend 😁

Write well, come on! 🌸🌸

Good book, come on, write well!

Waiting for your update, come on! (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑

I haven't read many system articles. Maybe I can't give you too many correct suggestions. I can only tell you my feelings after reading them. After reading the first two chapters, I feel that the large writing style is okay. Some plots are described in detail and have a sense of immersion. I think the bad thing is that there are a lot of dialogues at the beginning of the first chapter and there are many characters appearing, which makes me feel a little confused and I can't tell who is who. The pace of the story is a bit slow. I think it would be easier to retain readers with a faster pace~ Come on!

I thought it was mainly about time travel, but I didn't expect it to be a system article. However, I really don't understand much about this kind of game, and I don't have much experience. But overall, the plot of the article is okay. It feels a bit scattered at the beginning, and there are a lot of dialogues. It seems that it is not that easy to integrate. In short, come on.

Not bad, speaking of CS: GO Does it have a big top? , I want to see someone spin.

Brothers, we need three female supporting characters now Does anyone have any suggestions?