The Sun That Penetrates the Phantom R

It's a very interesting book, nice to read

One person's fault leads to a group of people's gg

Why do you feel so much like a fan?

Do you choose to bear it or escape?

This book gives me the feeling of reading comics and reading some physical books in junior high and high school. The story may be exciting in the future, and I can see that the author is very good. But there is a problem. The story you want to write needs a long time to prepare. In fact, this is not suitable for the pace of online writing at this stage. Take the first few chapters as an example. I think many readers may leave after reading a few chapters. It's not that you say something bad, but you put the attraction and explosive points to make people interested in the back. For online articles, the opening rhythm and attraction are very important. The early stage should be attractive, the middle stage can pave the way, and the follow-up is the unfolding of the story. I think this overall rhythm is better, and the opening suggestions are clearer and simpler.

Because I have obsessive-compulsive disorder, I feel uncomfortable when the whole writing is not good-looking or neat, and the data is not good, so many aspects are reflected in the book This book is purely for entertainment, because I haven't written a book for a long time, so I don't know where my own shortcomings are, so I simply make the data look good, including chapter comments. I am not a master. Don't believe it, and don't be suspicious I am just doing this for exposure, to get a lot of traffic and readers, so that everyone can see my book, tell me my shortcomings, what needs to be improved, what is wrong with the logic of the book, what is wrong with the plot, what is not done well, whether there is anything that needs to be improved in the writing, or if there is anything that is nt or disgusting, I want you to tell me, that's why I do it! Otherwise, I won't be able to make progress. I don't even know what I'm doing wrong or what the problem is. Without readers and traffic, all that brings me is basically self-pleasure. So in order to avoid being self-excited and giving up writing again in the end, I decided to spend a lot of money to do this. I don't want to be like when I wrote a book five years ago, full of dreams, expectations, and hopes, but with nothing in the end, so I came up with this bad idea. If I bother you, steal your recommendation spot, or make you unhappy, I will apologize to you here, but I definitely didn't mean it, so please understand! I sincerely hope that everyone can point out my problems and shortcomings. Even if it is unpleasant, I will humbly accept it, reflect on myself, think over and over again, ponder and improve, so that one day I can truly let everyone accept and like my book. If possible, can you waste some of your precious time to read my book and give me some suggestions? I need your help, support, suggestions and your encouragement. Thank you all! I wish you all abundant wealth, happiness, prosperity at home, never a book shortage, and become more and more handsome and beautiful❤

I think the author is very interesting. There are not many young ladies who are so close. Please give me a like.

Familiar book title, introduction, krypton gold operation, could it be that He Xiaokang?

I can't understand the introduction. Nowadays, there are such introductions about literary youths that don't attract people to read.

Achievement: Finished reading Achievement. As a data-saving assistant, I don't understand Wedge, is it just a dream? ... Summary of the content: The male protagonist attended the concert of his favorite singer, but he did not expect to be invaded by monsters. As a result, one of them died because of his impulsiveness. The male protagonist was very sad and depressed after returning home. A few years later, the male protagonist went to attend a memorial day concert, and encountered monster invasion again. After experiencing many difficulties, the male protagonist succeeded in exploding, and then his grandmother died. Then he encountered a monster invasion and was successfully defeated. I hope the next book will make great progress, otherwise it will be easy to be criticized, or no one will read it.

It's not obvious that this is a fan anime at the beginning, even though the title is from another series. , But the plot is that of Hitban Senki Zeske. This is an original drama in 2013 and has been aired for five seasons. The author replied that he wrote it for others and is not sure whether it is a drama. Now let me come here to give you some knowledge.

There was an anime in 2013 called The Sun Penetrating the Phantom. I don't know how many people still know about it now.

This fan list is awesome, how many accounts does the author have 🤭

Brother, please be more understanding. I can't understand.

The main reason is not that others can't understand it. The main thing is that you can describe something that can be clearly expressed in one chapter, like a running account, and write it out in ten pieces. That's why many people can't understand it. Even if they can understand it, they will be put off by your initial flow, so I recommend it! When the second book is a remake of the first one, I suggest you don't overdo it and make the plot neither too slow nor too slow, so it's easier to understand! After all, your twenty-five-character plot, in my opinion! Only a maximum of 50,000 to 80,000 words can be used as a plot, and the 50,000 to 80,000 words of plot that I mentioned are not excluded if they are mixed with nonsense. Therefore, I suggest you not to go too far in the later stage, keep it simple and popular, and readers will be happier! I read a book to find happiness because I am too tired, not to find excitement and waste my brain. If I don't feel the happiness, I will basically leave, so I suggest you listen to me, if you can! Please mark my words! Typing is not easy, my friend! I don't have a writing style that looks like water, and my sentences don't make sense! You have a writing skills, and returning water is like a lot of water coming out of a certain part I'm just kidding😚😚Don't take it seriously, the plot is actually okay! Mainly because there is too much nonsense. Sometimes I don't understand it at all if I don't read it a few times Come on! Waiting for you to get tired later and when the plot gets better and better I will book it all and give you an extra reward of 500-1000 coins. After all, I am poor Please understand! Farewell! Sayong Nora ~ Hehe!

Why why why can you bring English

Hmm... I wrote it for fun, so just have fun. The scene where the girl you want to die is in 50-51-52! The plot probably starts in Chapter 14. The first chapter is about the affection of the heroine's best friend Wen Kexin towards the heroine and his kindness, and the later chapters focus on this! I am very partial to water, please forgive me...

There are many articles on my bookshelf that are much slower. Now I have forgotten what they were about. When I open them to read, I have to filter them again. Sometimes I give up in order to save time. I hope I can read two chapters every day. Thank you!

Most people say that the plot is too clumsy to understand... It's like a running account, so for the sake of convenience, I don't want to read the content I will write a rough plot of each volume before putting it on the shelves and publish it You can just read that one 😄 Also, this book is in the experimental stage, after all, many people's scripts I haven't done it yet I have completely thought it through, so I am thinking about it while writing If you have any good suggestions, you can tell me directly I will refer to it when I think about it It is easy to rewrite and synthesize it into a second new book I would like to say thank you for your hard work I also thank those who stayed and gave me suggestions in advance Thank you very much! This lady would like to thank all the handsome guys and beauties ❤! Also, thank you to the handsome guys and beauties who are willing to support me Big brothers, big sisters... I wish you all a happy day, never a book shortage and lots of money happiness and health ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

If you want to practice writing or test the water on the light novel channel, it is recommended to write about the three major migrant workers who are dying in the sea of ​​​​fire, or the Pokémon that has become a little popular recently, Conan. It is too difficult to directly write the daily series, which can be said to be hellish difficulty, because the daily series is a niche within a niche, so the audience's requirements for writing, logic, etc. Are very high, and it is difficult to become popular.

If you have any questions, ideas, incomprehensibility or comments, please send them to this floor! I'll watch them all! Then combine them together according to your ideas and modify them! But I will not modify it in this book. I will open a new book and modify it according to your ideas. I will use other writing styles and the text will not be repeated with this one. However, the plot will only be slightly different, but the final ending will not change from the process of this book! Just added some daily plot! If there are any errors in the logic or plot, please point them out and let me know! When the time comes, I will revise it and send it to the revised version of the new book "The Sun Penetrating the Phantom", and start the double update mode! Keep updated! Thanks! Here, I would like to thank those who stayed and supported me! Thank you!

What does this have to do with this show

It's over so soon? Be willful, bro.

This book has been written and there are a bunch of manuscripts in storage! Now we are working on a remake, the main problem is! I'm thinking whether to start a new book or... Write it after the first part of this book is finished This way, it can have a million words to read! Because the free channel will be opened later, you don't have to worry about charging for the remake But I am worried that it is not good to do so Although the word count of the remake is only 20,000 or 300,000 So I can't make up my mind, please give me some advice! Choice 1-Re-open a book, and then finish it for two to three hundred thousand Choice 2-Continue to delay, and then open the book for free Just over one million, it is finished! What do you choose? It's up to you! Ps: After the remake version is over, the third version will be reopened! So it's very confusing! !

Book recommendation, the vortex in the corner of the eye, created by the author and me together, a collection.

This is a book recommendation post! Recommended book "Gods on the battlefield", if you are interested, you can check it out! "Gods Arrive at the Battlefield", Introduction: In the chat channel, he is [Destiny], a businessman who calls himself "I". In the world copy, he is [Xuanniao], a thigh with invincible luck. In daily life, he is [Lin Yu], an "ordinary" high school student. Finally, in the battlefield—— He is God! God comes to the battlefield!

It will be officially released on September 1st. If you feel uncomfortable reading the first five volumes, you can directly watch the review of the sixth volume. It is a rough summary of the plot of the first five volumes. You can understand it by reading this! Before it is put on the shelves, a new book will be released in the seventh volume The advance plot trailer of "Judge from Another World VR", a rough plot description, and some character settings. There must be male and female protagonists, including a rough introduction to the origin of their abilities. Shao will also have In addition, Vr is the abbreviation of Variants-Revolution It means variant revolution, which can also be said to be the infected revolution. The review will be released today At the same time, the seventh volume of the new book preview will be released before charging If you have any ideas or questions, please leave a message❤ Thank you again, it is great to have you❤ I will die without regrets!

It feels like this episode of Zhan Ji's swansong

This is probably not Qidian's strongest second-grade novel, bar none. 1 I read the comments that it was a group portrait novel, and I searched specifically for what a group portrait is. It seems to be similar to Journey to the West, but the image of your character is so vague.

The first part of this book is expected to end at half a million words! Later, I will consider whether to continue writing or just finish writing the prologue! Second! In order to ensure quality, I only update it once a day! As for the other two new books, it is estimated that 5,000 words will be updated every day That translates to 10,000 words a day! Or write one first! 8000-12000 words a day, or 2000 words for one book 5000-8000 words for another book! We haven't decided when it will be released yet. We will tell you in advance two days before the release Because the update rate exceeds 2,000 a day I can't guarantee that the writing is good, but at least it can be read! Not to mention it is about 10,000 words, so we apologize for any inconvenience! I will study better, work harder, and improve my writing speed I also hope that everyone can continue to support me! The first order amount is now 2980, the difference of 20 is 3000 Please click more and subscribe, thank you!