Wolf Slayer Blade

After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the writing is so silly. I cut it.

I've read dozens of chapters, and here's my personal opinion. Originally, I saw this theme coming in, and it was interesting. The author could also have written about the battle in the original copy. Unfortunately, I have no sense of immersion in the protagonist of this book. After reading dozens of chapters, my evaluation of the protagonist can only be described as naive. Originally, if there was no Miko, my senses might be better. This Miko feels very stiff, and the protagonist has no points. This little girl insists on acting together because of dependence and immortality. The protagonist himself has no strength and has to take her with him. The result is that the ghost who can't be beaten becomes Shura. What do you think of Shura? Is it a buff? Aren't you afraid that you won't be able to change back? The author also underestimated the world of Sekiro. After more than seventy chapters, he had almost learned the sword skills. He didn't have Santang or Feixue. He had no strength and was carrying burdens to fight in December. He couldn't even run alone. Moreover, if the original characters are not handled well, they will be very awkward. Even if the fandom does not follow the plot, at least the combat effectiveness will not collapse! Have the force values ​​of Sekiro and Demon Slayer really been adjusted? When I watched it, I felt that Sekiro's combat power is the same as that of a support player. Basically, killing ghosts is breathing, and Sekiro is responsible for the killing. Isn't Feixue's Sakura Dragon better than Dan Wuxiu? It is really better than assisting, breathing yin and yang from the trunk, breathing yang and yang to protect life, ascending the carp, and flowing water. Which one is not good, but there is none. What's even more exaggerated is that with the ninja move book, there are only a few for blacksmithing, let alone forbearance execution. To use a saying from Sekiro, killing a person is only a matter of one sword blow, and killing a ghost is only a matter of beheading. Isn't sword skill just about hitting the torso! What use does the protagonist's fancy sword skills have in the ghost's self-repair? The protagonist basically cuts hard with the breathing method, without hitting the torso or hitting the health bar. Once you become proficient in blocking, wouldn't it be easier to fight? Wouldn't it be great to fight the two ghosts in Chapter 50 or 60? If it weren't for two people, they would have been taken away with a knife. Actually, from the hundred or so chapters I have read, the author may not have a very deep understanding of Sekiro. Although the book is still readable, I really don't have a sense of immersion because of the changes to the original setting in this second setting. Maybe I will get tired of reading it after about 200 chapters. The above represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it. Of course, I won't argue with you if you spray, it's too childish 🤫

I have one thing to say, I don't like the original woman, the fanfic is originally about the original character, and the woman talks like that, like,,,, ahhhhhhhhhh, it feels a bit bitchy Brother, will you not want me? Brother, will you care more about other people?

Sekiro

Why not a harem? It feels like there's a lot of foreshadowing here. Besides, so many girls in Demon Slayer are dead. It's okay if they take more care of them.

Some people say that when an author writes a work, he writes a story. The interesting part of the story lies in the people and their humanity. People, sometimes are not human, but like ghosts; Ghosts, sometimes are not like ghosts, but like humans. "Liao Zhai" is a story about ghosts, which satirizes the weakness of human nature. When did the story happen, where did it happen; Who did the story happen, and what happened? Writing interesting things is not easy. I hope the author's story has a beginning, is interesting, and has a future.

Hesitation will lead to defeat, decisiveness will only be in vain

One thing to say, Yao, the heroine, really doesn't interest me. After all, people in Honor of Kings call him a bastard. Who would like a bastard? Of course this is the mainstream view, and I agree with this mainstream view

I have watched more than 80 films. To be honest, in my opinion, the protagonist is not a wolf but a dog of the Demon Slayer Squad. Being treated like that and doing nothing about someone you cherish is really discouraging you from doing anything. The plot is very good, but the protagonist is too obsessed with human nature to the point where it becomes the protagonist's weakness.

Still handsome, okay?

Multiple heroines? If you don't watch many heroines, it's not fun to have a harem.

Chapter 83 is so disgusting. Others want to kill the people closest to you (whether or not you kill them is another matter), but the protagonist doesn't even dare to get angry, and just pretends that nothing happened afterwards. This is too cowardly.

Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, I still like the harem,,,,,

I really couldn't stand Princess Yaoyao being the heroine, so I slipped away.

I can only say that the five yuan spent is not worth it.

This protagonist is a ruthless person, as you can tell from his name, Anal Shaoqi Lang

There are a few settings changes that I'd like to explain, so that everyone doesn't step on surprises when reading the book. 1. Demon Slayer Class In the comics, A, B, C, Ding, Wu, Ji, Geng, Xin Rengui do not represent absolute strength. The A-class team members are at most the backup of Zhu. In the book, in order to distinguish strength, it is misappropriated into hard power similar to the Cultivation System. The level of Jiguoyuanyi is considered to be Grade A. Second, Yanzhu has no stepson In the manga, Senjuro said that if his brother had no stepson, Yanhu would be lost. The setting in the book is that Anjuro wants his younger brother to choose his own path, and on the other hand, he has the responsibility to pass on Yanhu, so he raises his stepson, but does not tell his younger brother, lest he think he is useless. 3. Breathing Method The types that do not appear in the Breathing Method comics and formula books, such as the Breath of Fire type 3678, are nonsense by the author himself. Fourth, the appearance of 2346 at the end of the episode 2346 will not all be killed without brutality (a honor card will be given to the boss), but it will not drag out the plot to play each one. Fifth, Sekiro's ability has been magically modified Sekiro's ability has been magically modified. For example, Fang Slash now has a new version, which can be triggered by any hand ninja tool, and Shura has a deeper meaning... That's mainly it. The characters of the original work will remain unchanged, but a lot (actually a lot) of new things will be added. I hope everyone enjoys it~