The Last Sword Immortal of Another World

Regarding the many negative comments that have been made recently, I feel that I must stand up and say something. Many people have told me, let me calm down. No matter what new book, it is normal to have some negative reviews. But, there are some things that I really don't want to complain about. So let me sort it out a little bit, hoping that those who don't like my books can take a look. Plot: 1. The cultivation talent is obviously good, why not switch to other systems.                                       I have written it very clearly above, the protagonist's talent in the first life was not that high, and after the third level, there is no improvement.                                                                                   were all swordsmanship, so for the protagonist who has no talent in any system, why can't he choose the most popular system at the moment and work hard. I can also delete those few sentences about the rapid advancement at the age of 6, 7, and 8, and the protagonist will start out as a loser, and it will not affect the perception. You will lose one leverage point. It's just that I don't want to change it, because these few sentences are useful for my subsequent plot. This is a foreshadowing. 2. The plot is old-fashioned and combines Chinese and Western elements. Oh my God, I can only tell you that these background settings will be useful for promoting future plots. And why is it that the combination of Chinese and Western elements is so poisonous? Doesn't anyone yearn for the appearance of a sword-wielding flying knight in a world of magicians, dragons, and zombies? The setting is a bit weird, it's just a random setting, it just comes out of nowhere. If you follow the established line of thinking, it will be the same old routine and no one will look at it. So, may I ask, what do you want to see? The protagonist has no system and no cheats. Is this just a new routine? Presumably, there will be comments again at this time, what kind of garbage book is this, there is nothing, what is interesting about it. It's really difficult for new authors! 3. The problem of Ives's mother. In order to argue with everyone, I plan to spoil the story. This role is very important, and he will be a very important person in promoting the plot in the future. The author's setting of her is that of a mother with a somewhat split personality who doesn't really care about her children. All she cares about is her own mood and how to return to her own world. As for whether you like this setting or not, I have nothing to say, but please don't curse. I can't understand why mother's setting is so poisonous to you? Does a mother have to be amiable and rescuing people in need? Or the mother of the protagonist of the novel, must she be sacrificed? Some people say that the protagonist is over 60 years old in his two lives and is still easily affected by maternal love. What I want to say is how much you lack love. Is it too late to be affected by emotions at the age of 60? And I also added later that the protagonist was an orphan in two lives. In the second life, he finally had a master, but he didn't care about him. Then in the third life, he suddenly had a mother who seemed to love him. What's going on? Should the protagonist be hard-hearted and calm? Nowadays, in fantasy literature, people who are tens of thousands of years old are still collecting harems. Why can't they be calm and calm? What's more, I didn't write about the protagonist becoming a nymphomaniac, just four words: "My heart feels warm". What's going on? These four words mean that the protagonist has lowered his intelligence and has a low IQ? ? ? ? 4. The setting of realm. I admit this, there are indeed some mistakes, and I am willing to communicate with everyone to correct them. For example, if the Dark Iron Realm is before the Bronze Mirror and the Mithril Realm is before the Golden Realm, I will find a suitable time to change it. There is also the issue of realm names. I can also spoiler the final divine emperor realm and holy realm. It is written after the name of Eastern fantasy, and it is also a foreshadowing. But if book friends have better ideas or names, they can also discuss them together. The author admits that he is really not very good at naming. But! ! !       ，，，， Then the only option is to walk slowly and not send him off. In the end, I still want to thank everyone who wrote comments. I can accept reasonable suggestions. And in the future, if the suggestions are good, I will express special thanks in the writer's comments and tell everyone the changes. But! ! ! I don't accept abuse. Just like the first author I wrote said. New books are hard to come by, so please take care of them as much as possible. I am just a person who likes to tell stories. If you really don't like the story, don't force it. As for the negative reviews and comments from trolls, I will reply to everyone here again. I am capable of deleting and commenting. Thank you!

The book is a good book, and the plot setting is pretty good, at least as far as I can tell from the more than 50 chapters I have read. Originally, I thought the first ten chapters were just a simple novel, a story about cultivators upgrading with a system, but when I got to the end and started to push the main story, I found that it was quite good. At least I can see that the author is writing the story carefully. It is true that there are also shortcomings. Some settings feel incomplete, such as the training system of magicians and other professions. For example, the plot seems to be driven by the system. I hope the author can slowly adjust it back in the later stage. After all, it hasn't been put on the shelves yet, I can still afford to wait 🤝 But in my opinion, the flaws outweigh the advantages. Seedlings are not easy, and everyone seems to be quite harsh on them, especially new authors. Recently I have seen a lot of book friends being very aggressive, and I think this is unnecessary.                                                                  Sand sculptures are popular now, and everyone enjoys reading them without thinking. The article contains suspense and foreshadowing, but it suffers from frustration. Let's all be more patient.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       <br

I really didn't expect to be able to sign the contract so quickly, and I was a bit flattered. I have some words that I hope to chat with all readers who like or dislike me. A new book needs support and care from more people, and we welcome the opinions of all well-intentioned people. However, the author has his own plans for the setting and background of the story, and they will all be unfolded gradually. The author does not want his work to be just a mindless article, but a work that can withstand scrutiny. As for some characters and locations, some historical figures and legends may be used. I hope you won't be too attached. For example, I know the difference between a Vulcan gun and a fire portal gun, as well as the size of cities in medieval Europe, and the different stages of scientific development. However, my story is an imaginary world. If you get too entangled in history, you may lose the original intention of reading the story. Finally, I hope everyone likes my work. They are all adults and have no choice. I want any recommendations for collection and investment 😃. If you have good suggestions and kind reminders, the author will accept them all. I will correct it based on my mood 😁 As for those who don't like works with round faces! What to do, in order to prevent your comments from being too negative. The author's singing is okay 🤫 If you have the opportunity, I will sing for you to calm down 😁 Finally, I wish all friends who have read my book good health, a healthy family, and make a lot of money. Then more people will give me rewards. Please subscribe 😄😄😄

Thanks to the many readers who gave their sincere comments. Yuanlian hereby opens an opinion column. If the opinions and content are really good, everyone can write them here. (Note: We do not accept trolls, please speak politely.) Comments can include [Content Settings]. You can also provide [character name, place name, skill name, etc.]. Even if there are [typos or incorrect sentences], if I didn't notice them, I can point them out. I will change it as soon as possible. Thank you readers for progressing with me. This time, I will correct the names of the realms here: black iron realm, bronze realm, silver realm, gold realm, black gold realm, star realm, purple underworld realm, supreme realm, extraordinary realm, and holy realm. At the same time, I will make fine adjustments to the first twenty chapters, such as the place where the memory of the past life is lost, and the blackening of Ives's mother will be more obviously presented. Finally, thanks again to all readers who are still paying attention to this book. If necessary, I will also try to open a QQ group. If there are really book friends who are willing to read seriously, we will have further discussions. Thank you!

The routine is old and combines Chinese and Western styles

In today's world where routine writing is dominated by novices, it's great to have such a high-quality and high-level writing!

There are many articles on my bookshelf that are much slower. Now I have forgotten what they were about. When I open them to read, I have to filter them again. Sometimes I give up in order to save time. I hope I can read two chapters every day. Thank you!

I, x, the author, can you slow down a little bit? It's so hard to find this book, it's so slow.

Chapter 1 is so embarrassing

Um? Am I sinking? It only took two people to make me sink, hahahaha, then support me. Recommendation votes are given.