Redemption and Courage

I just like this kind of flavorful book😄

Can you add punctuation? It feels awkward without a pause.

I hope to write about the other side that I imagined🤓

It must be important that the Demon King has written so many articles, right?

The description of the characters' appearance is refreshing, come on!

Brother Goutou, come on, I will update tomorrow 😥

I haven't read it for four days and you updated three chapters. Where's the remaining one? Used to wipe your butt?

I've read the first three chapters, let me tell you. From the first chapter, I couldn't tell who the protagonist was. I didn't know whether it was the Demon King or Habeas. But in the third chapter, Habeas died again, which would make readers particularly confused. It is best to have the specific name of the protagonist in about 300 words. In the first chapter, you must write what you want to write about the book, such as a war between humans and demons or something, but I didn't see it. But the good thing about this book is the description, which is a bit too much. It would be particularly good if it were more appropriate.