There Is Definitely Something Wrong with the Arrival of Elves into the World.

The author is not good at pretending to slap someone in the face...

Reading the introduction, you will know that the author is another victim of game piracy. The Needle Bee has only so many racial values. No matter how high your physical attack is, I just need to wear a Qiwaist special attack hand and beat you to death with my backhand. I don't know what kind of sting bee is blowing?

How should I put it? It's not exciting, it's a bit bland, and Golden Finger is not very good in this regard. It can also be regarded as a food book. Take a look when you are bored.

It is recommended to change the name to "The Bizarre Adventure of Needle"

The sauce is bubbling, a cup of milk tea, hot popcorn, crispy snow cakes, raisins, and a small bench in the front row to watch a big book~^_^

Mega needle bee, cool!

Come on, Daichi Sakaki, haha, he specializes in the ground system, but his ace is the Giant Needle Bee😁😁😁

After seeing the end of Chapter 12, I insist on applying the game settings to reality. The elves in the game all act in a predetermined way without thinking. Why don't elves have thoughts in reality? If the trainer level is not enough, the elves will be disobedient! Co-author, is the relationship between the elf and the trainer fake?

I want to see people like Ash who love Pokémon, not a player mentality, where abilities like Shinji come first. I want to see a society like Pokémon, where people and elves are harmonious, stay together if they like, and live together in harmony.

Bullet Boxing

Although the game is different from reality, the giant sting wasp who learned the fatal sting in two months and the Nidoran who learned the horn drill in two months are too much. . . People are still taking supplements to stay healthy, but you have learned all the moves?

After reading the setting of this book, I am really convinced by you. The world history is set to be more than 1,000 years ago. No one has found Eevee's evolutionary and super evolution stones? Do you regard people all over the world as fools? Can you find it as soon as you arrive? The routine is so damn old

After reading the fifty-two chapters, I think that for an amateur author, the author's writing is okay and refreshing. The plot is imaginative, the description of the fighting is also good, and the ups and downs of the content are quite interesting. But for professional authors, coolness alone cannot retain people. The description of the character's background and the logic of the content may be more important. 1. I don't know what you foreshadowed for the protagonist's father, but I can probably guess that he is or was a powerful trainer. This poisonous point cannot be avoided. It doesn't make sense that you have the ability to help but don't help. 2. There is no problem that the Giant Needle Bee grows fast. This logic is very correct, but the elves of the same students grow equally fast, which is very strange. It takes two months for Bobo to evolve into Pidgeot Bird, and two months for Nidoran to evolve into Nido King. Will he still be obedient? Nidoking's character is so explosive that it's fine even if he doesn't go berserk. Will he still listen to your orders? Learned more than a dozen moves in two months, did you learn them in a dream? No need to practice? (Strange power is the same as above) 3. There is no solution to the fact that the giant sting wasp cannot defeat Nidoking. I know you have been thinking about it for a long time and have no way to write this, but this dragnet spinning silk is indeed a poisonous point with no logic. You must admit it. 4. Charizard can't beat Big Food Flower. According to your combat power comparison table, elite level＜senior level＜King level＜championship level. Xu Yeqing is not a King yet. There is a King-level Lizard King, so Big Food Flower may not be King level yet or has just entered the King level. In Chapter 45 of the school team's ace Huo Yun's Charizard, you wrote it yourself and it is infinitely close to the King level. However, the gap is so small and the attributes are incompatible. How can it be defeated? I personally think this is unreasonable. What you said about the three instantaneous energy accumulation caused by the acceleration of chlorophyll is even more nonsense. At the beginning, the author said that he liked the books written by Erquan very much. I also liked them very much. I hope that the author can handle the details better when writing books in the future.

In the world of Pokemon, there are a lot of people with Needle Bee. I wonder if Boss Banmu can train Needle Bee into a strong one by relying on his own talents and the resources of Team Rocket. I just want to ask if Pigfoot has a big face or if he has too many resources to be confident enough to train a Needle Bee.

There are too many theories about fate, and it feels like all the plot relies on supporting characters who are close to the protagonist because of the prophecy. In fact, it is very blunt, and the author even calls it an Easter egg.

Chapter 15 The King-level is still just a student! ? ? ? The combat power collapsed immediately. Slip away.

I don't really like that Mo Qianyu. It feels a bit poisonous.

Many book friends have questions: "It's like feeling relieved for half the time", especially the two kinds of Eevee and mage, and the ruins in front. Since it's just for iron dumbbells, why do you need to build rock pillars? If you say it's digging a hole, it's completely unnecessary. Time travel is just for fun. If you know everything and don't show off, what's the point of time travel? Then you might as well write a pure fanfic

Got the first unicorn bug. I hope the protagonist will be a three-person insect team. I hope that the protagonist can play out the elf that most people think is weak. But there's actually a lot of room for elves to maneuver. Because this proves that if I cultivate the weak to be strong, it is my credit. If I cultivate the weak to be strong, then it is the credit of their race. So I personally recommend choosing green caterpillars as your second choice. Like you said, there are tricks.

This one is handsome

The subject matter is good, but the writing is a bit embarrassing. Even if a commoner raises a large needle bee, even if he trains hard to limit the race, he will win all the way and even resort to such cheap tricks as pretending to be dead, which will not make people convinced.

To be honest, when I see that mage evolution has been studied by others, I don't want to read it. I know that I am short of money. Even if you are weak, others will at most think you are a genius. If you do this, you might as well not write it. . .

It's extremely poisonous. I've tested the poison myself, and the poisonous one calls me an expert.

One drawback is that the protagonist's Elf strength is enhanced by sacrificing the protagonist and exploding seeds. Moreover, I felt that the main character's death was very sudden, and it felt like he died immediately. .

Have you ever heard of the farmer's three punches? Adding a burst punch. Wouldn't it be nice to raise a strange force?

One thing to say, before Meg evolved, I didn't even know how to match the moves. It had low race value, many weaknesses, and a brittle body. Normal people, even time travelers, would not rush to choose Meg. And the most important thing is that no one knows about the Keystone and Meg Evolution Stone in the setting. You must know that the number of Keystone and Meg Stone is definitely rare. It is a rare and unnoticed thing, and I don't have a big range yet. Searching around to find abilities, this thing is definitely the hardest thing to find. In addition, there is the question of whether the meg stone matches the elf. I think normal people will never gamble their future on an unlikely possibility. You must know that the giant needle bee is definitely not powerful without meg evolution. Even if you think you can train the giant needle bee, then if you change to a powerful elf, will the same investment be better than the giant needle bee? In this kind of life-long matter, do you seek stability rather than stability? Anyway, if it were me, I would never dare

Can't you just change the routine? Every time he is either an orphan or a poor person, and there is always a best friend from a big family, can't he be a normal person?

The protagonist chose the Giant Needle Bee because of a mega evolution that he didn't know existed. The author was too deliberate!

Is this article sure that Tsubasa is not the heroine? Why would a story that seems to have a heroine be labeled as having no heroine...

Even though I know that love is not necessarily the only thing between a man and a woman, I always have visions of a heroine without a label. . .