The Road to Invincibility

A few comments Next time when writing a book, remember not to "bring in the family", such as a bunch of brothers, a group of roommates, a group of colleagues. Basically, the person who writes these is either a loser or has poor grades. The Qidian Orphanage is not without reason.

Regarding the reason why dragging a family with a child is considered poisonous by many people. The main thing is not that the family and the family are brought together, but that few people can write this kind of plot well, where the family and the family are brought together to grow together. If you really had the abilities/miracles of the protagonist, wouldn't you be willing to take the person you want to take with you? Unless you really cut off love and sex, shave off your flesh to repay your mother, and cut your bones to repay your father. In the final analysis, simply put, you can't control it. Very few people can develop the plot simultaneously with the protagonist's family, so although the family is included, in fact, only the protagonist is written, and the others are just like decorations and have no effect. When the readers look at it, they feel that these people are like parasites on the protagonist, so they feel disgusted and abandon the book. If you want to bring your family and friends along with you, you have to put in more or even several times the effort to develop the development and plot of these friends and relatives. But in many works, it is very difficult to develop only the main plot of the protagonist, let alone others. This is why works with protagonists in the "orphan genre" are more popular nowadays. At least you can write and develop the plot of this single protagonist well.

Let me make another complaint. It's very poisonous to set the protagonist's sister to be lucky and invincible. If you don't believe me, ask other people.

I hope it won't be a eunuch, this kind of subject matter is very good

After reading Chapter 16, I couldn't help but complain. I said earlier that fire walls cannot burn flying monsters, but how many flying monsters have you burned so far? What Silver Pegasus, What Thunderbird, Now even the flying dragon has to be burned with a wall of fire? You might as well change it to a wall of fire that can burn flying monsters. This setting is no longer a normal BUS. Now you are just slapping yourself in the face repeatedly, and you are even addicted to it.

What do you think of giving the protagonist some unpleasant settings? He is considered a half-torture master.

I have read Chapter 170. Let me first talk about what attracted me. The theme is about the invincibility of heroes and the apocalypse of modern games. This kind of theme attracts me very much and makes me follow it till now. Let's talk about the part about quitting. A lot of the content in the middle is repeated to make up the word count. It feels like the word count is too low. It's slightly better later on, but it's still full of nonsense and does nothing to advance the plot or content, which is off-putting. Moreover, for a game with such settings, it feels normal to play and has many bugs. Chapter 170 doesn't have any advanced units, it's still 135. If you really want to help, post some data on the forum and introduce the arms, magic, and settings. It will definitely be better than running around. This kind of protagonist who has no overall perspective and low emotional intelligence is very boring to watch. I hope the author will write about special features, such as high IQ, setting flow, or farming and hegemony.

I read the book review first, but I continued reading anyway. After all, there are few books on this subject, but I can tolerate everything. My sister is so lucky. Because you want to use a city-breaking routine to trick other heroes, Lucky Specialty will let people attack your city. You're still trying to survive. Even the will of the world doesn't dare to play like this.

If you look at the classification, it's a game alien world, if you look at the introduction, it's evolutionary variation, and if you look at the content, it's an apocalyptic crisis 🙂

Why do you have to write a book where the main character is an African chieftain?

Invincible Heroes, this game is really messed up. I can never figure out why every time I haven't captured two wild monster resources, the other side starts sending people to kill them.

As the main plane, Blue Star's will cannot defeat the will of a super small sub-plane? You might as well write other methods

The book "Invincible Heroes" is very interesting, but no one likes the setting of the world and the supporting characters! ! !

This hero is invincible. How can you be invincible if you don't work hard on the military units and keep fighting alone?

There are not many novels about invincible heroes these days. The beginning is a little bit toxic, but later on it becomes much better to write about games. Hope it persists.

There are very few books about heroes and invincibles. I hope there are no eunuchs.

The protagonist has a double C turn-based bug, and even the battle is rubbish. Moreover, the non-Chief is highly poisonous, highly poisonous in real-time combat, and magic can directly attack heroes, which is hilarious.

I had no desire to read the first chapter. . . Well

Isn't it good for the author to write the story well? Non-Chiefs don't want to read it, but read the story seriously. You keep writing useless things. You just need to adjust some things occasionally. It's disgusting to write like this, and it's suspected of using words together.

I have always preferred the invincible aspects of heroes. After reading Chapter 76, I was persuaded to quit. The author compared it to the Holy Mother. It should be discontinued. No one can play the undead in the Sea of ​​the Undead.

Why give him some resources and give him some more? Why can't you use resources to accumulate a second silver! ! ! Hey, it's really just a novel after all

I just read a few chapters. Did you change the name later?

If you are stuck at full level, you can play even if you are not a legendary hero. Bring Barbarian Bull and Medusa. Use quantity to pile up probability. Half a month of treasure house can bring many full-level ones, and the same goes for magic. Why does it have to be legendary? The survival of the entire race is at stake, and ordinary heroes have to go out and fight to the death. A dead horse becomes a living horse doctor. What's more, the one blocking the door is a star monster. The hero's magic is released from a distance, and the legendary hero on the opposite side has no time to attack the ordinary hero. When the race is against time, the ordinary hero may block it after spending one round of attack time. What's more, if it is successfully blocked, the max-level ordinary heroes may be upgraded on the spot?

Usually very dark novels have the end of the world and are killing each other.

It's a bit like a Qiong Yao drama, the protagonist just yells when something happens!

Invincible Heroes will be useless if you don't put some effort into its settings.

It's a relatively rare subject, I'd like to support you, 12 votes recommend it every day 😰 Come on

It feels a bit like keeping a running account, but since I am a fan of Invincible Heroes, I will reward you with 200 points first.

It's well written, but there are a few updates.

There are many weaknesses in bringing up a family. I don't need to say more about a person who has many weaknesses. Please refer to Lu Bu! People are only weak in IQ. One weakness can lead to such misfortune.