Civilized Era: Ten Thousand Races Struggle for Hegemony

Write the book you want to write according to your own wishes, rather than writing the book he wants to read according to someone else's wishes. It's okay to ask someone for advice, but it can only be used as a reference! Readers who like cool writing want to crush everything; Those who like history want you to act out tribal disputes; Those who like fantasy want you to start a sect; Those who like magic want various races; Those who like the stars want to fly into the stars; If you write according to other people's ideas, what is the difference between you and a gunman? One---Xiao Hei who doesn't want to interfere too much with your creative process

After reading the first two chapters, I have to say that the author was too deeply influenced by his neighbor. The protagonists all have similar templates, which I think is inappropriate.

The writing is messy. If it were written in the same way as the Wanjie next door, it could actually be written. It's a pity that some ancient characters have to be added to it, which makes it white and awkward.

The early writing was very good, but I couldn't understand the later writing and it was boring.

Feeling a bit novice. It is pieced together here and there, but there is nothing of its own. Reading the characters in the book is like watching a group of people playing around in a circle

Are you really not learning from the Lord of All Realms?

Congratulations on the launch! Congratulations🎉🎉🎉🎉

That branch of yours can tie up stones and sticks. What kind of branch is that? It's so hanging. Others are made of animal skins, tendons or bark.