The Post-90S Internet Era

Don't be offended if you forget to read when you are busy. I took a brief look and talked about my opinion. This book looks good in concept, connecting several major development events of the Internet, but the problems are also obvious. First of all, there are flaws in logic, mainly in unclear expressions. This is a commonly mentioned writing problem, that is, the language is not concise enough. If you can say something clearly in one sentence, you have to use a few lengthy sentences to emphasize it. It was obvious from the beginning that this was a problem. Second, there are too many irrelevant descriptions. This can be seen from the second chapter. The consequences are to steal the scene and the characters cannot be focused. Third point, since it is an entrepreneurial story, the portrayal of the soul of the protagonist in this book is too bland, making people confused about what the protagonist is going to do. So this book cannot be signed. Basically, the problem lies here. Although there are three elements that novels follow, characters, time, and place, no matter what kind of novel, there is a soul character. If the writing is not strong enough, the description of the protagonist can be strengthened and the number of supporting roles should be as small as possible. You can refer to "The Ordinary World" for writing methods. I hope it can help you.