I Have a Mechanical Fortress

Let me tell you what I think about this book. After all, I invested in it and I hope the author will get better and better. 1. The pace of this book is too slow: leading to the loss of most readers who read Shuangwen. I still can't see the plot I want. 2. The protagonist does not match his experience: a person who has returned from the apocalypse, where does such sentimentality and various explanations come from. It's not easy to live alone, and it's all kinds of nonsense. Will people who have seen the end of the world still care about various rules? 3. Goldfinger is not as awesome as you brag: it is just a homestead. And it hasn't been used yet. The mechanical fortress does not produce food, clothing, housing and transportation? Just rely on the stockpiles you accumulated in the early stage? Is the granary really a warehouse? A mechanical fortress can play fancy things and make you feel useless. 4. Serious drama: There are too many jokes. This is the end of the world, not an urban fast food article. Why are you playing with so many jokes? Do you need to be funny in the apocalypse? It will happen in minutes. 5. There are too many supporting roles, and a group of people who have no apocalyptic experience often question the protagonist. Then why should the protagonist be reborn? Just get the mechanical fortress in the apocalypse. It's much better than asking for a rebirth setting. They don't know how to struggle and explore together. I won't mention some other minor flaws. It's obvious that the author is a true newbie writer. Therefore, I also want to say that you are really good. If you can write a book, it will be great. Once again, I wish the author better and better, come on.

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There seems to be nothing wrong with the robots produced in Mechanical Fortress (smart authors must know what I mean)

Only when you have a circle contribution of 500 points or more can you apply for an operating officer. Can any boss condescend to you?

How about a heaven-dropping system? Otherwise, the pace is too slow. It took ten pictures to reach Binhai.

The indispensable idioms for each circle can be used with homophones. Me first: perseverance

If you recommend a book, please leave a comment below this post. Books recommended elsewhere will be deleted. Thank you for your cooperation! Recommend the first new book. If you like funny system flow, add it to your collection. Mmm~(^з^)-☆ Recommend the second new book. It is known as the second in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. There are millions of completed manuscripts. It has not been signed yet. Please hurry up

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Author, do you know that after reading Chapter 12, I wanted to delete this book, Mechanical Fortress, Mechanical Fortress Mechanical? When I first read the title, I thought I would get Mechanical Fortress, and then build the Robot Legion or something. Author, I almost gave up the book, you will lose a cute reader like this (when I first entered, I thought it was a Mechanical Legion novel)

Ka Wen is so uncomfortable╯╰ I have deleted everything I wrote today