I Have a Mechanical Fortress

Let me tell you what I think about this book. After all, I invested in it and I hope the author will get better and better. 1. The pace of this book is too slow: leading to the loss of most readers who read Shuangwen. I still can't see the plot I want. 2. The protagonist does not match his experience: a person who has returned from the apocalypse, where does such sentimentality and various explanations come from. It's not easy to live alone, and it's all kinds of nonsense. Will people who have seen the end of the world still care about various rules? 3. Goldfinger is not as awesome as you brag: it is just a homestead. And it hasn't been used yet. The mechanical fortress does not produce food, clothing, housing and transportation? Just rely on the stockpiles you accumulated in the early stage? Is the granary really a warehouse? A mechanical fortress can play fancy things and make you feel useless. 4. Serious drama: There are too many jokes. This is the end of the world, not an urban fast food article. Why are you playing with so many jokes? Do you need to be funny in the apocalypse? It will happen in minutes. 5. There are too many supporting roles, and a group of people who have no apocalyptic experience often question the protagonist. Then why should the protagonist be reborn? Just get the mechanical fortress in the apocalypse. It's much better than asking for a rebirth setting. They don't know how to struggle and explore together. I won't mention some other minor flaws. It's obvious that the author is a true newbie writer. Therefore, I also want to say that you are really good. If you can write a book, it will be great. Once again, I wish the author better and better, come on.

Only when you have a circle contribution of 500 points or more can you apply for an operating officer. Can any boss condescend to you?

How about a heaven-dropping system? Otherwise, the pace is too slow. It took ten pictures to reach Binhai.

There seems to be nothing wrong with the robots produced in Mechanical Fortress (smart authors must know what I mean)

Seedling's new book needs support through votes🙊🙊🙊

If you recommend a book, please leave a comment below this post. Books recommended elsewhere will be deleted. Thank you for your cooperation! Recommend the first new book. If you like funny system flow, add it to your collection. Mmm~(^з^)-☆ Recommend the second new book. It is known as the second in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. There are millions of completed manuscripts. It has not been signed yet. Please hurry up

Happy Dragon Boat Festival, rice dumplings are served

Ka Wen is so uncomfortable╯╰ I have deleted everything I wrote today

Author, do you know that after reading Chapter 12, I wanted to delete this book, Mechanical Fortress, Mechanical Fortress Mechanical? When I first read the title, I thought I would get Mechanical Fortress, and then build the Robot Legion or something. Author, I almost gave up the book, you will lose a cute reader like this (when I first entered, I thought it was a Mechanical Legion novel)

The indispensable idioms for each circle can be used with homophones. Me first: perseverance

If there are big guys who want to reward the author, please give a tip to the character Liang Ge to increase the same fan value. The author will also get profits and the character will enter the star list or the character will be promoted. Funds for the event will be released next month. We can hold activities to give back to the big guys. Thank you for your support.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       " 3. Tags (ruler and above): add a tag with star value +10, label likes >99 star value +10, single day upper limit 1000; 4. Events (free): add a new event star value +50, memorabilia likes >99 star value +10, single day upper limit 600; 5. Choose one of the two tasks: if the character circle contributes ≥500 points in a single day or the number of people the character shares in a single day ≥100, the star value +500 will be awarded, with a single-day upper limit of 500.

I was deceived by the title of the book. I originally thought it was a violent soldier stream, but I didn't expect it to be...

~ If you have any good ideas, suggestions, ideas, and jokes about the subsequent plot, you can mention it here (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴ For the pitfalls or other poisonous points that have not been filled in the novel, you can also remind the author here. (๑^O^๑)۶

Come on💪😃😃😃

There are still 11 days left for this month to end. As a shame to all my book friends, I have finished my last shift.

? ? Finished? 🤔

The college entrance examination is around the corner, and I wish all of you students the best of luck. Come on!

A book club feedback event will be held next month. Only those with a contribution of 300 or more can participate. Let's get excited.

What are the conditions required to achieve Xiaoca? Why are there no conditions written down?