Apocalyptic Nanny System

Will zombies mutate in the future? From the existing chapters, it seems that the personal power system is not strong, and we boldly speculate that there should be no mutant zombies. However, it is quite comfortable to read so far. It is hard to find good apocalyptic articles nowadays. I hope the author can persevere. I will vote for you. Come on!

I have been saving up for several days and finished listening to it in one go. It will take a while, so please update it soon! The writing is good, the story is logical, and the characters have souls. Unlike some books, the supporting characters are just tool men. They mechanically complete the task and then go home with a box lunch. The conflict design is inexplicable, just like lining up to die. I don't comment much on the writing, and I'm not a cultured person. At least I think it sounds very comfortable in voice, and I don't feel it's verbose or has any inexplicable language problems. This is a book suitable for old readers like me. Come on, stick with it!

Update soon! The recommendation ticket has been given to you!

The first time I wrote a book, I started mainly out of interest. I was a little worried that I wouldn't be able to persevere, so I wrote 100,000 words before starting to publish the book at the starting point. Fortunately, everyone's support allowed me to persevere. I published 110,000 words in more than 20 days, and now I have almost 120,000 words in my archive. Yes, I have more manuscripts in my archive, haha. I don't know whether the score of this book is good or bad, but I haven't been reminded to sign the contract and I have hesitated whether to take the initiative to apply. After thinking for a long time, I finally decided not to take the initiative to apply. I just let nature take its course. The current score is more than 200 recommendation votes and less than 180 collections. My favorite thing to do when writing novels after work these days is to open the Writer's Assistant again and again to see if there are any recommendation votes or comments. If there are any recommendation votes or comments, I will be very excited. If not, I will be a little disappointed.

There are too few comments, and I have a lot of essences that I can't use. I don't know how many there are, but I definitely still have them. I hope all readers can leave more comments and come early to stay tuned! Give me more opinions so that I can continue to improve, thank you!

The Apocalyptic Baby Dad system has been updated with more than 200,000 words. To be honest, the results are terrible. I summarized my first book writing experience and discovered several problems that led to this miserable situation. 1. Insufficient expectations. 2. The plot is too bland. 3. The subject matter of the article is somewhat outdated. 4. Not enough fun. 5. There is a lack of points that can generate controversy. Although there are not many readers after such a long time, there is not even one person who criticizes me. It is really deserted to talk about a few posts. After learning from the pain, I decided to make profound changes, so "The Rise of the Light of All Races" was released. I feel that the above points have been greatly improved. Everyone is welcome to take a look and start a strange journey with the protagonist. Oh, and also, this book will be finished soon, and the following content will be briefly introduced, which can be regarded as a conclusion to this book.

It's well written, but it's a pity that the data doesn't work

Chapter 76 contains repeated content, the author should pay attention!

Boss, please post the book and read the chapters. Chapter 6162 is messed up.

This book is pretty good, I have collected it. I won't talk about the writing style. At least I think the rhythm is quite acceptable. By the way, the author should have an outline. I personally think that if you want to write a long apocalyptic novel, it is essential to improve the power system. (This depends on your outline and how many words you want to write) However, I can't guess yet whether the protagonist will take a single-target route or a team route in the future (after all, he has to take care of his own children). I also need to think about whether the power system will be based on superpowers or technology. If the power system is not improved, the fighting aspect will not be the highlight of the novel. Then I am afraid that the daily focus of the protagonist's family must be improved. Or maybe the protagonist can't change the world, but he can save his family, and then travel around in the apocalypse to witness various places, which is a bit like a travelogue. These are several of my guesses and suggestions about the author's future plot clues, but in the end it still depends on how the outline is written. Finally, I would like to emphasize that don't change your outline easily, and don't make drastic changes to your outline just because of readers' suggestions. That will easily lead to collapse. You can only improve it based on the outline. This is all I can think of for now. If there are any suggestions later, I will continue to make them (all are personal guesses or suggestions. If there is anything wrong, please don't complain.)