All Heavens Unite

This book begins with Snow, and really expresses the author's own flavor. As a Snow fan who has read it four or five times, I personally feel that it is more reasonable to insert a character into another author's book. It is really not an easy task. It can be said that it is the number one Snow fanfic I have ever read! The scene where the protagonist appears in front of the person wrapped in the snow and slaps him in the face is the second most comfortable plot I have seen in my 17 years of online writing experience. It seems that if a protagonist from the heavens system appears in the snow, then he should be Ye Qianqiu. The latest plot of Jiang Ye seems to be very comfortable so far, and the combat power system is also very reasonable. Every world you go to is the top combat power in that world, but it breaks through a level at a reasonable time point and just suppresses this world. It may seem too coincidental and deliberate, but in fact it just makes the readers feel comfortable. The author doesn't have to worry about the awkward situation of the protagonist being too powerful to write about, and the protagonist being too weak and the readers not having the patience to read it. I don't quite understand why this book's score is so poor. It's been a long time since I've had a book that made me feel so comfortable and satisfied. In my opinion, this book is second only to Fantasy World Travel among all the astronomical novels. It can be said that it is in the middle. It may be the pacing problem in the early stage that has deterred many newcomers. I just read the author's previous book and it felt like it was just a piece of cake. I didn't have the urge to read it a second time. But the authenticity of this book surprised me, and the progress was so great that I wondered if someone had changed. I am sorry that the writing is not good and the writing is a bit confusing. I will offer you 10,000 coins. I hope the author will work hard 😆

This level is fine, as long as you have enough time

Can you please update it quickly? To be honest, I prefer authors like you. I would rather have more words than stop chapters when it comes to the wonderful parts. Although it requires a lot of starting coins, it is really comfortable and you will not be depressed because of the broken chapters. To be honest, people who read books at the starting point don't care how much they cost. I hate reading books that are fragmented and dragged out. If you feel unhappy, you will immediately delete the book. This chapter by the author is really enjoyable. For other books that are so out of chapter, I think it is really bad character.

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I accidentally saw this book. After I saw the copy of Da Song, I couldn't stand it. I flipped through it again and had something to say. The Song Dynasty Volume is indeed well written, with good plot and good characters. I think it proves that the author can make a living in online novels. Because I saw that the author has his own ideas, and writes new ideas for the same thing over and over again. Otherwise, I usually can't stand it because I get tired of reading it. There are too many similar copies, and I don't want to spend money on repetitions. When it comes to the Tang Dynasty volume, the problem arises. In fact, no matter what the theme is, there must be an outline to continue it. But the Tang Dynasty volume was very fragmented for me, and the plot was lackluster and uninteresting. At least I basically skipped through it. The protagonist must have a purpose when traveling through the dungeon. There is no explanation for what Goldfinger is. Looking back at the next copy, I knew that it was basically like that. Others had already written what the author had written, so I would not read further. When I watched it, it was free of charge, so I gave 100 points as a reward. I feel it is a pity that I typed so many words. I am looking forward to the author's next novel. I suggest that the author outline the plot before writing, at least the character settings, cheat settings, power lines, the general direction of the plot, and the choice tendencies before, during and after the dungeon. If you make these preparations, the results will definitely be better than now. Rather than choosing which one the reader wants to see, it only makes sense if it fits the plot direction.

Really, let's not talk about history, but looking at the present, there is a saying that I don't know whether to say or not. No matter what happens to Yang Guang, Fu Junzhuo, who assassinated him, should be killed directly. Personal opinion, and Fu Cailin should also be killed directly. Let's talk about whether it is moral or not. At least the national righteousness is opposed, and the country is different.

When I see it now, my impression is that the protagonist started in the first grade, then went to the second grade, then to the third grade, and ended up back in the second grade. Even in the first grade 😒, he flew up and down and wandered around the world of low martial arts. He was already a land immortal, and he was still torturing monsters in the novice area. It becomes boring if you watch too much.

By the way, I just remembered a question now, why does the protagonist have such no sense of crisis? Every time I ascend, do I have to be treated as a mortal or seriously injured? Each time it takes about three years to recover from the injury. But aren't your qualifications getting better and better? The time should be shortened, right?

I have always fully ordered it, but the latest copy is Wulin Gaiden and I am really not interested. You are now in the realm of Yuanying. I don't understand what it means for you to go to the world of Wulin Gaiden. I have no interest in Wulin Gaiden. I thought that after writing a person, you should be in the snow or a mortal cultivating immortality. But writing Wulin Gaiden is quite disappointing. I will wait for your copy to be finished.

The Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty soared to the Shooting Condor 😰 This is so outrageous

What I saw before was okay, but when I got to Da Qin, I couldn't stand it. A Taoist who doesn't pursue the great road will engage in political intrigues 😅

The author mentioned in the article, "Everyone in the world says that Qin is a country of tigers and wolves." The author refers to Shandong scholars as a disdainful name. Is it inappropriate? You must know that Qin is called a country of tigers and wolves, and it is not without reason that it is regarded as a country of Di Yi. The Qin State was often oppressed by the Wei State at the beginning of the Warring States Period, but later rose up to fight back against the Wei State. The Wei State had professed its vassalage to the Qin State, but the Qin State repeatedly attacked the Wei State. This was the reason why the Qin State was regarded as a Di Yi. Later, Lord Wu'an appeared and killed hundreds of thousands of Zhao soldiers, drowned hundreds of thousands of people in the Chu State, and killed more than a million people at his hands. He was famous for his fierceness. This was the reason why the Qin State was regarded as a country of tigers and wolves. It would be too selfish to regard the name of Qin as a mere slander. It is true that since the Warring States, there has been no country of benevolence and righteousness in the world. It is common for benevolent and righteous kings to massacre cities and destroy countries. But if we really want to talk about which country among the seven countries is the least benevolent and moral and the most unscrupulous, it must be Qin. It goes without saying that the six countries hate Qin, and they also despise Qin. It is inevitable that the six countries will rebel against Qin, which is the general trend. It is inevitable that the Qin Emperor will cut off his limbs and be overthrown by others. Qin unified the world, but it could not unify the hearts of the people. What Qin cannot accomplish will eventually be accomplished by those who come after. It can only be said that one drink and one peck are all determined. What Qin did over the past two hundred years laid the foundation for its rapid rise and unification, and also laid the foundation for the subsequent separation of people's hearts.

Another author was deceived by Confucianism and became lame. Millions of people died in the Sui Dynasty? ? May I ask the author, do you know the population of the Sui Dynasty? Although the Sui Dynasty was rich, its total population was only about six million households, and how many million people died? ? Does your country still need it? Do you still need to collect taxes? Do you still want an army? Millions of people have died. They have probably rebelled long ago. What kind of aristocratic family are you waiting for? And Yang Guang was born in the Yang family, one of the Twelve Pillar Kingdoms. It can be said that in the Sui Dynasty, aristocratic families took turns to be emperors. Don't you, the author, understand this? Are you reading Sima Qian's Historical Records? Or is it from Sima Guang?

Generally speaking, the hammers and hammers here and there are bearable, but it's really disgusting to have to do this kind of rebuilding every time I wear them.

To be honest, your introduction is simply trying to persuade you to quit.

I just feel uncomfortable watching it. I always feel that the protagonist is so awesome that he has gone to heaven several times. He is still beating children in these Jin Yong martial arts worlds. It is not fun enough to watch.

Regardless of what is said below, I hope that someone in Yue can escape from the disaster. If Linghu remains stubborn like the original, please kill him! I am still short of some food and drinks. I hope the author will wield his knife. I would like to express my thanks!

The author is still able to grasp the pulse of the times. The trick of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger 10 years ago can still be imitated very vividly now.

I felt a little uncomfortable at first, what the hell? An old guy insists on showing off to the juniors, speechless

I'm curious why no one has ever written about a Chinese boy in martial arts.

The previous ones are okay, but I can't stand it when I see Qin Shi. I especially can't accept being led by others. You are hundreds of years old and you can't have any strong attitude just because you like the author.

The next volume is written in the snow. If we compete in the world, replace the feudal monarchy with a republic, and build on Confucianism, Buddhism, and Taoism with the knowledge of the world, and all living beings share the destiny of heaven and earth equally, can we eliminate the immortal fishing method?

Are there any astronomical stories with plots in the snow? Please recommend.

After finishing it, this book has been on the bookshelf for more than a year without realizing it! I only read three chapters of this first book... And it has been on my bookshelf without reading it. Until recently I wrote "In the Snow", and I originally only wanted to subscribe to read one or two of them, but it turned out really good! ? I have only watched about 130 episodes of the original Snow in the Snow, but it did not hinder me at all. I also watched the fanfics you wrote in the Snow, and Qin Shi Mingyue, which is also very good. Although I have not watched Qin Shi Mingyue... I still watched it with gusto 😊 (Finally, I am looking forward to the author's next book, and I hope the author can write better and better)

The writing is quite good, but unfortunately, in the end, the frame is too big, too empty, and has no sense of reality. At the end of the writing, it is all about the universe, the end of the universe, reincarnation on the other side, the long river of time, etc. In short, it is too empty. In addition, it is good to blend into each story, but don't confuse your own goals. The protagonist must have a very clear main line, just like a string of beads. Secondly, the various settings should also be listed in detail, so as not to slap yourself in the face. Finally, for some descriptions and settings, please check the information first, and don't write them down on the fly.

It is recommended to add more female protagonists in new books in the future. It seems quite monotonous to be single in each copy (personal opinion, please don't argue)

This protagonist is addicted to making disciples. He will make a disciple whenever he sees one.

The last plot was poorly written. After accepting the protagonist as his apprentice, it immediately felt like there was nothing to watch. But there were no eunuchs before. Give you a good review!

As someone who doesn't usually watch anime, I have watched all the plots of Qin Shi Mingyue and One Man in various Zhutianliu. This book touches on many aspects, such as the direction of farming, the direction of sect development, and the direction of national development. It gives me the feeling that it has been written, but not completely. The same is true for personal pursuit of truth. Except for the first world, which is very detailed, the other worlds basically rely on the protagonist to show off, and the actual behavior of seeking truth is too deliberate. But most people can find what they want to read in the book, about farming, about the development of sects, about fighting, including various fighting scenes, and about seeking truth, including various classic scriptures. It can be regarded as a book that instinctively quenches thirst.

3 Monthly passes plus finessing!