Pokémon: Global Arrival

Why does every holy pig's trotter have to carry a few burdens, especially girls? It's so annoying

I think we should be ruthless against elf hunters and make them famous so that others will not dare to have ideas easily.

Elf technology is developing too fast, and there is something wrong with the information the protagonist knows. He even grabbed the data card, but he doesn't even know about the mythical beast. There are too many NTs in China. It would be okay if they don't get involved with the protagonist. But if they get involved with the protagonist, they feel that the protagonist is useless... There are also domestic system problems. Starting from the time when the elves first landed is a new angle in a book like the elves' arrival, but it is also a problem. The protagonist is completely individual, and it is difficult to grow up compared to those with power. Then there is the heroine Bai Fumei. How straight and backbone is the protagonist? She was bullied for so long and even dropped out of school because of her. The heroine did not express any opinions, and the heroine's father did not express his opinions either. It was poisonous.

In the early stage, a special chapter was used to describe grabbing information cards and information books. Later, even Lugia was not clear, only that it was a mythical beast. Ye Lin, the protagonist doesn't have much impression, so she just takes her in and takes her to the secret place It's a bit mindless to lead a girl. Also, Pokémon is a popular game IP. Even if it is officially removed from the shelves, it is in the top 16 of the competition, and there are mini dragons, it should be rich and powerful, but it still looks like it doesn't know anything, and it doesn't even know how to cultivate it. It's unreasonable. It is better to just ignore the background and only the protagonist knows that the Pokémon is coming.

Hehe, a unique elf fanfic, I hope the author writes well ^_^♪

I'm a bit confused, the protagonist seems to be unable to defeat others.

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Why is it that after half a year, the protagonist is still a loser?

Has the author considered using the power of elves for people's livelihood in the future? For example, grass-type elves growing food should be able to resolve some of the conflicts between humans and elves.

This elf technology is developing too fast, and the protagonist's elf can't defeat the poachers at all. He was attacked several times, but he still let it go.

Domineering

After reading the beginning, are you going to become the Ghost King?

How did elf technology come about? The elf had just arrived and the elf ball hadn't appeared yet. Hunters had the technology to capture the elf.

The author did not even understand the most basic relationship of restraint

The idea is good, but there are many settings issues. For example, the protagonist Tianhu never stopped training at the beginning, but any poacher was similar to him or even better than him. As a world where elves have just appeared, most people who know Pokémon will not become poachers. It can be said that poachers have almost no advantages. With the speed of technological advancement, given half a year, what other Pokémon besides mythical beasts can beat humans?

What is the operation of wearing a mask and letting people put the winnings on the card? What's the point of wearing a mask? It is better to go to the local police station with a valid ID card to get it.

First of all, the character design of the protagonist is great and almost non-toxic Then the common poisonous points in Pokemon novels: the elves are repeated and facial makeup is non-existent. There is a certain rationality The character design of Pokemon is basically restored and there is no poison. Then the emotional scenes mentioned by some people are just small interludes. In comparison, there is almost no space, so there is no poison. The first design of the original work is perfect, but the second design is a little bit a bit less. It does not affect the The realistic problems between humans and elves in it are also very real and immersive. It can be seen that the author has a certain degree of thinking The only regret is that the book is too short and it is not popular I thought for a long time. Maybe the reason why it is not popular is that newcomers and novels are not easy to write It is really a pity.

Good guy, I gave you the Stone of Light vein for free. As expected of you, you slipped away.

It's okay in the early stage, but useless in the middle and late stages.

What are you writing? A mess of people, one moment they say they want to get the big rock snake, and the next moment they don't want it?

It's a good book, but it's finished, which is a pity.

It's a good book, but it's already finished. What a pity.

This is the elf urban novel that makes me feel the smoothest when reading it.

Miss Dream Demon? I remembered my username this PM Missed

This book is already biased, very biased. I can only say that the development up to now is not what I wanted to write. During this period, I was busy taking the driver's license test, and the idea was extremely immature. The rest of the story will probably be about letting myself go. I'm sorry for my book friends.

In fact, you can fight back. If you want to be a complete world country, it is impossible to attack other people with high-end equipment, let alone in the villa. Writing about the country may be 404, but don't ignore it too much and affect the plot. High profile has the benefits of high profile Low profile also has the benefits of low profile.

You can also strengthen the pig's trotters. You have worked too hard to train yourself and the elves on the pig's trotters. Then the external performance of the pig's trotters cannot keep up with your hard training, forming a huge contrast. Well, this problem may make people look a little awkward. It may also be that the enemies that appear in your bar are too strong. They all train the elves at the same time. Although everyone has their own opportunities, the protagonist is not bad. There is no need for the protagonist to think very weak Finally, come on! Author

It's finished and I hope the next one will be better.

The book is really good, please come on