Daming Duckweed

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The writing is very good, and the transition from baby to adult goes too fast at the beginning. It's a bit strange for a man to dress up as a woman. You can try to add some other elements to make it less cliche. The ups and downs of the plot are okay. I have collected it.

Reading this introduction reminds me of the glory of the Ming Dynasty. The cover is also beautiful and the author's writing style is also great. To write such an article, you must be very knowledgeable about history. Good luck, author💪💪

1. The title and introduction of the book are both indistinguishable, in line with the historical style, and quite literary! 2. The writing is really good! Great! It has an ancient rhyme and bookish feel to it, and it's also good for fighting scenes. 3. The paragraphs are also good (´-ω-`). It is comfortable to read, neither too long nor too short. 4. In the first chapter, the transition from a baby to the capital more than ten years later is unnatural and feels a bit abrupt. 5. The idea of ​​women disguising themselves as men is a bit old. Come on (✪▽✪) I'm optimistic about you (´-ω-`)