Rebirth of a Billion World

The first problem: I have no desire to read the book when I see the title. The second problem is that I read the introduction and found nothing attractive. For example, the highlight of Douluo is that the disciples of the Tang Sect are reborn as Douluo. This is the highlight. I didn't find anything attractive about your profile. You have to write something in the introduction. Otherwise, if you don't find the point that attracts readers to a book that is as bland as water, no one will read it. The second thing is that your writing style is okay and it is very comfortable to read, but there is too much foreshadowing in the first few chapters, which will lead to no one being willing to follow the article. Only a master can do the mediocre foreshadowing because there are people who are willing to follow it. The function of the three golden chapters is to write out the conflict. The point is, I didn't find the main thread of your book, that is, what is the main thread of this book... Sorry, I may be a bit blunt, but this is my only idea.