Taoist Priest Is Not Bad

There is an underworld in the book, but there seems to be no such thing as reincarnation. Since the protagonist is allowed to come to this world to practice Taoism and become an immortal, it means that it is possible to become an immortal in this world. It feels like the author may have mixed in some weird stuff

Originally, I usually just read books, but after reading the book reviews, I feel that I am not worthy of the author. I feel that the tastes of many readers have been "trickled" by the white text. This book has a very unique idea of ​​combining the system of cultivating immortals with a strange worldview. In addition, you can also see the author's views on some unfair things and thoughts on human nature. I think many people may have been hit by a pain point🤔? Chapters 83 and 84 really made my scalp numb. Of course, this book has a lot of shortcomings, but when I saw the third chapter saying that the protagonist is fat, and that reading novels and pictures is not just asking for abuse, and saying that I think your system of cultivating immortals is not good enough for me, I really enjoyed these very superficial negative reviews. I think the most important thing for people is to be self-aware. I hope the author can maintain a good attitude and finish writing what he wants to write. Suddenly he forgot that this is the starting point, hahaha 🤔.

Generally speaking, it is very good, but the writing feels inconsistent with the times. It is said that ancient people spoke like modern people, but the text is filled with a lot of modern people's rhetoric, which looks awkward.

Great book! It's not an exaggeration to say it's a book of fairy herbs! Let's talk about the advantages first: the characters have clear roles and each has its own characteristics. The story is strong and the plot is coherent. The writing is smooth, not like a newbie. The settings about monsters are eye-catching! The author should have worked hard on setting the background of the novel's story. Worthy of praise! 👍 After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages: practicing the Thirty-Six Methods of Tiangang is too easy and relaxing! The effect displayed is too ordinary! Take Zongdi Jinguang as an example. With such a great magical power, let alone achieving it, even if you are just getting started, it shouldn't be a problem to take a hundred miles at a time! Not to mention other magical powers, it feels unworthy of its name! Also, as of now, there is no mention of mana! When you use magical powers, you consume your own aura! I think this setting is very problematic! According to Taoism, aura is the embodiment of one's own will and soul! Belongs to sex! But if you cultivate your nature but not your Qi, this is unjustifiable! The word Qi can be said to run through everything in Taoist practice! Qi is the source of Taoist practice! Therefore, I think this setting can be changed. Finally, it seems that until now, the protagonist has no killing power that he can use. I think we can master the Five Thunders of the Thirty-Six Methods of Tiangang. Personally, I still like Lei Fa very much. Among the three thousand Taoist methods, Lei Fa is the most respected!

After reading a few chapters, Jiang Feng said: Strength is responsibility. It feels weird, what does it have to do with them that the protagonist's power is cultivated by himself. I don't think they are kind people! To put it harshly, this is their own responsibility. Why should they ask others from the moral high ground?

The world setting should be an extreme contrast between black and white, but you can't tell the difference between black and white when doing things The night is full of malice, while the fire is warm and bright. The general trend should be the dark category. The small situation is that human beings have defeated monsters, demons, etc. And gained local advantages. However, the human world is still dark and full of darkness. Civilian life is miserable. The overall situation is dark and the small situation has no light. It is a desperate world The law enforcers work hard to fight monsters and abide by the rules. They are no-nonsense little people. He opened his mouth to talk about the world situation and the future of mankind, with a posture of asking for help for mankind, and talked about monsters, devils, ghosts, and monsters. He always wanted to be reasonable, always trying to see the big from the small, and to see the wind and thunder from the small, but the writing was not enough, and it sounded like he was talking to himself The protagonist does not have his own three views. I followed monster hunting, blindly practiced JB, and pretended to think I was very stylish. I learned some miscellaneous things, but I didn't understand the fundamentals. I was just messing around, stupid and shallow, and couldn't take the initiative to deal with the darkness. I could only rely on the author to lead me to the light. The boundaries between immortals and mortals are blurred, and the conversation between immortals and mortals is blurred. A large number of events involve mortals, but they abide by the rules that do not involve mortals, and finally break the rules. It is unclear how much immortals and mortals know each other, and how to deal with them. There are a lot of modern words and Western fantasy words in fairy tales, which make people play. The writing method is deliberately mysterious. The author said that monsters and ghosts are the products of distortion. The author's writing method clearly shows how these things are distorted and generated.

This fucking thing is written inexplicably. It is full of four words to make things mysterious, foreshadowing, reasoning, and mystery. This writing is nothing. There is no trace of foreshadowing, no logic in reasoning, and mystery turns into nerves. It's really a good "idea", a "good writing style" and a "so silly"

If you can't protect what you want to protect, if you can't persist on what you want to persevere, and you keep walking in other people's righteousness and rules, what kind of truth are you cultivating? A child's friend has turned into a ghost. He is conscious but has not done any evil. If he kills him, the bad guys will not be able to kill him. He must abide by the rules. Is this cultivation? Let's go see Su Zhou

I deserve to be thrown into the street. I can't stand it at the beginning. If nothing else, the sentences are at least fluent. Don't talk about foreshadowing. The sentences are not fluent and the foreshadowing is useless.

The greater the power, the greater the rights, the less the responsibility

It's not without reason that this book is lukewarm. I didn't bother to talk about it in the first chapter. I didn't grasp the key points in the first few chapters. What the readers want to know at first is not what organization you are forced to join. After you introduce the golden finger, you should write about how to use the golden finger to practice and strengthen yourself.

If you are not a great god and don't have fans, don't make false claims. The plot has very poor coherence. The logic is barely adequate. It is recommended to sort out the outline first and improve the power system in stages to promote the plot. You can try to use 4 to 5 The different levels of small plots pave the way for the power system to promote the core power system of the big plot. There is also a money system. The plot can be old-fashioned. Power and money must be rigorous. Otherwise, there will be no hope for this book. The first three chapters must show hope with the power system, whether it is low-end power or core Xianxia power. It needs to be foreshadowed. The early plot should not have too big a turning point. The core system is completed with small plot foreshadowing and the main line is established before proceeding to the next step. Xianxia novels do not necessarily require killing monsters and upgrading. For example: Fang Xiang's writing method of early farming skills application in the world of cultivation. Sleeping Qiu's Immortal Road Supreme's skill-power fusion method! Any writing technique can improve your novel by more than one level. You have to be patient when writing novels. The above mentioned are all basic. There is also the issue of talent and emotional intelligence and perseverance. It is understandable that you can't expect things when writing the first book, but I still recommend closing the second book because you can't make money and waste energy. The above are all good advice. You can delete it if you don't like it. The last word! First, sort out the detailed outline of the first one million words! Write your own stuff. The author goes to take a look at Xuanchen Taoist. Look at how clear and smooth the writing is in a book written by someone who has never gone to college. These things can be learned.

As a time-traveler who has traveled through time for several years under the guise of a Taoist priest, he knows that this is a world with gods and ghosts, and he is considered a Taoist. In a Taoist temple, he constantly insults the Taoist Heavenly Lord. Is this what a normal person does? Even if you don't have the heart to follow the Tao, don't you understand how to seek advantages and avoid disadvantages? Sure enough, I shouldn't have clicked on the one recommended by the daily guide, but it was also because I read the one recommended by the Painting Demon Master. How can this be compared?

Is it possible?

I can't stand it anymore, I'm going to die, and if I don't say anything about the female ghost, who else will die if I don't. She obviously doesn't understand anything in practice, but in the third chapter her mother understands

After reading these chapters, it makes me think about studying. It always reminds me of my mother. Okay, let's study. Come on!

After reading five or six chapters, I'm still confused 😴

It's not that the writing is poor, it's that the author is too pretentious and has not been severely beaten by society. Writing such a composition that requires emotional reading on this commercial writing platform! It is conceivable that how many people will have the patience to continue watching... The prostitutes can't control their mouths and make complaints.

They are all written very well, why did they all get in?

The idea of ​​the article is quite good, but I was too anxious after that, just like the outline, it was unfinished.

It's been almost two months, and you're still not feeling better?

Are your eyes healed? Can it be updated?

Shouldn't we gather three souls and seven souls at the beginning?

Recommended by others, the author joined in as soon as it came in 😰

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I can feel that the setting is very good, but the author's writing skills are not good enough. He wanted to write in a mysterious and funny style, but unfortunately the level is not good enough and it looks very abrupt. The plot in many places also looks very awkward because of the author's forced arrangements.

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Entering the perspective of the protagonist, being forced to confess is hate, and being forced to join is resentment. The author handled it too poorly, and then joined naturally as if there was no such thing. It is difficult to calm down 😡😡😡

Knowing that the three golden chapters of online articles attract readers, the first three chapters are always setting the stage for digging holes.

Reply, I've traveled through time and still feel so aggrieved