Ball Maker

1. The opening. It is not the more common rebirth flow or system flow, but a tricky way to allow the protagonist to accumulate the first pot of gold (it seems that the plug-in ends here?). The second chapter introduces the theme of the book, but the transitional chapter of the third chapter feels too long, unless it is to introduce the future heroine? Otherwise there is no point. In summary, in terms of the three golden chapters, the plot is not compact enough. Except for the protagonist, the other main characters have probably not appeared yet, and there is only one goal. 2. Writing style. It feels like a relaxed sand sculpture style, with a little bit of flair from time to time. Except for the transition, which is a bit watery, it's okay, and it's not a novice. 3. Plot. At present, it seems that the theme of the book should be that after the protagonist makes the first pot of gold, he establishes a grassroots team and enters the professional field, supports women's football, creates community football and campus football models and injects blood into the team. The pattern is relatively large, and it is different from the mainstream sports literature where talented players/talented coaches struggle - become famous - get slapped in the face. It can be regarded as a ni shi stream. However, the layout is large and requires the description of group portraits. The rhythm of switching between different characters' perspectives will test the author's writing skills. It remains to be seen how effective it will be. 4. Disadvantages. First of all, the update is too slow. With this theme, there are only dozens of chapters and the layout is not fully spread out. Updating 4k a day is completely unable to meet the demand. It is recommended to fatten up before killing. In addition, the transitional paragraphs can be streamlined, the main plot can be expanded, and more emphasis is placed on the key points and conflicts of the story. Although it is not a slap in the face, it still needs to be a little more refreshing. The above are some personal opinions and views. All book friends are welcome to contribute.

After reading these twenty chapters, I have some small opinions, which I wrote for your reference: First, this book is relatively slow to gain popularity and does not follow the so-called "three golden chapters" routine. I still have my own ideas. Second, it is also a very special football article. The protagonist is no longer a player, and there is no system. It can be said to be a group of Chinese people who love football. They always insist that the most important thing in football is people. Third, if you read it patiently, you will find that the author's writing style is not bad. There are many jokes that fans will understand, and the writing style is also moving in the direction of lightheartedness. Keep writing, the mudslide in sports writing

All book friends are welcome to sign up, lest the author is too lazy to think of a name 🤓 Recruiting supporting roles, including but not limited to blue-collar players, referees, Football Association officials, reporters, fans, uniform staff, etc. The registration format is as follows: Name: Chinese name, both at home and abroad Place of Birth: Province and city in your country, nationality + city in foreign countries Gender: Role: Basic resume: ps can be a rich second generation who will go back to inherit the family business if the business fails, or a once genius boy who has been neglected after major education and is pursuing his dream again.

1. The start is not attractive enough, not to mention the possibility of causing discomfort to Milan fans. I think one chapter is enough for the first three chapters. After all, it just brings out a goal. 2. I hope the author will pay attention to the details. In fact, the transitional plot can be passed quickly. Since the protagonist is an investor, the whole book should be centered around him. How to get started in community football, how to connect with professional football, and any difficulties. These can be written. Even in terms of the development of Chinese football, we can develop whatever methods can be used to promote it. 3. Due to the relatively low starting point (the theme of this book is like this, it can't be helped), there are relatively few famous players familiar to readers at the beginning, and there is a lack of sense of substitution. Let's see if we can briefly write about the top leagues, national teams, and even occasionally mention the World Cup and European Cup during the transition of the plot. 4. The protagonist unfolds in a relatively large pattern, including women's football, grassroots football, professional football, and possibly even campus football in men's football. How to switch between multiple perspectives will test the author's writing skills. If the narrative is straightforward and the time passes quickly, it will easily become a running account. I hope the author will pay attention. For example, when writing about women's football, don't just write about the record. It should be about the difficulties after the acquisition, what role the protagonist played, and the improvement in record. For example, in recent chapters, the women's football team has been asked to design an image. It can be about training, venues, attention and other areas that can be solved. Finally, I hope this book will be popular. After all, after carefully checking the information, there are really not many non-routine football articles without low-level mistakes 🙂

Chapter 7 Huang Ju (Huang Juan) - Huang Zhijuan Former member of the women's national football team, returned to Conghua to engage in youth training after retirement. Chapter 8 Guide Yang - Yang Feisun Guangdong football legend, the main forward of the Guangdong team in the 1950s and 1960s. After retiring, he took root in the Guangdong football youth training for a long time. Unfortunately, he passed away due to a heart attack in 2013. Chapter 13 Yang Chen - Yang Chen Former member of the national football team, he won the Chinese Footballer of the Year in 2000, and then played for Frankfurt in the Bundesliga from 1998 to 2002, and St. Pauli in the Bundesliga from 2002 to 2003. After retiring, he worked as a coach and sometimes served as a commentator. Shao Jiayi - Shao Jiayi Former member of the national football team, he played for Bundesliga side Munich 1860 from 2003 to 2006 (relegated to Bundesliga 2 in the 2003/04 season), Bundesliga side Cottbus from 2006 to 2011, and Bundesliga side Duisburg from 2011 to 2012. After retiring, he returned to Beijing Guoan to engage in competitive training and other work. In 2017, he was selected into the first batch of 9 "Bundesliga Legendary Stars Hall of Fame" stars. Chapter 17 Xiang Jianhuang——Huang Jianxiang Famous football commentator. Chapter 18 Hu Yingbin - Hu Yanbin Famous mainland singer. Chapter 19 Ronglin Tam - Alan Tam Famous Hong Kong singer, member of the Hong Kong star football team. Chapter 24 Zhen Maosu - Su Maozhen Former member of the national football team, he won the Golden Ball Award of League A and the title of "Philips Football Real Man" in 1996 and 1999, and won the Golden Boot Award of League A in 1996. After retiring, he went to England to participate in a senior coaching class organized by the Football Association. After that, he returned to China to start coaching work. In the novel, he directly came to serve as the head coach of the Green Onion Team. Chapter 25 Shi Yuntao - Zhang Yuntao Lizhi Hai - Li Zhihai Dai Guanjong - Dai Xianrong Wang Zhiyi - Huang Zhiyi Lu Lin - Lu Lin Yang Pengfeng - Yang Pengfeng (Yang Feisun's nephew) Feng Junyan - Feng Junyan Wen Xiaoming - Wen Xiaoming Xu Dexin - Xu Deen The above are all players of the Chinese League One team Guangzhou Medicine. Chapter 27 Qi Wusheng - Qi Wusheng Former member of the national football team, he coached the domestic football team for a long time after retiring. He coached the national football team from 1994 to 1997, but failed to qualify. In 2006, he coached the Guangzhou Medical Team. Chapter 28 Yin Lihua - Yin Lihua Hubei football legend, the main goalkeeper of the Hubei team in the 1970s and 1980s, started coaching in China after retiring. In 2006, he coached Wuhan Yaqi team. Chapter 29 Chu Zhi——Chu Zhi Zhang Weijun——Zhang Weijun Zeng Cheng——Zeng Cheng Liu Chao——Liu Chao Luo Hao——Luo Hao Song Zhen——Song Zhen Peng Bo - Peng Bo Cui Fafa - Cui Fafa (this has not changed) Min Jin - Min Jin Xue Jianye - Han Jianye Han Fei - Xue Fei The above are all players of the Chinese second team Wuhan Yaqi. Chapter 34 Xu Genbao - Xu Genbao Former member of the national football team, he has been coaching in China for a long time after retiring. He was awarded the best coach of the Chinese Football League A in 1995 and 1998. After 2002, he basically quit the front-line coaching job and engaged in youth training. Chapter 36 Wu Lei - Wu Lei Current member of the national football team. He started his career in Shanghai East Asia in 2006. He was selected as the Chinese Footballer of the Year in 2018 and currently plays for the Espanyol team in La Liga. Chapter 37 Wu Qunli——Wu Qunli At the age of 22, he was selected as an amateur player for the professional team, but he became famous all the way and was selected for the national football team. After retiring, he worked in youth training. Jin Zhiyang——Jin Zhiyang Beijing football legend, the main midfielder of the Beijing team in the 1960s and 1970s, and has been coaching in China for a long time after retiring. Zhao Dayu——Zhao Dayu A former member of the national football team. In 1986, his domestic athlete career was interrupted due to fractures of the tibia and fibula of his left leg during a training match. In 1988, he went to Japan to join Mitsubishi Heavy Industries. After retiring, he became a Japanese citizen, changed his name, and engaged in coaching in Japan. He passed away in 2015 due to the deterioration of advanced liver cancer. Xie Yuxin - Xie Yuxin Former member of the national football team, he started coaching in domestic and Macau football after retiring in 2001. Peng Weiguo——Peng Weiguo A former member of the national football team. After retiring, he left football to join the business world. In 2006, he obtained the coaching qualification certificate and engaged in coaching. Hu Zhijun - Hu Zhijun Former member of the national football team, engaged in youth training after retirement. Wei Daxia - Wei Qun Former member of the national football team, he left football after retirement and later served as deputy general manager and team leader of Chengdu Xingcheng. Boss Zhuang——Zhuang Yi Liaoning football legend, has won awards such as the top scorer in the Asian Youth Championship. After retiring from the professional league, he established the Jinzhou Zhuangyi team in 2001 to participate in the second division league, and later invested in domestic football for a long time. In 2018, he signed up for the Chinese League Two with the Shenyang Urban Construction Team he invested in, and scored a goal on June 3, becoming the oldest player to score a goal in the history of the Chinese Professional Football League. He has served as Chairman of the Liaoning Provincial Football Association since 2019. Han Hong——Han Hong A famous mainland singer.

Since the first three chapters were rewritten, most of this chapter was said to be deleted by me, which is a pity. Wonderful messages from all the book friends

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Since the new operation officer has no experience, the first activity is to upgrade the character to a star (protagonist). Any subsequent activities are welcome to be suggested by book friends ps You can only apply after July 10th

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The chapters written by Bai Qi were pretty good, but the commentary was a bit awkward and there was no sense of immersion at all.

Author, if you haven't learned anything else, just learn to break chapters accurately according to the number of words? In many main plots, you just end one chapter. It feels like doing a mission in an RPG and just having a result? This brings about another problem. The main plot is too short, but the insignificant transitional plots are only enough for one or even several chapters. The structure is fragmented and you have no idea what you want to write. For example, in a national football game, it's okay if you have people from the team selected, but it doesn't matter if the protagonist is the one to explain it. To put it bluntly, it's just a superficial plot. Suggestions. . . Cut the books and write the next one carefully. I don't want to be the operating officer anymore. I'll do whatever I want.