
The Perfect Start Removed the Brother's Supreme Bone
完美之开局取下了弟弟的至尊骨
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 4y ago
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PerfectShort review
When I first watched Perfect, I felt both hatred and pity for Shi Yi. I hated his actions at a young age, and it was a pity that he was defeated by the False God Realm, resurrected from the dead, and finally paid off his karma. In the battle in the Void God Realm, Xiao Shi Hao himself said that he might be cold. I didn't expect Shi Yi to use Supreme Bone instead of heavy pupils. As soon as he used it, I knew that he had made the basic mistake of a villain and wanted to be cold. Sure enough, Shi Yi was defeated by his own arrogance. I also regret not being able to witness the elegance of "Double pupils are the road to invincibility, why need to borrow other people's bones" (quote). After being resurrected later, the three brothers fight against the clones of the Six-Crown King, fight at the Imperial Pass, and kill the Fallen Immortal King. Their splendor is unparalleled and attracts attention. It can be said that except for Shi Yi's childhood, I admire him everywhere. And at the beginning, the author deleted the thing that disgusted me most about Shi Yi, and immediately made me feel that he is pleasing to the eye everywhere, and it is just right to use it as a template for the protagonist. I just happened to be attending an event, which made me notice this book again that I had put in my favorites but forgot about. I will read a dozen chapters to make an apprenticeship. I hope the style can have the same feeling as the red-haired monster. At least the battle scenes of the red-haired monster are really easy to describe. Let me take a look first——
PerfectShort review
The time point of the protagonist's time travel was chosen very "cleverly". It was just before the mother's bones were taken out, and there was no time to stop it. Just like the trajectory of the original work, it was passively involved in the cause and effect with his brother Huangtian Emperor Shi Hao. Double pupil is the path to invincibility, why need to borrow another person's bones! Shi Yi told the clan elders in the main hall that he wanted to return Shi Hao's Supreme Bone. It can be said that he hit the point very well. The protagonist should have such courage! However, when Shi Ziling returned and seriously injured Yu Rou, Shi Yi reluctantly removed the Supreme Bone. However, Shi Ziling only extracted the Supreme Blood in the end, but left the Supreme Bone in Prince Wu's Mansion, which felt somewhat deliberate. The plot of Shi Yi entering the palace to ask for the holy medicine is also slightly embarrassing. The author chose the protagonist Shi Yi and the time of travel. In fact, this opening can be said to have set the difficulty for the author himself, which is commendable for his courage. Some readers will definitely be dissatisfied with the handling of the plot at the beginning, but having said that, it takes into account both the resolution of cause and effect and the safety of blood relatives, so it is considered to be handled reasonably. I look forward to the author writing a different and wonderful story!
How can I let myself go by writing about it? . How could a ruthless man become an Immortal Emperor? Is the Immortal Emperor so worthless? ? In the later stage of Perfection, it was clearly written that he and Ye Fan were quasi-immortal emperors who came against time and space to find the Emperor of Desolation. You just changed it. Since they are fans, at least they must abide by the original setting 🙂
The Emperor of Heaven VS Wang Anlan, author, do you have a lot of imagination?
I read it and it was well written. He is also a qualified author. Just too little. Let's see it next time
I'm watching it now. The content is good. Come on.
My point of laughter is so high that I was even made laugh by you upstairs.
I feel that if it were me, I would definitely lick more than you. If I were to travel through time, I would definitely go to the Holy Ruins.
There are very few Perfect World fans. First of all, I would like to support the author, and secondly, I would like to point out some of the problems I have seen. First, returning the bones is not just a matter of wanting to return them. Reconciliation will leave sequelae. Otherwise, in the original work, why would almost all the tribe elders side with Shi Yi? Because Shi Hao has been abolished. If there are no sequelae to return the bones, the Stone Clan will not leave two supreme beings alone. Secondly, the protagonist is a time traveler, and he has such a deep relationship with Shi Yi's mother? Are you dragging your seriously injured body to seek medicine? Third, I don't think Shi Ziling did anything wrong when he injured Shi Yi's mother. You dug up other people's bones and you think you've paid off by returning the bones? It's like you broke someone else's son's leg, then took him to the hospital to pick him up and let it go? Finally, I hope the author will get better and better.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? What is the age of this protagonist? I was 4 years old at the beginning, I was 6 years old after wandering around the wilderness for half a month, I was 9 years old when I went home to practice for two and a half years, and then I was 15 years old the next day when I went back to have a drink! ! ! ! The problem is that I read it back and forth 3 times, and what I wrote is that I went home and had a meal of Jiefeng wine and woke up the next day and I was 15 years old? Are you Conan?
Shi Yi didn't even have to wash his mother, he just went to kill Xiao Shitou.
I found a problem. As long as it is Chen Dong's novel, the time traveler is always inferior to the indigenous protagonist. It's so strange.
In fact, anyone who has read the entire Perfect World knows that this is actually the second world of Emperor Huangtian. Everything happens in the past, and everything is unchangeable. The entire Perfect World has formed a perfect circle of time. You can only fill it in, but you cannot alter it. Those who want to alter it. For example, An Ran, the Corpse Immortal Emperor, and the three Future Fighting Immortal Emperors all indirectly accelerated the growth time of Erzhoumu Huangtian Emperor. Sometimes I really admire Zhoumu Huangtian Emperor. Under such circumstances, he can fight the world alone. It can be said that one person is perfect, and a group of people can cover the sky.
I have read it twice. Overall, the writing is pretty good, but there are some places that are not very good. Let me talk about the timeline and some issues. 1. The part where the empress wants to kill Shi Yi is really poisonous. Let's not talk about whether the empress comes from the future and can kill him. Let's talk about the relationship between Shi Yi and Emperor Huangtian. If the empress dares to reveal her murderous intention, she will definitely die. If you want to kill Emperor Huangtian's brother, whoever doesn't will die. Besides, the future Shi Yi will not stop him. Don't tell me that Shi Yi has no future now. 2. In the part about marrying Ye Fan's daughter, I want to say that Ye Qingxian seems to be Ye Fan's granddaughter. I don't know clearly. I didn't understand it very clearly. Then I really want to curse when I marry Ye Qingxian. The difference in seniority is a hundred and eight thousand times, for no reason. I won't say anything when you call me Senior Ye Fan. After all, Ye Fan is the future incarnation, but if you call me Ye Fan's father, isn't it too weird? In the current timeline, Ye Fan has not even been born. In the future, you will be worshiped by the Immortal Emperor and call Ye Fan Father-in-law. Doesn't it seem weird to you? After all, Ye Fan, who is of the same generation as Emperor Huangtian, will have to respectfully call Shi Hao "Senior, come to you" in the future. . . In general, these are just a few bad points, the rest are pretty good. I read it twice, but I just can't stand that the future empress wants to kill Shi Yi. No matter what she does, she shows murderous intent towards me, so I decided to let him know what it means to respect seniors.
In fact, I think the first paragraph was a bit dramatic. The protagonist's mother removed Shi Hao's bones, and then Shi Hao's father must have been very angry when he saw it, and beat the protagonist's mother. Moreover, this was originally the protagonist's mother's fault, but the protagonist punished her on the spot. Taking out the bones made it impossible for Shi Hao's father to step down. Shi Hao must have suffered more pain than the protagonist's mother. However, the protagonist's actions transferred the conflict to Shi Hao and his son, making readers feel that it was Shi Hao's father's fault for beating people indiscriminately. Although there is no big problem logically, I just feel a little uncomfortable. Why did you take my child's bones? In the end, it felt like it was my fault that you returned the bones.
When I saw the title of the book, I suddenly had an idea. One of the key points is that Shi Hao struggled to survive after being taken away from the Supreme Bone. This also became the motivation for him to become stronger in the early stage, and later the Supreme Bone was reborn and became stronger. If Shi Hao's original natural potential can rely on the Supreme Bone to become a Supreme, after Nirvana, his potential will undoubtedly be stronger. Without this experience, would Shi Hao become weaker? If other novels can eliminate the protagonist and take advantage of various opportunities to steal the protagonist, but in a perfect world, if Shi Hao is treated like this, then the dark turmoil will have to be carried by himself, which is basically indifferent. Moreover, if Shi Hao is killed, it is basically impossible for readers to buy it. Moreover, Shi Hao is the soul of a perfect world, so he has to either be friends with him or lick him, but he is really not qualified to be a master. If it's a brother's expense, it's probably necessary to have a good relationship. Eliminating hatred is the most important thing. But whether Shi Hao can become as strong as the original without hatred is open to question.
Xiao An An An only encourages you 😏😏😏
In the original novel, when I saw Shi Yi snatching bones, I felt that his whole family were villains.
The author may have his own tricks. You must first subscribe to a chapter before you can speak, but we don't have to say it. So the author will make you vomit black blood in the first ten chapters, forcing you to comment, and then trick you into subscribing. It's a good trick. I call him an expert🙂
When did the girl with double pupils become so awesome? She is the willow god who plants trees, her father is the nameless immortal emperor, and he was also the human emperor in the ancient immortal period (scrabble). In the original novel, a person who was not even an immortal at first was blown away by you.
Perfect
You An Da has a great brain, good writing style, and the story is very exciting. Although it is a fan, it has written a different perfect world, which is very enjoyable to watch. It is as passionate as Dong Ge's perfect world! I hope to work hard and update in the new year and achieve better and better results!
Why can you be forgiven if you make a mistake and admit it? Is there something wrong with your values? Those were his own flesh and blood, and he almost died. Just because you want to return the Supreme Bones, you should be forgiven. Are you kidding me?
Dear family members, after some advice from me (and a reward of 2,000 points), the author promised me to try to add four more chapters tomorrow. He is really dedicated!
Shi Yi is really trying to persuade people to quit. It's disgusting. It's not going to be over until Fourth Master kills him. The male lead has just been passed on and he has no emotional problems. He insists on keeping people to persuade him to quit.
An Lan
It would be nice to add more details. Let me see how many chapters you write. Especially when An Lan is on the repeater and Yu Tuo saves me, I am so happy 😁😁😁
The author is very self-aware. He gave up decisively when he knew that he could not fight. It is really decisive and worth learning 👍. I also hope that the author will promise me to complete the update as soon as possible.
I don't understand at all what your purpose is in running to cover the sky? Knowing that the Weird Clan is powerful, they didn't rush to spread Taoism in the early days of the myth to make themselves stronger. Since ancient times, emperors and emperors have been qualified as immortal kings. It's just that they didn't know the way forward after they attained enlightenment, so they had no choice but to kill themselves. The protagonist imparts the insights of the Red Dust Immortal to them, and then everyone brainstorms and still can't break through and live six or seven lives? On the other hand, what did the protagonist do? I've been fishing in troubled waters, but I just got an Emperor Master and then it was gone? ? I was speechless after watching it
Make it to chapter 30! The timeline is messed up! Chaos! Chaos!
There are so many flaws that I don't know where to start. Anyway, this book seems reasonable, but in fact it is reasonable and unreasonable at the same time. It's so fucked up, but it's still quite interesting. By the way, it's really fun to have sex for free on the official website.