Please Don't Make Mistakes

[Thank you for your support] Record everything that supports and accompanies you when making mistakes When writing a book, every collection, comment, recommendation, and heart-warming word is an intangible companionship and support. This post will record everything that supports and accompanies this book. Thank you everyone.

The story is okay and the writing style is pretty good, but the background of the story, the scene switching, and the description of the characters are a bit unclear.

To be honest, I actually read two chapters of this book when I first invested. I personally felt very good about it, but I basically stopped reading it later because I was also writing a book and then preparing for the college entrance examination, so I didn't have time to read the book. In fact, I exchanged votes with him, and then I got an eight-coin lucky bag. Today I suddenly found out that he @ me specifically. I was a little surprised. If nothing else, the subscription will be available tomorrow. I wish the author this book will be a hit!

(June 8, 2020, this is a very memorable day. I am ranked 3rd on the fantasy newcomer list and 16th on the overall list. I cannot describe my mood at that time, because I feel that this must be a miracle. Although 20 minutes after being on the list, I disappeared from the list because the contract was completed, but I have no regrets, I am very satisfied, and I am very grateful to my book friends for their support. I can only shorten two words in a thousand words! Thank you)

This book seems to have appeared in the comments of my post before. Due to personal reasons, I was unable to make the appointment on time, so I apologize. First of all, I also like Qin Shi, but unfortunately the mystery is too deep, so I had to give up for a while (a few years). When I came back, I found that the plot had not made much progress, so I had a subtle thought in my heart, "Should I write a fanfic?" Although I had this idea, I didn't write it, not for anything else, just because I didn't have the ability! But you, Mermaid, are different. You have profound writing skills. You can find a little foreshadowing in various details. It is no exaggeration to say that the layout of the paragraphs is like clouds and flowing water. If possible, I hope you can realize the dream of Qin Shifan, a fan of Qin Shi!

It's only been ten years since I raised it, and there are very few updates to my works.

The story is novel, the characters are interesting and vivid, and the writing is brilliant. Come on big~

The store next door is on the street, so come and advertise here. Should be no problem? 😭😭

I haven't been idle since the looting skill. I encountered things everywhere, so I gave up in order to give the pig horns a rest.

Make a mistake: Do you divide papers? Empty world: I definitely divide it. I have one space and one universe. I don't care about the "number of spaces". I have a hard time finding things by myself! Make a mistake: Do you think I feel it? I mean that feeling! Kong Jie: Just a feeling... Not bad... That's enough. Kong Jie: You are different from me. I slowly develop the world view little by little. You are the one who will be the king at the first damn moment. The key is that after the bombing is over, there are still big and small kings. I suspect that you bought the dealer. Make a mistake: I have decided, starting from 2020.6.18. This is the story that you and I have to tell {"NickName":"Xuan Tiandao Chief External Envoy","UserId":343693072}

He is really a very attentive author who tries his best to do everything well and is also very willing to help others. There are not many such authors. Readers, please cherish it 🌹

Chased the investment and made a bet, although the amount was not large. Let's just take it as an expression of my support for the mermaid. Come on Mermaid! There has to be one new author who can make it through, and I sincerely hope that that person will be you. 😜

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the plot of the story is good and the character setting is okay. However, the writing level is slightly lacking. I hope the author can write better and better.

It's ok [although I think the name Boxue will make a scene, after all, Boxuelou is deeply rooted in people's hearts], but it may be due to my interest in this type of book, and it still has less appeal to me, but overall it's good, and I hope to keep up the good work! Hold on! Update update👍

It's okay, it has a dry and chewy feel like grain. The vein skeleton is good, but then there is only the vein skeleton (funny) I have nothing to do to argue. The protagonist can try to flirt with ordinary people many times and make them sorry. At least 0.5. After saving up to 30+ all attributes a few more times, participate in events to gain abilities.

Come on, mermaid line (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia Let's discuss it, let's get a big one with 17 points. I feel a little uncomfortable if my coins are not spent in round numbers (;_;) Hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Why does it feel like Conan?

The plot is too compact and lifeless, so that the characters throughout the book are like robots repeatedly living a programmed life.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Come on, Mermaid, I am still reading your book even though I have no time. It's really great~~~ Come on! ! !

[Looking forward to the follow-up] It's a good book worth reading, I hope it can continue to be so. The setting of Goldfinger is also very novel, and each story feels good.

I originally added it to my bookshelf after randomly looking for a few books to invest in at the end of the month. Today I unexpectedly discovered that they are quite good.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Can the author check the text carefully? The names of Lu Xueqing and Ding Xiaoyu are always wrong.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~