Your Majesty's Face Doesn't Look Good

What are you writing in such a mess? After reading a few chapters, I didn't want to read anymore.

Three posts are so miserable. I'll give you a book review after I finish reading.

After seeing the 8th picture, I couldn't help but come here again to write a comment. Well, this time it's about the system. I personally don't think it's a big problem, but it seems that many book friends just don't like intelligent systems. And if they encounter an intelligent system, they will be persuaded to quit. I don't know why, so if someone really says that this system is a point of retreat, then I will give the author a small suggestion. Make the identity of the system clear. Speaking of this, I remembered a novel. It seems to be quite popular, as it turns the system into the protagonist's girlfriend. As for the specific title of the book, I won't go into details. Everyone must be aware that it is the "National Development..." The author of that book did this, completely downplaying the point of an intelligent system. Although some people say that it is difficult to accept the system becoming a heroine, don't you think this is also a relatively novel point. He at least made that innovation. (After all, that book seems to be quite popular.) If the author wants to imitate other works in the future, I suggest adding this. For example, if this system now gives people the feeling of being tsundere, then you know, you know all these plots. All kinds of settings were brought out for him. At least it's a kind of imitation And I feel that the author's writing style is pretty good, at least it's not brainless. Although I don't recommend you to read the first picture because his writing level is indeed very good. And I am more inclined to this author, it seems that he is the vest of an old author who has fallen on the street. Because of his writing style, except for the first picture, his writing style is indeed not poisonous at least. Not to mention how beautiful it is, at least for a person like me who is not well-read and talks a lot, really, I think it is pretty good.

But to be honest, I don't mind readers reading the first chapter, and you can read the second chapter and onward. I don't recommend you read the first chapter, because after reading so many time travel stories, no matter what the routine is, you will have a sense of aesthetic fatigue.

However, the progress of the plot as written was too slow, and it felt a little unclear.

The first part of the book seemed foggy, but the second part was so enjoyable. Even though he knew it wasn't an enjoyable article, it was really enjoyable to read. It's really like this, it's really a good book. It's really hard for me to read something like this when I'm short on books. My eyes have always been very poisonous, but this book is really good.

Really, I feel that this author is really like the vest of a certain big boss. The writing is really good. Although it is not very clear at the beginning, you will feel that in the end, although it is a little unclear, it still feels good to read. When you think about it later, you don't know what's so refreshing about it, and you don't know what's so refreshing about it, but you just feel it's so refreshing. It gives people a feeling like finding a piece of gold in a pile of sand.

And in the next few dozen pictures, there was no trace of the system at all. It felt like I was being drawn into it, and I gradually got better while reading. It's been a long time since I've had this sense of immersion in a book that I can sink into.

This author became a fan first.

Emmmm, I can only say NB, it's so to my liking.

It's definitely a vest. The author is rough, please be lenient if you confess.

Hey, forget it, I feel like this author is the vest of a certain big shot.

Could it be that the protagonist wanted to become a foolish king? I left the scene without hesitation.

What did you write? The text structure is basically up to standard, but the plot is a mess and gives me a headache.

I can't tell what's wrong. Maybe the lines are too messy and I can't understand it.

Come on, author with encouragement

Come on, writing history is not easy. I got three recommendations. The data shouldn't be so bad.

A palace that you can enter if you want? And can you get close to the dragon bed? It seems that I have said before that this is a low-level martial arts game with so many poisonous points in every chapter that I can't even read it.

This emperor is quite cowardly.

A gentleman does not stand under a dangerous wall. . This emperor doesn't take his own safety seriously.

Awesome, only one person said it in the comment section. I knew this book was really bad without even reading it. The author started the book with no outline or ideas at most, but if you try to apply it to ancient times and think it should be like this or that, that's the author xx. His thoughts will always change depending on where you sit.

I almost thought I was watching a Qing palace drama. If Bai Ling was not the heroine, there would be no need for so many scenes. If she didn't accept the scenes after too many, she would be scolded and given away as a daughter. The system is also useless and gives martial arts skills for one-time use.

It's not just the first few chapters that I really don't want to read further. Assassinating the emperor and punishing the nine tribes is a good thing for you, but you are just killing the three tribes because of your beauty 😅

Already collected! Will take time to read the masterpiece! Come on, author!