Plane Development Plan

I can't stand it anymore. I don't know what I'm writing about. Every time I go to other worlds, it's relatively short. It's fine, but the main reason is that I don't know what the protagonist is doing. He sometimes takes the technological route and sometimes the martial arts route. He steals the technology from other worlds and leaves it there. After the factory in the real world started building factories, I thought we were going to develop the main world, but the protagonist still went to other worlds to wander. I can accept the protagonist going to other worlds to practice, but he still stole technology. Aren't the previous technology reserves enough? Learn the black technology behind from the previous materials. Basic technology should be enough, but I don't understand why the author doesn't focus on developing it in one world and then feed it back to the main world.                                                   It looks boring here and there here and there, I can't see what the main line is, and I can't understand what the author is writing.

Write about the robots in Public Enemies Mechanical

Marvel's writing was ruined. Watching a movie and traveling to the port to meet the professor? To save someone even if they don't agree with each other? The most important thing is that you have been transformed. When people ask you what your future plans are, you just say return to your country? Put yourself in my shoes, would you be willing to let him go back to your country? If you don't control him, just treat him like a guinea pig every day.

I don't understand why we need to build a super-tech factory in reality? You yourself are a person with a big secret. Do you want to live a life of being monitored all day long? Or are you planning to give up on the real world? If you want to make money, haven't you already made money by using your brain to buy lottery tickets and speculate in stocks? If you need a base to produce the equipment you need. You have the ability to travel through planes at any time. You can also find a safe plane to build your own base!

No one in the universe writes pure science fiction. In the end, all astronomy will either turn into fantasy or magic. Has pure science fiction perished?

If you could time travel, what would you do? What is your goal? I've read dozens of chapters and still don't understand what the protagonist's goal is? Immortality? Collect beauties? Rule the world? To make yourself stronger? Or travel to every world? No matter what your purpose is, you should travel a lot across the world! Why do you keep collecting information in the low-level martial arts world and start a company in the real world? There seems to be no limit to how long you can travel. If you want better technology, you can just look for it in other movies. For example, if you want the antidote in Resident Evil, you can go directly to a world like Star Wars and find someone to develop it. In the real world, you just have to spend enough money.

Isn't the protagonist good? ? ? He was actually drugged by someone else and fucked by a strong woman... And it was still unconscious? ? ………………………… Protagonist: After practicing for many years, I have reached the peak of the Immortal Emperor... I don't even feel like I can break through to the next level... It seems like I'd better practice the magical power of cause and effect? ? ? Protagonist: There is still a period of unfinished business... Let's see... It's her... She already has children... But I'd better bring my own woman and child back...? ? Protagonist: This is the realm above the Immortal Emperor...

After reading the first dozen chapters, I wanted to complain about it. You can travel through time at will, not to mention traveling through high martial arts and high fantasy. After all, the starting point is too low, and the protagonist is on the side of technology and martial arts. Why don't the second world just go to a world like (My Superman's Ex-Girlfriend), and get a weakened version of Superman's power for nothing. Or the Superman potion in (Supervillain), you can just wait at the vent to get it. (Super power goes out of control) I won't talk about these, after all, the writing is bad. I don't understand why I don't get superhuman strength first, and then slowly learn martial arts. Isn't my brain more powerful and I can't learn faster? You don't just go to low martial arts and medium martial arts casually, you can also touch high martial arts. What the author wrote gave me the feeling that he was consciously suppressing the protagonist. This golden finger breaks down too easily. If you want to travel through time at will, it's best not to suppress the protagonist's IQ and strength. Otherwise it would look very awkward and hard to stand.

Damn, wasting my time. Really, all I know is running around fighting, not knowing the principles of exploration, and just wandering east and west in complete confusion. Then the finale

It was okay at first, but then it was all about pretending to be a moral role model. About 30% of the whole text was about criticizing others for their immorality and how great and upright you are. You should make the novel more interesting.

Xiao Jiang is not a person who likes to provoke others, but if the other party takes the initiative, he will still tolerate it. He looked at the beautiful Wang Yuyan and said: "Girl, do you choose to enter the brothel or serve the uncle? I can handle it easily. As for this group of people, Bao is not only blind. I guess he will need help from others even for eating, drinking and defecating in the future. There is also your so-called cousin, who will be disabled by my martial arts and become a useless person. What do you think?"

In the real world, you have to write about you and you are not short of money, you can smuggle and copy stocks and you have enough money, you are patriotic and you go directly to the chief to send information, you have to write about urban superpowers, and you have to be surrounded by beautiful women, and they all love the protagonist. How can readers have a sense of empathy? Anyway, I don't see so many beauties around me, including other people's women. If I meet beauties, there are already people who have taken advantage of them. It is impossible for the world to be without you.

This book can be renamed: The Virgin Bitch's Time Travel Plan. The Virgin Bitch has been playing it all the way since it was put on the shelves, and it has such a powerful golden finger but it develops like a sewer rat. In the words of my hometown, I love and fear it. I am so powerful but I care about this and that. The cultivation system is completely messed up. In the middle and late stages of this book, I suspect that it was sold to a studio.

Brothers! Poison test completed! This book is just one word! What a mess! Maybe your daydreams before going to bed are more reasonable and planned than this! After Chapter 40, I couldn't watch it at all. I started to eat the setting and the character of the protagonist! After Chapter 500, the coin-buying author knew that there was nothing he could do to save himself, so he restarted himself! All I can say is that you are awesome! I haven't watched the next one! It's still too poisonous! Dead

I take it for granted. Is Captain America's serum so awesome? After two months of studying, he is as good as a master of science, and a stranger with no background is asked to join us in building a nuclear bomb? Are you going to reveal state secrets like this? Okay, I'll continue reading, I thought it was a small flaw It will be more ridiculous later. Technology has finally come to the fore, and suddenly it becomes martial arts. What's the point? What's the use of individual soldier ability? Talking to foreigners is neither right nor foreign, it doesn't have to be like this, there is a way to do it... It's very weird As for martial arts, I haven't watched it yet, so I guess I'm just messing around all by myself. Balabala pretends to be useless, the supporting characters lose their minds and are shocked everywhere. After finishing the plot, they get the good stuff. Talking about plane planning, it is actually a battle of wits and courage between the protagonist and the air. Goldfinger is very awesome, but he neither explodes troops nor climbs the technology tree. He uses a hammer in the east and a stick in the west.

The title of the book is Plane Development Plan. I have read so many infinite travel novels, and this one is the messiest one. I hit here and there with a hammer, and I can't see any plan at all. I got a bunch of unused technology, and built several useless forces. What was the plan? The protagonist has evolved through the main plot, but he still doesn't understand it. Martial arts? Science and technology? Magic or immortality? The first hundred chapters are actually still readable, but later on I start to enjoy myself crazily, bring in private goods, and completely let myself go.

The protagonist always sets up his moral standards, which is just a trick. Are you not virtuous? Readers can tell by looking at your behavior and what you do. If you talk endlessly, you are a piece of garbage.

In the first picture, he appears inexplicably in a strange place, and then goes to rescue people inexplicably. But the Americans inexplicably give the protagonist a serum?

Chapter 1: Persuading someone to quit. He dared to help a stranger intercept two fierce men when he just traveled through time and didn't even understand the situation. This is no longer a holy lady, but a retard.

It's a bit interesting. I found that the post I posted before was deleted by the author. It was the first time in my life that a post was deleted at the starting point. I will post another post to commemorate it 🙂

Didn't I say how favorable Americans could be towards China at that time? Give you a serum? That is a US national project not private. . . . It's like, would we identify with the Japanese of that era?

The protagonist is inexplicably raped in Tianlong. What does the author want to express?

I read 5 chapters of this book, and I was confused after reading the golden three chapters. I can travel back and forth when I want, and come back when I want. There are no missions, no goals, no restrictions. I can go to any movie I want to go to. If I don't have a goal, it's enough to get the Captain America serum. In the subsequent chapters, I time travel to other movies. I don't understand why he has so many things.

Why do you like to write the protagonist so stupid?

Why do you feel like the author just came up with it? Not to mention that your real world is so messy, but even in the copy you wrote, there is no plot. Even if you want to reap the benefits, your plan is too messy.

When will a new book be released? I can't read the back of this one, it's too confusing.

It's a mess, I can't see where the plan is at all, and it's so weirdly changed.

When will the new book be released, and what's going on with the group?

I'm speechless. How long the protagonist's ability can travel to reality is just an instant. There is no need to rush to develop some technology. If you travel a few times and become an immortal and a god, you can just bring it with you. You don't have to worry about anything. You just know how to put poison and water.

Is the author here? Why is the group gone?