Douluo Dalu: The Tyrant Descends

Although it is an online novel, it should not be taken seriously, but the protagonist you wrote does have incorrect views and has lost his humanity a bit. For example, when it comes to killing the maid, I know you described it this way to highlight that the protagonist is a villain, but the decisiveness and dark character of killing cannot be shown by killing a maid who broke a cup. When you write a book, you have to take responsibility for the characters you write about. That's all.

The author hopes that you will either kill that Mo Feng quickly or enslave him. Does he still want to play a second protagonist while sitting still? I don't want to watch the two main characters, Mo Feng is dead. Or enslaved, I'll come back and see.

In fact, the overall look and feel of this fanfic is quite good. Although it is a dark novel, if everyone has a dark side, it will cause discomfort when reading it in the early stage, but you will feel nothing after reading it. However, the author seems to have described the protagonist a bit too pervertedly. Especially in the chapters where Xiao Wu died, Xiao Wu was killed, his meat was given to Tang San to eat, Xiao Wu's blood was drained and mixed into red wine, and the protagonist drank it every day. He also gave Tang San several boxes.

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So far, the protagonist of this book is a decisive and decisive person, but I think there is something wrong with the shaping of some supporting characters. For example, Qian Daoliu, in my impression, would not do the things in the book. The original text is: "cry like a child." This gives me the feeling of an old man trying to be cute and malicious. I'm not criticizing the author, I just hope that the author can be more delicate when handling the plot. After all, the author is still a newcomer! Come on 💪If the author is free, you can read "Douluo: Ten Thousand Phases of Douluo" (this is not an advertisement). I personally think this book can be said to be a very good dark novel among Douluo fanfics. The protagonist in it is more decisive and decisive than in your book, and the writing is excellent. Some plots make people forget to leave. Finally, I hope the author's book will get better and better results!

Prosperity, democracy, civilization, harmony, freedom, equality, justice, rule of law, patriotism, dedication, integrity, and friendliness. Socialist core values, this book is a non-stick

To be honest, the so-called fan fiction is to add, modify and then create based on the original text. The author said that this novel is a semi-dark novel. I think this is no longer semi-dark, but an anti-social darkness that completely violates humanism. For example, Xiao Wu, eating Xiao Wu, haha, don't you know that Xiao Wu is a hundred thousand year old soul beast that transformed into a human being, that is to say, she is already a human, and at best she is a half soul beast.

If you traveled through time, would you be a person with upright views or a person who kills people easily?

Why is this book condemned by so many people? The so-called violation of morality is nothing more than you imposing your own realistic values ​​​​in the novel. Some people think that eating Xiao Wu is cruel, but Xiao Wu herself is a soul beast, just because she has transformed, she is beautiful and cute, if you have feelings for her, can you change her nature as a soul beast? In Douluo's world line, humans and soul beasts are at odds with each other. It's just about who is stronger and who is weaker. The soul beasts also eat people. If you were bitten by a dog, would you still say that I treat you as my relative? Don't bite me? Some people say that values ​​​​are bad, then will you set things right? Can you use bad content as a negative teaching material? Does anyone force you to do what is written in the book? They are all people with thinking ability. No one stipulates that the protagonist must be a good person and do good deeds. In the virtual world, what does the ending have to do with you? Isn't it better to live a good life in reality?

Author, you are too cruel. Xiao Wu offered a sacrifice to the protagonist, then chopped Xiao Wu into pieces and gave them to Tang San to eat. The blood was also mixed with wine for Tang San to drink. Oh my God, you are so cruel.