The Five-Power God of the World of Gods and Ghosts!

Will you die if you don't eat? The female character who was known to be the reincarnation of an immortal, but one chapter passed and she awakened? Preparing to capture the dragon, and then the dragon cut off its tail to survive? In the first few chapters, even the protagonist is eager to practice the skills of the armored corpse. Hey, guess what? Only the little disciple himself has defected!

Sigh... The author has to change the outline or change his job because of your way of writing the plot. As other book friends said, forget it if you let your apprentice run away for the first time. The second time the other party was too old to offend him, but at least he had Tian Qing Shan Guo as a guarantee, so he tolerated it. You ran away for the third time, so why don't you just watch the ball? Do you understand that it's only a matter of seconds?

How to put it? It's a big start at the beginning. A hundred-year-old ancestor is still invincible when he comes out of the mountains and a rural village. It's better to just start slowly without a background. At the moment, he's a bit full and still being abused.

Literally, stupid villain!

After Chapter 169, did your grades go downhill? How dare the author write that time travel is man-made? If you write something like this, the fun of this book will be completely gone.

Chapter 169: Time Travel Suspense, I really don't understand why this kind of thing is done. Goldfinger doesn't talk about the female immortal, but gives a black hand to time travel and gives the disciple a destiny identity. What do you want to do, author? If you think your grades are not good, just cut it off and just open another book. There is no shortage of eunuchs in the starting point, so why bother to shit!

The poor performance is not unreasonable. Every major event is written in a very unsettling way. The first time was the rebellion of several apprentices, and then a protagonist template was introduced. The old Mo Leng let the apprentice with two swords run away, and Mrs. Ning was reincarnated as an immortal. The protagonist finally got a good fruit and reshaped his body, which was just a little better. Then he immediately caught the dragon and wrote another one to let the dragon run away. He is really a stupid villain who can't do anything.

I saw Chapter 169. Damn, it's a waste of my money. I don't want to read it anymore. What else can I do to travel through the clouds of doubt or play something? If it doesn't work, just be a eunuch.

Apart from scales and bones, a dragon tail only has about ten kilograms of meat? It's so special, Mang has more meat than it 🤫

All booked, please rate. Excessive procrastination, too many repeated sentences, medium typos, and too many psychological descriptions. I don't know which book this is from the author. At least the world view and plot are generally not bad, but the writing still needs to be improved. I paid for the number of words, but found that there were so many repetitive descriptions, and sometimes the plot only advanced a few sentences in two chapters, which made me feel a bit tired of aesthetics.

This novel feels like there is no distinction between priority and priority. I want to eat beef, but you made all the cow into beef ramen for me.

As mentioned before, all things and human nature are insignificant to heaven and earth. Today, I will give you good fruits, luck and the like 😅

It's all booked. Overall, the main character in the plot basically has a clear card. The character of the old devil created by the author in the early stage has become more and more dull after it was released. Especially in the few incidents he participated in, he received very few benefits. The other is one chapter, one-third or more of which is the protagonist talking to himself. The author doesn't understand that the selling point of your book is the cool writing mode of "The Side Sect Monk, I Want It All". The plot is also written to make the protagonist act more recklessly, instead of being as plain as a supporting character. In short, I hope the author can stop being impetuous and write with heart. The evaluation of the book is currently a bit dry.

They are all halfway to becoming immortals. Why is there so little information above the immortal level? Isn't it written at the beginning that the protagonist is a demon who is half-way to becoming an immortal? Is it written in the air?

I will spend 2 coins to tell you about The ancestor with means, each disciple has a clamp on his body, and he leaves a clear limit. He can also kill three people who have never taught the true method, and one of them runs away. The capital he usually uses is used to make noises.

This book is definitely a eunuch. It has not been updated yet.

Protagonist

E In my impression, the masters of the side sect are not cultivators, but they are free and easy immortals. There is no need to respect destiny in everything, just be a big boss. The sect has countless disciples, similar to the Hunyuan Patriarch in Shushan or the Crazy Demon Lord in Gu Zhenren. When I read what you wrote, I felt like a stallion. There are people in heat everywhere, 1 The Demon of Six Desires 2 The Ghost of Sex 3 The Burial Ground Lineage 4 The One from the Zheng Family And where are your disciples? Big brother, you are a side sect boss who wants to pass on the legacy of being a lone ranger. Aren't you handsome? A man who pursues his own ambitions with great arrogance and arrogance.

The golden finger of the protagonist should get an identity, join the court, be a county magistrate, issue edicts to improve people's livelihood, become a Qingtian Grand Master, and other things, it feels easier to get good results How much can the protagonist collect by running around alone now? But the body of the protagonist in question is like this, and he is still an old evil who is about to get cold. Well

It's over. This book is gone.

Is the author afraid that he won't be able to sneak into the palace and work as an errand after being circumcised?

What a waste of money, you little chicken with an appendix

Chapter 190, two cute big eyes, this sentence makes me sick 😰😰😰

I was reading it very well and suddenly the book was finished three thousand years later. . . . . The eunuch's wife suddenly

The ending was a bit abrupt, and the meaning was still unfinished! ! Come on, I hope the author can achieve better results! !

Going downhill, ink. Water. Apart from corpse refining, is there anything else I can do? I feel annoyed when I see the corpse refining💩

The gap between the early and late stages of Tai Sheng's Heart is too big. 😅

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I didn't want to look at it anymore, the investment failed.

Can it be updated faster?