I Really Don't Want to Be Lin Fan, the Top Student

Let me go, have you studied Bawen since elementary school? I was shocked.

It is recommended not to write about starry sky civilizations outside the earth. The protagonist is too young.

The author obviously did not engage in big steel, all kinds of chaos, no main story, technology, aliens, martial arts, academic masters, and other weird things. To be honest, it would be very popular if I wrote a story about a little boy who is a master of learning, because the foreshadowing is the appearance of a book about learning to be a master, and the writing style is not bad, but if you write everything randomly, the book will completely collapse.

I left. It looked fine from the front, but suddenly I felt something was wrong. There were a lot of poisonous points in the back, just... Quite bald 😭 I just wanted to read an ordinary book about science and technology and the power of the country 😭

All kinds of bloody plots are mixed together, the old man + the system + the outsider + the inexplicable senior brother + the little girl he falls in love with for no reason + the little girl's tragic life experience + high technology + aliens

It was originally a good book, and the author's writing was quite innovative. Unfortunately, the increased attributes are basically useless except for learning things quickly. For example, appearance +1, after so many years, the male protagonist turned out to be an ordinary person that others forget in the blink of an eye. How is this different from the word count of water?

It was really well written in elementary school and was heartwarming. Unfortunately, it dropped sharply once I reached junior high school. All kinds of conventional urban routines came out. Yun Lei was even more toxic. It was a pity.

People who read this are so embarrassed that they have cancer. Forget about writing urban literature well, but insisting on talking about ancient martial arts and aliens. I really want to read these, so why do I find this kind of book?

Don't write science fiction. Don't write science fiction. Pretend to be a top scholar. If you raise an opinion in that book, you will be permanently banned. You can't do it in this book. No, no, no.

In fact, I directly learned how good the writing is, 100% fairy grass. Now?

Here and there, here and there, there is no theme at all. The author's aa

I couldn't bear it when I saw two hundred people! It's so poisonous, the subject matter is good, it was well written before junior high school, and then it became hard to describe in one sentence. I subscribed to the whole book, but I couldn't bear it anymore and had to buy another one just to wash my eyes. It's really not good to return a book from the starting point

It was okay in the front, but when I saw Yun Lei, I felt like it was not okay. There's too much to worry about. It tastes wrong.

This novel is simply... I can't stand it after nearly 300 chapters. Is the author finished writing? It is said that it is a master of academic writing, except for a perfect sentence, there is basically no detailed description. The pen and ink are all used in daily life, but there is nothing exciting about it. Realism? It's obvious that he was stupid as a child, but there are very few descriptions of his true counterattack in studies. The plug-in is almost invisible, so it's better to just set it up in one step. The funniest thing is the appearance plug-in. It looks ordinary in elementary school and junior high school? Don't you know that handsome guys have been handsome since childhood? You still have to add aliens and inexplicable teacher settings, so it's just hard water?

It's still in elementary school, a little immature, but the value is authenticity. Later, in view of the author's vision and three views, he couldn't express a true academic master, so he filled it with fantasy and science fiction, and it collapsed.

I don't know what is written behind it

It looks so embarrassing. Can a junior high school student cause trouble like this? Is it so easy to get into a school with semi-military management? Moreover, how many times has the protagonist looked in the mirror since he was a child? Is his appearance so ordinary?

I thought it was about cultivating academic masters, but I didn't expect it was about urban cultivation

Elementary school was very good, but after that it became crooked and fell into a complete mess.

"The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good." Come on!

I seriously doubt that the author has an outline? Also, the arrangements made by the protagonist's parents in the early stages were too uncomfortable.

There's a lot of stuff here and there, there's no theme.

Years of looking into the mirror have been in vain. A master who can transmit sounds in elementary school cannot protect his companions at the train station. He will be slapped first and then stabbed in the back. Stop practicing martial arts

It looked okay in elementary school, but I couldn't stand it anymore in junior high school.

I want to know where the appearance added by the system went 😴

The biggest failure may be that the male protagonist trusts others too easily, and is it true that Yu Yaoyao still behaves like this even after her father is dead? Even my brothers and sisters have killed each other, yet they still believe it so easily.

The first few dozen chapters were quite interesting, but the rest fell apart

You are welcome to reward each other with 100 points, and you will be rewarded as soon as you receive it.

The author makes the brothers fight like brothers. After reading nearly two hundred chapters, the plot is almost mindless in many cases.