Holy Spirit

1. Cool cool cool. 2. Soul Penetration... I hope to write more different things, because there are many people who write this type of writing, and the competition is very fierce, so you have to work hard ٩( 'ω' )و 2. The length is clean, the paragraph length is appropriate, and the reading experience is also good. I give you a thumbs up (/≧▽≦/) 3. The character description is appropriate and not shabby. The words and sentences are fair, and the character dialogue transitions, etc. Are all fine (●°u°●)​" That's it, I hope there are surprises, haha Let's encourage each other, come on ٩( 'ω' )و

After reading the first three chapters, I summarize the following points: Good: 1. The writing style is very good. 2. The feeling of the characters is quite good 3. The language and expressions of the dialogues between the characters are well described. After all the good things, here are some bad things: 1. The pace is too slow, too much adding things to a plot, it could be sped up appropriately. 2. One thing I found is that the father is too young to be a young man. It is better to use middle age. The young man should be said to be the older brother of the young man. As a father, it is too reluctant. As for why I didn't sign the contract, I don't know. If you didn't want to sign it on purpose, there's nothing you can do about it. If not, I suggest you go back and change the first three chapters to try to speed up the plot! Generally, the editor only reads the first three chapters. If the first three chapters are too slow, the editor will not continue reading.

It is not easy for a newcomer to write a book. I also hope that readers can leave valuable comments and collect them. Recommendations would be great. This book will become more and more exciting.

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The details of the cats are great! Learned how to describe characters' clothing. The words are steady and humorous. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

The narrative technique is good, Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Oh, force it 😁

The writing style is very good, much better than me, let's work hard together, come on!

Quite pretty! Collected! Come on, author! Keep updating! Welcome to visit us again!

It's really well written. Looking forward to the big update! Rush the duck, rush the duck,

Here it comes. Looking forward to Miaomiao signing the contract and putting it on the shelves soon.

Good afternoon! ✌️

The writing is very good, the writing style is very good 👍 Thank you to the author (✪▽✪)!

Coming, coming ✌️

Here it comes, wait for updates

Come on, hold on 😡

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