9 to 5 Admiral

Personally, I think the title of your book has nothing to do with your content. To be honest, I think the name is very attractive, but your content, except for the first chapter, is all about a two-dimensional chat group. I highly recommend that the author change it. Change the name to "One Piece: The Salted Fish in the Dimensional Chat." Everyone, why don't you change the style to the main "One Piece World" and occasionally intersperse the chat group?

General Gray earned a hundred Devil Fruits. This general is so awesome. How can Devil Fruits be so easy to get? It is possible to make artificial Devil Fruits.

There are only four chapters. In order to invest, I read it back and forth several times 😎

When I saw the teleportation fruit, I lost interest.

When I saw that Fubuki was going to be promoted to A-level, I felt that the author had never seen a punch. Fubuki himself has the strength of the top A-levels. As for not going to be promoted, he wanted to be the first. The first A-levels were very strong and he couldn't defeat him. The Mask who was the first in A-level was an S-level. He couldn't beat him. He originally wanted to be the first to prove to his sister.

Can I delete it from the bookshelf?

I see why it was updated two days ago? Cut the author😅

35,000 Is enough to be a eunuch. Among the eunuch books I have read so far, you are the shortest 😅

As for chakra, people outside the Naruto world can't practice it at all. As for senjutsu, you can try it. It refers to the most primitive senjutsu, the kind practiced by the old toad of Mt. Miaomu.

I think this book is okay. Why are there so many objections in the comment section? As long as the pacing is maintained and the character changes are reasonable, it's a good book.

The biggest failure is the emergence of group leaders.

As soon as I saw it, the group leader still gave the protagonist this book, so I deleted it and stopped reading.

It's best to write out the characters in the original work with multiple personalities, and don't make so many repetitions. 1 2 Is okay, but too many will be a bit annoying. Don't make so many group members licking the protagonist.

Just read one of these articles to see what's new. I don't recommend reading more, it's no fun at all.

It's been a month since June 23rd to today's July 23rd. Are you still updating 💀? Even if you can't write it anymore, you can make a story like "Warring States picked up the tea cup and took a sip, suddenly stretched out his hand to slap Sumu on the ear, and then scared him awake and found that everything before was just a dream." This is better than cutting it off directly. At least you have finished writing this book and concluded it.