Blood Slayer Master

I've written one hundred chapters, so commemorate it

I feel like this chapter is too cliche. The protagonist's IQ is off the line throughout, and he turns a deaf ear to his grandfather's words. If someone asks him what the purple halo is, he will tell him directly, as if he is afraid that others will not know. Even people in the mountains cannot be so stupid. . . . Besides, his grandfather has been reminding him that Jin Wu asked him to be a bodyguard in the school before, so shouldn't he avoid it? And after he swallowed the golden elixir before, shouldn't his body have been strengthened? Can't you use physical skills to fight hand-to-hand? (Actually, the main purpose of raising these questions is to remind the author not to write a routine in a good article. There may be a reversal later, but I think the beginning of the story is also very important. Come on! (Chapter 8)

The story of the Cat God is quite good. Here are my thoughts: Cats are often synonymous with insidiousness and cunning in mythological stories. I believe the author should have thought of this when creating. For cats, becoming a god of life is something that has been difficult to find throughout the ages. It is like a person's promotion in the workplace. When a person has been dazzled by interests, his feelings no longer need to know the ethics and shame of human beings. This may seem disgusting, but when an opportunity appears in front of you, how many people can stay rational? Some would say, opportunity? Not so much? It's just that you didn't catch it yourself. Ridiculous! Do you think the opportunity is so easy to obtain? You never thought that when your opportunity comes, it is also an opportunity for others! So when an opportunity is given to you, one that can lead to a successful career, who wouldn't be tempted? So why did the black cat kill Ye Qiu who saved him? Because in his eyes, Ye Qiu's life was not worth mentioning at all. Similarly, there is Yang Er. He feels that he is using others but does not know that he is the one being used. Just like people who feel that they have power in life often ignore what others think and are then used by others. Yes, it is pitiful and the least worthy of being pitied. Also, he ended up being dismembered in the end. This feeling was written at two o'clock in the morning, so I attached a poem in the dark night: Desolation and you, fame and me. Because it is not over, the interests will expand.     ， What is the confusion now that we have made great achievements? People believe that they are inherently evil and cannot change. The same is true for Amo. He has no past mistakes, how can he decline? The matter has come to this, there is nothing to say. It can be a blessing or a disaster, without you and me.

I feel that the emotional line is a bit abrupt, and the emotional line between Leng Xue and Bai Hao is too thin. It feels like the author is forcing a story between the two, which is unnatural (Chapter 22)

When Sanada Sougo's team assassinated Mr. Luo, what happened that almost caused the team to be wiped out?

Hahahahahaha, come on, author

Not bad, the author will update it soon 😁

Let me come to Kangkang🙂

Already collected, keep up the good work 😊

It would be better if you didn't choose short stories at the beginning, no one would read this category. Just choose long stories, urban supernatural powers 😢😢

Everyone who is passing by, come and take a look, take a look 😃

What I wrote myself is quite interesting. There may be more branches, but they will all be connected later Deadwood Forest is after chapter 52. 😁

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง