League of Legends: The Commentary System

The idea is very good, but the writing is too boring and unattractive. The whole text is the protagonist: "Bala Bala" The heroine: "Bala Bala" The barrage: "Bala Bala"

Tongxi Tongxi, my beloved wife😍😍😍

Readers are there to watch the protagonist live, not to watch the reenactment of the game. After reading 60 chapters, the plot basically has no explosive points. There is no way this book will be successful! This is a waste of time. Before Shuiwen is put on the shelves, readers are basically screened out.

It is recommended to join the canteen on weekend nights, if you want to see the protagonist's yin and yang weirdness hahaha

I'm sorry, when will Zhao Xuetong disappear? ? ? ? It looks annoying, so I moved it out of the bookshelf first, and please give me a shout when he disappears. This kind of plot is really disgusting. The female protagonist who was originally scheduled to be interspersed with someone, and she asked the male protagonist to help chase her. No matter whether he can chase her or not, it is disgusting. It's like booking a girl with you as a baby, and then a man asks you to help chase her, and then you agree. Oh my god, you really dare to write it. When will this plot be over? Please comment. I'll jump to the place where the plot is past. I'll unblock it first.

The emotional line is a bit disgusting. Forcibly inserting such a poisonous plot?

Unlocking quotations is a poisonous thing. People who often watch games know that there are many classic quotations and there is no need to unlock them at all. In addition, if you just watch the commentary, it is just a real-life commentary with the protagonist's skin. I might as well watch the game again, why bother reading your text version. The author must arrange the transformation issue early. I think this subject is a must-do...

In fact, it's okay if the team's name doesn't change. You see, the changes in so many great books are so messy. The pirate ships are here, and tbq is changed to qzl. You can't even recognize it. If you don't recognize it, you won't have a sense of immersion.

Commentary is not an easy subject to write about. In fact, no matter how good your commentary is, it is difficult for a professional player to make an exciting operation that is impressive. Moreover, good commentary is always accompanied by good operations. Others are paying attention to the players, and not many people are paying attention to you. In this way, you can only forcefully brag about the protagonist and force the audience to say how awesome the protagonist is and how good the commentator is. However, when we actually watch the game, we rarely pay attention to the commentary, and mostly focus on the game. The commentator only allows us to better appreciate the game, and it is difficult to be the protagonist. Of course I'm just talking about my opinion casually, and I don't deny the author's book, because I haven't read it yet. I hope the author can cheer up 🙂

It's a suggestion. Written by the author... Is it okay? Well, I can watch it. But the plot... Let's put it this way, the emotions attached to the commentary emotions you describe in your writing, you must feel the same when watching the game, but when you turn it into words, it is difficult to resonate with the emotions! My personal suggestion is to write more about daily life, games, and necessary classic scenes. Hey, don't mention it. After watching some games, if you mention them a little bit, I will have that game in my mind. But! You didn't write this to me, I read it and recalled it 😅. If you had created an original plot, I guess I would have read it. Just provide a reference and take a look. If it doesn't affect the outline, consider it. Hahaha. Finally, the author has to work hard, it's not easy to write explanatory texts.