The Lone Wild Goose in the Spy War

The speed is too slow, and there are too many explanations about the social environment at that time. You can explain a little in one chapter, but not too much, let alone one or two pages, which will greatly affect the reading experience. Spy war stories should be fast in the early stage, and quickly enter the plot and quickly gain power. Some unimportant characters do not need to be described so much. For example, the section on arms can be shortened, and the treasure hunt can also be shortened. The purpose of treasure hunt is to fund and introduce the plot. There is no need to write how to find and how to dig. The most important thing about spy wars is that they have few characters and a compact plot, which gives readers a sense of urgency. It is normal to have few characters. They are either enemies or our own people. There are not so many characters. There is no need for teachers' classmates or teachers' teachers. Don't introduce the supporting characters in so much detail. Just know their names and their functions. There is no need to be so obsessed with writing about the supporting characters' life experiences. The plot is compact, and the links are connected one by one, that is, the tasks are connected. Besides the tasks, it is either not written at all or written less. The sense of urgency is to give the reader the feeling that the protagonist is lurking about to be discovered in the next chapter.

That's ridiculous. The core of your book is a spy. In the early stage, the character of the protagonist is defined as someone who can be a spy?

Are these reviews of this book all written by trumpets? Just asking for more updates, there are not a single comment from Zhengerbajing

There are so many inner dramas that it makes my balls ache to watch!

The plot at the beginning is too outrageous. 1.5 Million US dollars, the purchasing power at that time was so high.

Spy war, spy war, more than a hundred chapters did not mention counter-espionage, I got drunk and gave up.

I only joined the military at chapter 500, and haven't contacted our party at chapter 800. That's not what it says, master...

When you find out that your whole family is in Nanjing, shouldn't your first reaction be to move?

It seems a bit dull, the plot structure is scattered, the story advances slowly, and there are too many turning points.

1. Author: If you write about American companies later, you can refer to the book 1937 Global Express, and you can also write about the drug penicillin. 2. The protagonist of the Nanjing Defense War could use his identity to seize more than 400 ships that were originally burned by the Nanjing headquarters. In history, if Tang Shengzhi had not burned these ships, at least half of the 100,000 defenders and 300,000 civilians would have withdrawn, instead of being massacred by the Japanese army. 3. You can use the defeat of Poland in 1939 and France in 1940 to use the tungsten ore, rubber and oil in your hands to exchange some weapons from the Germans. The weapons lost by the British and French forces at Dunkirk could not be produced in China in the eight years of the war of resistance. This does not include the weapons and equipment captured in France, the Netherlands and Belgium. You can go to General Falkenhausen, the commander of the German occupation forces in Belgium and northern France, who sympathizes with China. 4. The protagonist can open up relations with the Soviet Union and the United States, and use family connections to reopen the Xinjiang channel during the Pacific War. I have always believed that the losses of the Hump Route were too great. If the influence of the United States is used to reopen the Xinjiang channel, China will receive a lot more supplies. 5. Didn't you let a person go to the United States before? You can let him cooperate with Henry Kaiser to build Liberty Ships, Victory Ships, and escort aircraft carriers. There is also the possibility of extending shotguns to the military, the same way the United States used shotguns to shoot the Japanese in the Pacific Theater during World War II. 6. The character pretending to be Japanese can purchase German weapons from the United States at a low price at the end of World War II and transport them to the organization in China. You can also use the ending of World War II to purchase Liberty Wheels and Victory Wheels at a low price to transport the purchased weapons, especially the Panzerfaust and Tank Killer anti-tank rockets, which can destroy bunkers and tanks. In the Liberation War, there is no need to fight for people to blow up bunkers. If the author writes a chapter on this aspect, you can refer to how the United States dealt with post-war surplus materials after the end of World War II. 7. Will Lin Mo's fiancée Liu Shiya be a member of the organization? When will Lin Mo resume his relationship with the organization? 8. The author can refer to the founder of mortars and look up the Frenchman Brand, who can introduce 60, 82, and 120 mortars, as well as the improved caliber of 50, and replace them with m79 for anti-tank use. And the m1919 heavy machine gun production line introduced from the United States is much better than the Maxim, and it is also an air-cooled heavy machine gun. 9. Can we acquire the Taiyuan Arsenal and move it to Sichuan? Yan Xishan once bargained with Chiang Kai-shek to sell the Arsenal, but unfortunately he failed. After all, before September 18, Taiyuan Arsenal was second only to Fengtian Arsenal. 10. Regarding Yeren Mountain, if you can write about the Chinese Expeditionary Army occupying Myitkyina in advance and change the tragic ending of the defeat at Yeren Mountain, you can refer to the novel "The Chinese Expeditionary Force during the Anti-Japanese War". It is best for the author to create a group so that he can communicate appropriately with readers. These are some suggestions from readers. Since the protagonist is in this era, he can at least use his identity to do something. Please refer to the author

The writing is full of water, and the content is completely mindless. It starts with a multi-million dollar business. With this background, you still rely on Rabbit. Don't talk about Rabbit winning or adapting to the times. The setting of the protagonist is already similar to that of Chiang Ching-kuo. You can vote for one and give it a try...

After reading this article one after another, I feel that the author is too greedy for perfection. The protagonist is the legitimate son of a large business family in Zhejiang, and there are already family arrangements in the government, the army, and even the Military Intelligence Bureau. Moreover, the family's business can actually arouse the greed of the Seven Star Company of the Kong family, which shows that it has a huge share. Didn't the author realize that all the settings have lost their rationality? Because even if a legitimate son of a large business family enters politics, it is impossible for him to enter the military. Even if he is admitted to a military academy, he is most likely to enter the military commission through connections and engage in civilian work after graduation, which will not allow him to enter front-line work. Family heir, how big is the risk? Secondly, even if the protagonist of the plot breaks the Japanese spy network intentionally or unintentionally, it is impossible to ask his family for permission to join the Intelligence Bureau, because according to the author's arrangement, the adopted son has been arranged to enter the Military Intelligence Bureau. If he maintains the relationship with the Military Intelligence Bureau, he will not do useless work and ask his legitimate son to join the Military Intelligence Bureau. It's just too dangerous. Secondly, the family business is huge, and the author has arranged huge financial speculation (speculation on silver appreciation) and basic industry for the family. This is a huge industrial investment. It will be difficult for a business family that has never done anything in industry to enter this field rashly. Likewise, not to mention the profits from speculation and the investment in arranging speculation into war-related industries need to be controlled by people who, even if they are not proficient, at least understand the entire strategy and historical trends. There is no doubt that he is the protagonist. Then the question is, how much energy does the protagonist still have to go to the front line of the Military Intelligence Agency to participate in the fight against the Japanese spy agency? Not to mention there are a lot of power struggles internally. So I feel that the author has gone astray. It is better to ask the author to invest in industrial construction, use the cooperation with the Military Intelligence Bureau as a fulcrum, further expand the cooperation with the Military Industry Administration, etc. Externally, through the Military Intelligence Bureau to resist the government's internal reach out to the four major families, and externally cooperate with other businessmen, just like the author planned, break down the products into independent factories for specialized production, and then set up several apparent brand assembly plants. If you are not engaged in industry, you will definitely not be able to do it. Business alliances to resist government pressure. At the same time, the protagonist builds a small but sophisticated military factory, specializing in the production of some relatively high-cost weapons, such as sniper rifles, pistols, grenades, etc., And supplies them to the Military Intelligence Bureau, the Central Command can also supply, etc., So that the two major intelligence organizations can get weapons supplies suitable for them. This in turn has an impact on both major intelligence organizations. So as to achieve the minimum self-protection. The protagonist's main focus should be on going to the southwest to break up the southwest warlords. The local wealthy families provide local protection and resources. The protagonist connects the family with funds from Shanghai and Jiangsu and Zhejiang, and the family communicates with foreign equipment to spread industry in the southwest. It can not only develop industry, but also connect many commercial and political resources. It can also provide support for the Anti-Japanese War. Of course I wrote whatever I thought of, and the author can just listen if he wants to. I think the author should be following the trend of spy war-themed writing, but obviously the author has great ideas about farming, and subconsciously mixed a lot of farming plots into the spy war plot, so it makes it look different.

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I have run out of books to read. I am really heartbroken after reading this. The Japanese spies haven't been caught yet. When you meet someone, you say you are spying on spies. It's a shame that you can actually catch spies. You have no sense of confidentiality at all. So many good reviews

I was really interested, but I was speechless even after reading the first chapter. There were too many buffs, and I know you want the protagonist to be awesome, but the knowledge just makes me laughable.

Too self-righteous

There's too much nonsense, it's too watery, it's a bit indifferent, there are a lot of supporting roles, there's a hammer here and a stick here and there.

What are the previous 80 chapters talking about? Ideal, study, treasure hunting? His mother's is the Republic of China, the Republic of China, the Republic of China! You're about to graduate and write almost a hundred chapters? Is this normal? ? ?

Wow, there are more than 300 chapters, and I haven't graduated yet. Can you stop talking so much nonsense about things that are not important? Write a few chapters about other people's dreams.

Let Lin Mo and Sorge take the opportunity to meet. With Sorge's shrewdness, he will soon know Lin Mo's identity as a party member.

Can the author write down the specific time in the article later?

Started a million-dollar business, a group-strengthening art equipment

It seems that we have to wait at least a year or two for the Anti-Japanese War chapter.