The Lone Wild Goose in the Spy War

The pace is too slow, and there's too much explanation of the social environment at the time. You can explain a little bit per chapter, but not too much, and definitely not a page or two. That greatly affects the reading experience. Spy stories need to be fast-paced in the early stages, quickly getting into the plot and seizing power. Some unimportant characters don't need so much description.

That's ridiculous. The core of your book is espionage, and the protagonist's character in the early stages is defined as a capable spy.

Are all these comments on this book spammed by alt accounts? They're all asking for more chapters, not a single proper comment.

The long stretches of internal monologues were so painful to read!

The opening scene is just too outrageous. $1.5 Million—that's a huge amount of purchasing power back then!

He only joined the Military Intelligence Bureau at chapter 500, and still hadn't made contact with the Communist Party at chapter 800. That's not how it's written, Master...

The writing is all fluff, the content is completely brainless, and the opening lines are full of deals worth millions of dollars. With that kind of background, why would you choose to side with China? Don't spout any nonsense about China's inevitable victory or conforming to the times. The protagonist's character is already comparable to Chiang Ching-kuo. Try siding with him yourself...

This is a spy thriller, and after over a hundred chapters it still hasn't touched on counter-espionage. I'm speechless. I'm dropping it.

1. Dear author, if you're going to write about American companies later, you can refer to the book "1937 Global Express," and you can also write about penicillin. 2. The protagonist of the Battle of Nanjing was able to use his status to seize more than 400 ships that were originally burned by the Nanjing Command.

When you find out your whole family is in Nanjing, shouldn't your first reaction be to move?