Behind Me Are Billions of Players

Updated, not enough to see, idiot

It's a very good book. I recommend 144 after reading it...

Shantv-chan~ Will there be a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

Here is a pit, a poison test post, a message from a pioneer First, let me talk about the journey of the new road: I will select a good book with a value of less than 300,000 among the thousands of books in the search player's entry. I want to cultivate a new book, and reward according to the situation. It is human nature to do things based on the quality of the book. Of course, it is to improve the account level, smirk (ಡωಡ) Now I read the title and introduction of the book and passed the level. The following is a novel in the Eastern fantasy genre about summoning the fourth natural disaster to make oneself stronger. . . Uh-huh (ಡωಡ) It's pretty wide, mainly because I like this type, such as the behind-the-scenes flow of creation and summoning players, which are quite new. Well, then, let's go down and find out. . . If you want to know more about it later, please read the next post.

Warning: I hope the post will not be deleted, please be sensible and the author will be wise Ahem, cough, I have something to say below: This is a continuation of the content of the previous post. . As a linkage Let's start, the author is Dada, Smith Masan (Japanese: Excuse me) 1 In terms of subject matter, it is about taking back the power of the world lord through players. It is quite novel and very suitable to my taste. Not bad, very good😁 2 About the world of the novel The setting is quite novel, but the description is better, the text is more precise, less concept output, more introduction. Of course, the concepts should be described more. It is best to be rooted in Chinese culture and combined with it, so that it can be more concrete and better understood. 3 The text processing is a bit green, I hope it can be repaired and polished, it is relatively incoherent, because this is really,,,,,, emmm, come on 😊 4 The plot, well, it is difficult to evaluate here, because I have only seen a small part, um 😊 According to my progress, it is not broken yet. It is good, more logical, pay attention to comparison, some are not, of course, only some. Of course, there are also shortcomings. The plot that should be included is not written😱😭 which is a bit sad. . Let's study other novels of the same type 5 I would like to give a special thumbs up here. The number of words in each chapter is quite high in the early stage. It's good. Keep it up. 6 I hope that the description of Novice Village can be added, hoping to lean towards the Chinese style 7 Really, Internet literature is also literature, I hope that I can use Chinese composition writing methods to understand it, such as environmental description, there are really few places in the previous article 8 The novel involves Internet literature, so appropriate jokes are conducive to the language being interesting and lively Action 9 The character description is just scratching the surface, not deep enough. Of course, there is a setting where the character of the eldest sister is well written Generally speaking, well, really, the writing should be improved, because the unmodified writing is a piece of pure iron. It takes constant revision, sentence modification, sentence interpretation, and word refinement to become perfect and mature. Really, please take a good look at this work, um, but really the words! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The exclamation marks are like the endless river😱😭😱 Then reward this novel, 520 points, a small amount of effort, hidden deep affection and encouragement (funny possession) That's it. I was wrong 😭 I will change my comment tomorrow. . . . Let me get some sleep first The style of painting changes after Chapter 7

I come back regularly and feel that there are few people in the comment area. I would like to promote this book. Come on.

Ahem, cough, cough, I have already recommended the book in three dot circles, author, come on😊Don't give up, gold will always shine

Come back and take a look, the author is practicing the Sunflower Manual! ? There has been no update for four days, so forget it. Gone, gone

If the author has stopped updating, I will wait for the author to open a new book. If the author still wants to write about the fourth cataclysm, I can give you some suggestions. 1 Nowadays, the race setting represented by the protagonist in the novel about the fourth cataclysm is human race, which is no longer outstanding. Take a look at the novels of the same type, the game Yggdrasil, which is set in the elves. It has a high-end atmosphere and is very attractive to readers. But here are just suggestions, but if you don't delve deeply into the racial settings, then the human race is still okay. After all, we are born as human beings and have a sense of substitution. We don't have to explain a lot. 2 The biggest flaw of this book, well, it's not the biggest, is that the text is not interesting. As a novel about the fourth natural disaster, it actually doesn't make fun of me. Well, I don't want to talk, okay? But it's okay. If the author wants to maintain the original style of writing, just keep working hard. 3 Sincerely at the beginning, I don't like the setting of the spiritual world or the myriad worlds, because it's too imaginative. Well, it depends on the author's control. It's harmless to control it well, and it's not as good as it is now In addition, it is recommended to only open two separate worlds, one is an alien world construction game, and the other is a human future world. The alien world is the main one and the future world is supplementary. That is enough. After all, this is the author's first time writing a book, but I think it's pretty good to be able to write it so far. 4 It seems that the elements of the author's work are Eastern elements. I suggest you expand this cultural advantage and write something with strong cultural characteristics? Then the style of the novel will improve. 5 That's it for now. I hope to continue working hard. By the way, if I break the update, I'll report it. I won't support it any more. Before writing another novel, would you please make a rough outline of the whole book? Let's stop here first. It's over.

Reasonable 320,000. . It's tasteless

This is my first time reading a novel without CP, it's really good! ! ! !

To be honest, it's strange to read the introduction. Immortal is the lord of a world. No matter what the world is like, the level of cultivating immortals in the future may not require prehistoric times. After reading this kind of resume, it doesn't matter whether your content is good or not. The first reaction is to persuade you to quit.

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