Little Seventh's Beloved Country Life

The concept is good and the subject matter is good, but the author's writing doesn't feel right. It has always been written about the heroine's daily conversations with her parents and grandfather, which takes up a lot of space. It almost doesn't describe a few things in the village and outside, and it feels very monotonous. You have to say that the family is short-lived. I feel that the descriptions of the brothers, nephews and nieces are not very full, and there are no independent characters. I always feel that everyone is written in general terms and has no characteristics. Only the father, mother, grandfather and Jinxiu are described more. The narrative technique is also very straightforward. I hope the author will get better and better in the future.

I don't want Qiu Jing to be the male protagonist. He is so many years older, and I am really tired of seeing Bingshan's domineering male protagonist. Reminiscing about the past is not bad. He is about the same age and gentle.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I found two problems (I have no desire to continue reading, and I don't know if the following chapters will still be the same) The ideas are good, but the plot is too long-winded and monotonous. 1. The heroine's gold finger is too big: space, lucky star, goddess, and infinite strength. With such a setting of the heroine, she can become an emperor even if she works hard. The space can be upgraded, spiritual springs, and various materials. Just the golden finger of space can make the heroine and her family have food and clothing for a lifetime. With such a golden finger, I can't imagine what difficulties and setbacks the heroine can encounter to promote the development of the plot. 2. The plot has no ups and downs and the characters are single: The author is currently limited to the scene of "home". The plot focuses on eating, sleeping and pampering the heroine, and the rest is briefly touched upon. The family members are all ruthless doting machines for the heroine. The characterization is mainly reflected in dialogue and straightforward psychological description, and the lines are stiff and unnatural. The characters are very flat and it is difficult to have a deep impression of the characters inside. This article is like the heroine's space. Except for the well and a few acres of land, everything else is shrouded in white mist. Think carefully, the scene: home. Hostess: Her family loves her very much. Family: I love the heroine very much. Others? The author didn't write it. Also, skipping the previous apocalyptic chapters will not affect the reading experience.

No, the logic is confusing to me. The eldest sister-in-law in my grandma's family is in her twenties, and the second sister-in-law may be a few years younger. So how old is the heroine's mother? There shouldn't be much difference between men and women, right? The heroine's eldest brother has four children, and the second brother has children. In other words, how old is the heroine's mother? They have to get married at fifteen In other words. The heroine's mother should be in her thirties Then the heroine's uncle should be older, so? Are the uncles more than ten years older than the aunts?

Everyone has to write a greeting. It feels like making up numbers. Can it be simplified? Just skip saying hello. We all know roughly. There is no need to write in such detail. It's so tiring to read. The main author Da Da has written the plot well. Why do you want to write about the heroine's family in such detail? You can write about the adventure.

Is the male protagonist of this book really the loyal dog type? I find that the male protagonists in this type of books are like this. . . I really feel the visual fatigue, Hong Kong, I have been browsing all the major apps all day, and almost all of them are either loyal dogs, cold generals, cold princes, modern domineering presidents, male supporting characters, glamorous type, gentle type, cheerful type, so many types of male supporting characters can be added to the male protagonist 😭😭

Does it make sense to write so much before time travel? The baby time was too long after the time travel, and the plot never unfolded

Why do the beginnings of each chapter always repeat the same as before? Please don't repeat the VIP chapters. They all charge money.

I really like the heroine's current independent character. Before the heroine starts dating, I would like to ask if the heroine will become a sweetheart after falling in love? Don't be a clingy male protagonist. If you have a male protagonist who follows you everywhere, it will be very annoying and will make the female protagonist restrained. After all, the female protagonist has too many secrets (Qi Shi really hates the kind of male protagonist who knows that his girlfriend is awesome but never leaves her under various pretexts)

It was mediocre and uninspiring. When I saw more than 100 chapters, I skipped to the end when Qiu Jing desperately wanted to repay his kindness. There was no problem with the echo from beginning to end. That's right. When Wen Gu appeared, I thought he was a yandere male protagonist, but it turned out not to be the case. He was a mentally ill uncle. Goldfinger is very good. I thought the heroine would do something great, but it didn't happen. She only used her power to hunt, and the empty blue was not used much to relieve greed. It was a war-torn era at the beginning. I thought it would affect the heroine's life, but it didn't. The heroine has always been in the village. Many of the development directions are quite unexpected. I don't know what Li Baigang wrote in the middle. After reading the comments, I guessed that it is also ordinary. In general, the layout is small, the storyline is very flat and has no ups and downs. There are many characters, but most of them are only mentioned in passing. It is a bit exciting, a bit painful, and a bit tearful, but not funny. I hope the author can produce better works!