Tian Fang Above

You little lazy bum, you write a thousand words every day, but today you've finally decided to write a little more.

Here I come! 🌹🌹🌹

Congratulations, Sister Chen, on the product launch! I've ordered them all!

Having read part of it, overall, the beginning was alright, but it felt increasingly disorganized as it went on, clearly lacking structure. The female lead wasn't great either, and the author's descriptions of various aspects seemed somewhat weak. Some parts were described in detail, while others, which should have been detailed, were glossed over. It just felt a bit lacking, and the author needs to work harder.

Based on the current plot, Su Tianfang seems somewhat autocratic in her actions. Moreover, from what we've seen, she doesn't seem like a thirty-year-old; she's more like a seventeen or eighteen-year-old girl in her rebellious phase. Therefore, she doesn't listen to her elders and harbors a strong rebellious mentality. How will Su Tianfang navigate her life path later on?

Based on what we've seen so far, Su Tianfang's character design has many shortcomings and flaws. Considering her past and present lives, if Su Tianfang is over thirty years old in total, she shouldn't be so immature. She seems somewhat brainless in every aspect and lacks the maturity and composure expected of someone in their thirties.

Her writing style isn't quite there yet, and she lacks experience; she needs more practice. How to put it... Su Tianfang is destined to grow alongside the author's writing style. Success in many things requires practice, and becoming a qualified author is no exception. There's a lot of room for development. Keep going! After all, life isn't about instant success, and there aren't many easy detours. Work hard on updating!

To put it simply, if this book is about a strong female lead, then Su Tianfang should be as strong and domineering as possible, so that everyone will be subservient to her. However, the plot holes have to be filled in; don't just focus on digging holes and leave a bunch of mysteries in the end. Anyway, I hope for a smooth development. Finally, one more question: is it possible that Yueya will come back in the end?

I took a look at this book I have a little idea I understand that the title "Tianfang Zaishang" implies something else entirely. But I don't understand why the author arranged the plot this way. The main character's name hasn't appeared in the first dozen or so chapters. (By the way, I looked at the characters in the book before I started reading it.)

I'm just joining in the fun. This tree has appeared quite a few times now, and the character relationships seem a bit messy and haven't been sorted out yet. I hope the author can keep it under control and prevent things from getting out of control in the end. If you can write it well, this book should be pretty good. Keep updating and don't let it fall apart later on. It's already starting to fall apart a bit in the early stages.