Tian Fang Above

You little salty fish writes a thousand words every day, and today you are finally willing to give in a little more.

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Congratulations to Sister Chen, it's now on the shelves. All orders have been made.

I read part of it, and generally speaking, the beginning is okay, but I feel that the writing seems to be getting more and more confusing later on. It is obvious that some things are not according to the rules, and the heroine is not good, and all aspects described by the author seem to be a bit weak, and some positions are written in more detail. Some positions should be detailed but are just mentioned in one stroke. It seems that there are some shortcomings, and the author still needs to work harder.

From the current plot, it seems that Su Tianfang is a bit arbitrary in dealing with things, and from what we can see, Su Tianfang does not look like a thirty-year-old person, but she is really down-to-earth, like a seventeen or eighteen-year-old girl, who is in the rebellious period, so she does not listen to all the words of her elders, and she has a great rebellious mentality. How should Su Tianfang take her life path in the later period? It would be better for the author to position the heroine well first. As far as the title of this book is concerned, I am quite looking forward to it. I want to see how Su Tianfang finally succeeds in getting to the top of the road to success, high above the rest.

From what we have seen so far, Su Tianfang's character design has a lot of shortcomings and a lot of flaws. As far as past and present lives are concerned, if Su Tianfang's two lives combined are considered to be a person in his thirties, then he shouldn't be so childish. In every aspect, he seems a bit lacking in brains. No one in his thirties has the maturity and stability that a person in his thirties should have.

The writing style is not enough, the fire is lacking, and it needs more practice, what should I say? Su Tianfang is destined to grow up with the author's writing. The success of many things requires tempering. To become a qualified author, there is also a lot of room for development. Come on, after all, life is not achieved by one step, and there are not many suitable detours. Work hard to update, come on! .

Let's talk about it briefly. For me, if this book is about strong women, then Su Tianfang will naturally be stronger and more arrogant, the better. Naturally, everyone will bow down to her. However, this hole must be filled. Don't just dig the hole and leave a lot of mysteries in the end. Anyway, I still hope for stable development. Finally, I want to ask, is it possible that Yueya will come back in the end?

I read this book I have a few thoughts "Tianfang is on the Top" is just as the name suggests, I understand this But I don't understand how the author wants to arrange the plot in this way I have written more than ten chapters before and the name of the protagonist has not yet appeared (By the way, I also read the characters in this book first before starting to read the book) The protagonist is obviously Su Tianfang Then what is the operation of writing a little girl named Crescent Moon in the first ten chapters (of course, I also guessed that she is the protagonist) But such an arrangement is not fascinating and attracts readers' interest in reading (because it is written by an unknown author without a certain foundation - referring to fan readers) For such an author, the most important thing is not how to develop the plot, but to be eye-catching enough. The three golden chapters at the beginning are very important (of course the content is also very important) A few suggestions.