The Spiritual Path That Starts from Zhetian

The author is not writing about the worldview of "Shading the Sky", but the worldview of "Shading the Earth". God, her mother, the Holy Emperor of the Sun cannot create stars. The Great Emperor can open up an incomplete universe, let alone the body of the Great Emperor. Even if it is only at the level of a saint, the body can live forever. It cannot live forever because it is the end of the Dharma era. God's will consumes the soul. Because the soul dies and dies, there is no problem with the body at all.

What are you writing? It's too ridiculous. What you write is a cultivation system, not a scientific article. What mechanics, quantum mechanics, and CPU have come out. It looks very awkward and there is no sense of involvement at all. If you want to write like this, you might as well open a book yourself instead of writing a fan.

Since my language description is very feeble, I often write and write It just felt like there was no visual sense, which led me to need to go to other places to create Readers can watch and learn the narrative techniques of other authors. They also need to Constantly revise the articles you write. As a result, updates are very slow, and I am very helpless about this. I hope you all can bear with me! I have been a reader for 8 years. Reading is a pleasure, writing is a crematorium

The Da Luo here should be set according to the Da Luo in the Fantasy World: A Journey Through the Ancient World and The Holy Path of the Ancient World: Huanghuang. It is the highest realm, and there is no higher realm than Da Luo.

I suggest changing the title of the book. I feel bad about this name.

Although I write a little slowly and my writing style is still very poor, I will persist. Update, finish writing the story, I hope everyone will support me. _\(≧▽≦)/_

Oh haha, I became a eunuch as soon as I invested.

If Da Luo dared to wander around in the wilderness, he would have died countless times.

Except for the introduction at the beginning that the protagonist has already achieved enlightenment, it is basically okay. It is not a cookie-cutter thing. Writing fantasy requires imagination. Ignore those people. As long as you don't randomly modify other people's systems, you can do it casually. Don't compare too much about combat power and realm. As long as you describe your own system in a way that is strong enough, someone else will brag about it.

Persistence is victory, Ollie gives

Come on, the writing and description needs to be strengthened

Very good, I like 🤓🤓

Write carefully and don't rush. I don't watch it anyway