Training the Heavens Begins with Cutting Off Pupils

I thought that only Japanese H anime would have protagonists who are ugly or not. Let's not talk about whether they are ugly or not. What is it like to have a woman die every time the world ends? Isn't this a cool article?

Strange, I want to come back and watch it again. I have forgotten everything about the plot, but I have a deep memory of Chou, and it is not a strange kind of ugliness, just ordinary ugliness. And I admire the author very much. He still insists on himself despite being criticized by thousands of people. I wonder if the author has a system task that requires this. Response to 1, otherwise 2. You can't say no to the task, we will find a way to help solve it.

In fact, the writing is not as bad as the book review section says, and the author's writing style is okay. You can read the Mei Zhan Volume without thinking. However, the writing is a bit confusing when it comes to the Demon Slayer Volume. It should be because there is no outline. I write whatever comes to my mind. The plot often changes to the next event halfway through the development, so it is very uncomfortable to read. When I saw the second Demon Slayer Volume, I couldn't stand it anymore and it was uncomfortable to read. Moreover, I feel that the author has no feelings for the characters in the original work, and the writing is more like a small H novel. The author definitely writes a small H novel, or a training novel.

The story is quite interesting and the abilities are good, but the characters are really unacceptable. I'm leaving.

The unique plot, the protagonist of Youdu, coupled with the author's full writing power, a good shot! 😏

It's not invincible, it's not cool at all

I actually used this cover. It seems that someone used it several years ago. I just thought it was strange when I saw it. Why did I come to the new book section?

The protagonist is an ugly, short and fat woman whose output depends entirely on brainwashing. At the end of every world, all women die. Is this book a good read? The author is here to take revenge on society.

I don't know what the author's brain circuit is, but he set up a short, fat and ugly protagonist to make Goldfinger more difficult? I don't see what's so difficult about it. Is it just because there are a few more entries that it's more difficult to clear? And the author, you said you want to retain readers. I read most of the comments and complained about the short, fat and ugly protagonist. I haven't seen you change it. If you don't change it, forget it. It doesn't matter what the protagonist looks like. Don't mention it. I will treat him as a mosaic. But why do you keep mentioning that the protagonist is ugly? I read novels just to see the protagonist being ugly?

The main character is short, fat and ugly. If you are fat, can't you try exercising? To be reasonable, you don't have to worry about income or the loyalty of your subordinates. How about taking some time to try to exercise? It's not pleasant to go to bed if you don't have enough physical strength, not to mention that you have to accept one person after another. Can you bear it if you are not physically strong enough? The other party's attributes are nearly a hundred times yours, boss. Although it is possible to adjust various attributes, the result is often stupid, or the author limits it. In the first few chapters, I used golden fingers to push down the wall. After two chapters, I said that the door was too hard to open. I just asked the black people. Can you use a golden finger to maximize the efficacy of the medicine, but in the next chapter it will be said to have serious side effects? To get rid of the side effects of the medicine, it's not impossible to operate it, so you have to reduce your strength? Is this still cool? The most unbearable thing is all kinds of murders of girls. The author really has a problem with his views. The tool-man lady who followed me for nearly a hundred chapters was given a lunch box in just one chapter? And it's basically meaningless. Shame on others? Even your own protagonist? So what's the point of writing a novel for you? Someone has to look at the profits. Wouldn't it be nice to write something about a normal character? Why bother with money? Some people say that this kind of protagonist is close to life and real. I really don't know what to say to you. If you really want to be true, it's not enough to be beaten by society. Do you have to find yourself uncomfortable in other people's fantasies in a novel? How lacking in love are you?

The protagonist can only be substituted by you, the author, and we cannot be substituted, and this is doomed to make the novel unpopular. It doesn't matter if you say it is ordinary or ugly, but if the protagonist is short, ugly, and fat, I am sure that 99.999% Of the people will not be able to accept this novel. Even if you change it later, most of the people will have been persuaded to leave.

After reading nearly 50 chapters, the main character's appearance description looks like this...

The subject matter is good, but the sense of immersion is too poor. Even if he is over 30, he is still short and fat, with pits on his face. If you try using this image to write a heroine, will anyone see it?

It doesn't matter if the protagonist is a little ugly, as long as the emotional line is well drawn, everyone will enjoy watching it. What makes us readers disgusted is that the protagonist relies on his golden finger to forcibly modify a woman's mind to make her fall in love with him and become obsessed with him like a slave. What era are we in now? No one likes to read harem stud stories for a long time! What's more, it's an X slave created by modifying the brain! What everyone likes is pure love!

Very nice. . Has the potential to be a big hit. 🙂🙂

This book is very well written. The author's character creation is very mature, and he successfully shows us the degeneration of a middle-aged man who has no ambition, strong power, and lack of self-control. From being ugly and cowardly when he doesn't know how to use golden fingers, to being cruel and cold when he becomes strong. An image of a successful villain appears on the page. I have now seen the part where Butterfly Ninja and Kanahu died, it was so awesome! Pass! Refined! Color! Got it! The author perfectly portrayed in my mind a pervert who lacked humanity and was self-centered. I don't know if the author deliberately set the pig's feet like this, but the author should know one thing. If this book is not an invincible novel but a suspenseful one, I would be blown away by the fact that the male protagonist makes two women rush to the street! But the author can't even classify the book well. Readers of Wudi Wen are not here to read the male protagonists torturing women and killing the harem. What we want to read are cool articles! It's a group of male coaches who pretend to be cool and go to various places to capture Crystal Palace! I'm not here to see the history of growing up a fat house! The word "tool" in the article is so appropriate. The wanton play with other people's feelings and thoughts deeply shocked me, who had never read such a book before.

A note to latecomers. The author Ge Yingren is very good at it. In the child-killing chapter, he frequently focuses on describing the protagonist, who is short, fat, with pits on his face, and even more disgusting When it comes to talking about people's names behind their back, they are always written in the form of sneezing. The author is very special, and he also focuses on the description and makes the boogers come out. The character change is also very strange The child-slayer arc is over for the time being, and we travel through Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba again. All the tool-men in the child-slayer arc are wiped out. The protagonist has no special emotions, he is just a tool-man. There is a vague description of liking those tool men earlier, but that is false. There is also something obvious. In the Zhanzhan chapter, I took some attribute medicine and the like. Once I got to Demon Slayer, I became a weak chicken again. I was attacked by a wolf, but Tanjiro in the beginning of Demon Slayer was saved with an axe. It also focused on describing how weak the protagonist is. . I don't want to watch it anymore, I feel like Demon Slayer will taint him. My personal guess is that the author has a mental illness and likes to make fun of others. It is recommended that he go to a mental hospital for treatment as soon as possible and wish him a speedy recovery.

This protagonist is not only ugly, but also a loser. He doesn't know how to get stronger. He only knows how to brainwash women. I doubt that he will even eat Devil Fruits in front of him. He dislikes Devil Fruits and is disgusting. Don't read this book. It's a waste of time. It's disgusting.

I finally understand why no one has read this novel. Let's not talk about the appearance of the main character. He is a short, fat, middle-aged man. Passers-by have always emphasized that he is an ugly middle-aged man. He doesn't even want to use the Teigu that can improve his abilities. Then the author magically changes the world and directly kills all the women who follow him. He also directly forcibly travels to other worlds when he has just occupied the empire. What the hell kind of novel is this? It says that it is invincible but not invincible, it says that it is cool but it does not feel good, and it writes about loneliness.

The author writes the main character as ugly as a fat pig. Is he mocking us readers? After all, there is no such thing as an ugly heart. Reading your book cannot help you understand that.

The book is read in the morning, the person leaves at noon, and the coffin is carried in the afternoon

Yes, you have your own ideas, but I still want to BB. I rarely BB, but you succeeded. Yusha has been trained, commanded, and used by you from the beginning to the latest chapter, and you have used your golden finger to become so strong. I thought you could open a harem. It is impossible to open a harem without such a golden finger. However, what did you do in the latest chapter? You thought it was Yusha from the main palace, and you just let her die? So what did I see? You wanted to treat her as a tool, but you didn't fully write the flavor of a tool. Instead, she had the feeling of a heroine, and the result was that she was gone. You are awesome. Okay, it's done. You have your thoughts, and I have mine. Let's break up from now on.

I found that the protagonist was wrong, so I stopped watching it, sorry, and I didn't feel like I could be substituted. I am very handsome, and my book friends are all very handsome. How can I be substituted? ? ?

This is a YY novel. I suspect that the author has made himself into the protagonist, fat, short and depressed? Also trained 😰

Others can accept it, but I never expected that Sayu would die suddenly, and it makes me feel uncomfortable.

Don't recommend watching it. The protagonist is a fat nerd programmer, ugly, short, and has no sense of empathy at all. Even an ordinary person can watch it. It's a pity. . .

Is this written to take revenge on society? What has the author experienced? It's scary to think about it

It's annoying that the main character is a fat guy, it makes me feel weak and weak.

Is the protagonist impotent? There are so many women who can't get enough of him...

It's acceptable that the protagonist is fat, and he doesn't drive with such a good plug-in. Doesn't the protagonist have a chicken?