My Elf Is Too Strong

The first fifty chapters always felt a bit childish (maybe because I'm used to watching Dark Elf), but then it got better. Overall, this is a very good elf novel. There is no way, my favorite Pokémon is Kyuubi.

Until now, the book has been on the shelves, and generally speaking, it is average. Compared with other basic elven literature of the same period, the results can be said to be dismal. Point out a few problems: 1. The setting is too complicated (I feel a little dizzy. Simply put, it is uncomfortable) Elf fan fiction itself does not need to impose too many settings. After all, the game + animation settings are already very rich. The author adds too many of his own settings to make people uncomfortable and sometimes dizzy (Newcomer-Elite-Gym-King of Heaven-Champion). Such simple settings are actually enough, and some high-end combat power settings are insufficient and can be insufficient later. Another example is Chapter 216 "Attribute Control", which is exhausted by the coordinator's setting. The coordinator needs to have precise control over skills during the gorgeous competition Chapter 218 "Ice Missile" is a combination of skills. The ones I remember most are "circle + rolling" and "spiked cannon + ice cone + freezing light". I think it is actually a bit poisonous Spike Cannon: General/Physics Continuous attack (p. S. Please watch the anime) Ice cone: ice/physical continuous attack (same as above) Freeze beam: ice/special single shot This "Ice Missile" 😅 2. The plot is delayed The plot of the protagonist with super powers has been explained very early, but the "Celestial Dojo" scene has never been given. Instead, a secret plot was written first, and three Pokémon were added (Pokémon, Slowpoke, and Slowpoke) to train and take up another role. There is also a competition for newcomers. Overall, the plot feels a bit delayed. These are my thoughts for now, I hope the author will continue to work hard Come on, come on ✊(ง •̀_•́)ง

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I feel that Sun, Moon, Sword and Shield is not suitable for old people like me. Since xyz, Mr. Tangshan is no longer a director. Zhong's original hot-blooded middle school boy has turned into a mentally retarded idiot. So I haven't watched Sun Moon and Beyond until now.

I think it is actually irrational to be the first pet of a quasi-god. It takes a long time to cultivate, especially a baby dragon. I remember someone said that it is best not to fight during the carapace dragon period, because the carapace dragon in that period is accumulating energy and waiting for transformation. The family gave such a big waste in the early stage...

Please change the title of the book. I feel like new book friends may be discouraged.

I feel like I could do some Sword and Shield elves. There is no need to repeat the same old ways.

Hey guys, when will I travel through time, hurry up and make arrangements

Don't write about the heroine, the heroine is Vulpix, Dongfang is not interested in profit

When I was 12 years old, I was playing Pokémon every day, even staying up late, including Xiaozhi, Xiaoxia, Xiaogang, Xiaoyao, Xiaosheng, Xiaoguang, Wutong, Alice, Musashi, Kojiro, Guoranweng, and Meowth. After completing these, xy appeared, then xy2 and finally xyz. After XYZ was finished, I felt very empty I was excited when I met Sun and Moon, but this excitement slowly turned into disappointment. When I met Xiaogang Xiaoxia, the disappointment turned into hope, but The last rescue team (dog head) made me despair Then Sword and Shield, I saw Xiaozhi riding Lugia and felt that Ye Qing had returned, but I didn't expect that he would still be as mentally retarded as the sun and the moon In the end, I found that only Team Rocket remained the same and was still the same treacherous person.

The pace is too slow, more than a hundred chapters and there is only one elf

Why are you writing urban elf novels now?

I have been reading books for many years. Very few people write comments. It's a pity that there are two authors, one is you and the other is Huai Lin. Your magnificence was so refreshing to me that it still doesn't feel outdated even now. It's a pity that some of the things you wrote later were messy. You could be a master, but you were unwilling to be patient and ponder your writing style. The first thing about writing is imagination, the second is writing, and the third is knowledge.

😅😅😅 Gigantism was already in the first version of the animation. Ancient super-giant Gengar, Jigglypuff, etc. Why can't Sword and Shield accept it? The Z move can also be regarded as the super kill of the elf. Why can't it be tolerated if this element is added?

I have no desire to read the part about gambling on stones, so I'd better write less ╮(＿)╭It's better to write about digging up stones than gambling about stones.

To be honest, only you and Jinmu are the best readers of elf books. No matter how many people have agreed with each other, they can't stand other authors' books. Neither of you has subscribed to any of your books. I have always felt that I owe you a full subscription. I always thought that I would definitely subscribe to them when I get better and can go to work. But now Jinmu doesn't write elf books, and you always end up suddenly. I understand that everyone has difficulties, but can you really finish a book properly? Maybe I, a free prostitute, am not qualified to say this now, but please believe in yourself, come on

Among all the kings, the one I remember most deeply is Juzi. The male protagonist doesn't have his own death makeup technique, does he? 😜 Aren't the poisonous grass-types and water-types the easiest to feed in the early stage? If the male protagonist wins the first place in the competition now, he can still meet the principal. With 200,000 in cash and a little money, he can raise some elves with these three attributes, right? If the male protagonist thinks in the long run, he should still use the training methods of champions to train elves. For champions, Yulongdu, Liu Bo, Dawuhe. . . . That what? That Menas. Oh😐and the new fire-breathing dragon champion

You only have 500,000 words to reach this level now. If you finish the book with 1 million words, it will really collapse. In fact, we want you to write more, not to finish the book as soon as possible.

I feel like the protagonist looks at the country too stingy

Come on, you already have a few eunuch books, who dares to read your books?

I don't want to say too much, just be a eunuch. I hope you can use your passion and enthusiasm to write another book and prove yourself with time and love.

The writing was good at the beginning, but once it was published, the main plot began to become unclear, making it feel confusing.

Emmmm, are you encountering a mystery? Missing phone call? ? ? ?

I'm straight up good guy. I was about to kill the pig but found it was rotten again.

I would like to give you a suggestion. Although I haven't watched it yet, I'd better think carefully about the name of the protagonist. This Liu Qingyun makes me uncomfortable at first sight.

I just watched it. Is there an indigenous protagonist?

A poor commoner starts with a six-tailed start. I'm afraid he hasn't been criticized enough. Any choice is better than a six-tailed start.

This author's new book? Are we not going to write about the dark flow?

The author should just try to write an orthodox urban superpower without elves.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~