Amnesia Reincarnation

First of all, the most outstanding thing is the introduction, which can make people's eyes light up and make them want to read on. I personally feel that the cover and the title of the book also look very good! Then let's talk about the work: First of all, the paragraphs are very clear, there are no long paragraphs that people can't stand, and the prologue is very detailed, highlighting the characteristics and advantages of the work, and the rhythm control is clearly reflected in the prologue! First of all, I read the first three pictures at the beginning. What should I say? It's really amazing to be able to write this type of work with concise language, clear expression, and leave suspense and foreshadowing! Worth encouraging! ! The plot of the story is very exciting, and there is nothing that people cannot understand. Once you read it, you will have a clear idea of ​​the plot direction and the protagonist's strengths and weaknesses. The writing style is smooth, mainly because it is written very naturally. It does not need to be too exaggerated or too delicate. After all, too good writing style will make people lose the courage to read! But the author's writing style makes it easy to understand and makes people interested in continuing reading. Finally, I wish this work will become popular as soon as possible! ! Don't stop updating! Worth investing decisively + collecting! ! Say it one last time! Don't stop updating! ! ! ! 🌹🌹🙏🙏👍👍

Personally, the first thing is that it is neat and tidy. Many paragraphs are divided using ellipses, which makes it read like a movie. It gives me a good sense of immersion. Second, there are many psychological descriptions of the characters, especially the reincarnation of the protagonist and the escape from the city center, which all exaggerate the urgent atmosphere. Third, the development of the story is compact, it can be said that it goes straight to the theme and highlights the main line, which is very appealing to readers in this fast-paced online society. The shortcoming is that there is not enough description except psychological description. The description of each character only ends in a brief paragraph when he appears. Depending on the type of your story, you can completely expand the image of the character. Come on, look forward to visiting "Monkey, Love and Strange Generals" again, thank you.

I'm here to give a long review. I rarely write long reviews, so I hope you can understand if I don't write well. First of all, the beginning is fascinating and the storyline is also very attractive. Secondly, the details are also very well described, the ideas are very creative, the ideas are very clear, very clear, and very personal. Finally, I hope the author will work hard on coding! Come on! Come on! Come on!

My writing skills are very good, it looks very fluent, and I feel very immersive. I'm very supportive!

Come on 😁😁😁

Wow! It's well written. If you keep writing it, it will become popular. I'll order it all for you when it's on the shelves! ! ! !

The writing style is better than some masterpieces. After all, some masterpieces are really rubbish and I don't know how they became gods.

I've been suffering from being handsome and witty that I shouldn't have at this age, and I'm so tired. 😢

After reading it, I have to say that the sense of déjà vu is too strong 😥. I am also an old two-dimensional person, but the description and plot are okay. However, the narrative is almost meaningless and too discontinuous. More continuous descriptions would be better, but overall it is okay. It may be more popular if placed on the light novel channel.

It feels a bit like reading a Japanese light novel. Well, how should I put it, it feels like a campus comic 😍😍😍

After reading a few chapters, I found that the author's writing style is very good and smooth, and it is very comfortable to read.

The storm is about to come and the wind is filling the building. I have forgotten what is behind it. The writing is good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good.

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The prologue, rhythm, and imagination must be praised, and the paragraphs are well separated, making people want to read more. Some of the details or descriptions of the fighting scenes are pretty good just by looking at them. But the shortcomings are: 1. The psychological description is very hasty. The protagonist's personality itself is not explicit, so more words are needed to let readers know more about him. However, most of them just rush through it, fearing that it will affect the plot. But without exciting characters, no matter how exciting the plot is, people will not have a sense of involvement! 2. Some details need to be understood to show what they are for. The first few chapters feel a bit like a running account because of the overuse of details. This kind of concise writing style is difficult to deal with, and it will become a mess if you are not careful. For example, Xuan Yi and Xiao Yu go shopping, describing this and that, going to a milk tea shop to drink milk tea, and they can also notice the name of the waiter Wei! (Even if it is foreshadowing, it must be foreshadowed, otherwise it will make people feel confused) If you think of the novel as a movie and the details as shots, the feeling in the first few chapters is: the scenery is beautiful, but the focus is random. 3. There are some things that the author thinks he understands. If the readers don't understand, then explain it to them. But the problem discovered from the chapter reviews is that the information provided to readers in the author's text is too limited! That's why some readers ask so many questions. The reader should have a God's perspective. If he can't even understand it, it will affect his mood. Don't skip a lot just for fear of missing out on exciting plots. Explaining to them, even if you add a few words, why you do this and not do that, can also enhance the sense of involvement. ⌯'ㅅ'⌯ Please write it down as soon as possible and sign the contract as soon as possible!

Ahhhhhh! I like it so much, the author must make more of it! Be careful, I hired a killer 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏[fn=58 ]😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏[fn=58 ]😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏[fn=58 ]😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

The book is very knowledgeable, the writing is very delicate, and the logic is very clear. Although the content is not particularly novel, it has many small highlights that can catch people's attention and make people want to read more.

Return visit, keep up the good work!

It's really hard to write a long review at nine thousand words, but I'll try my best to say it. First! It has a lot of imagination, and the ideas for writing the article are still very clear so far. Let's talk about the language, which is relatively concise and has its own style, which is good. One more compliment at the end (for fear of making you proud), I like the prologue! It's appetizing and has a strong sense of immersion. Come on, hurry up and code, don't interrupt!

After reading the author's work, the idea is very unique. I can't say much about his writing skills, but I'm a little confused. The suggestion is to add more inner descriptions at some key points, or to connect the plot through dialogue, otherwise a lot of foreshadowing will become confusing points. A new book must catch readers at the beginning. Otherwise, no one else will read it, and the chances of people following it will be greatly reduced, unless the author becomes popular in the future. The great masters don't do this because they have a large number of fans, but the newcomers do not have new books. This is also the real origin of the first three golden chapters. Come on, author, and keep persevering. I believe your book will achieve good results!

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My eyes light up! Quickly wear out the novelty