An Academic Gathering with Fellow Lichs

It's a pity to read this book. The imagination of the daily life of the academy and the creation of supporting characters are quite successful. It is fun and funny and has a distinctive personality. The background setting is basically self-explanatory except for the fact that the "holy light" is too powerful, which may cause the collapse of the combat power in the later period. The protagonist's growth path does not have particularly vulgar pretense. But it is a pity that it is a pity in the shaping of the protagonist's emotional line and the plot of saving the wandering city in the Forgotten King chapter. The emotional line of the protagonist is too abrupt. If there is no comparison with William's emotional line in the Forgotten King chapter later, it would be acceptable. However, in fact, William's emotional line is more successful than the protagonist's emotional line. Maybe the protagonist has become a trial work for the author to practice the emotional line shaping? This led to the later chapters involving the protagonist's emotional line. I skipped the Hamlet Castle plot because it was awkward. I watched William's emotional line more than the protagonist. The pretense of Wandering City is very blunt, even at the cost of killing William's father. This poor man with not much space is not unable to accept death, but he is also a peripheral figure in the plot. However, his death was too sudden and deliberate given his identity and background, including the subsequent forgotten kings who gave their power as kings. Their exits are not as foreshadowing as the death of the Death Star apprentice. Even after the death of the Death Star, one can say "Oh, he finally killed himself." I don't know if this is because they want to quickly enter the main plot. Currently, I have only seen the Forgotten Kings chapter, and I don't dare to read it later. My teeth hurt after I ate two pebbles during the meal. Are there any spoilers that tell me how much of the protagonist's emotional line will be in the later part? Has the plot of the dead supporting character been improved?

The book is very good, but the author places too much emphasis on the group portraits. The book has been followed up to now, but I really can't stand the long chapter on the witch and William. If the witch is to introduce the story of the gentleman and the upgrade of the protagonist, then just write it and it's over. There is no need to spend so much ink on the witch. After reading the witch chapter, I feel that I can't remember any of the names. And William, the protagonist didn't open it but he opened it? ? ? ? ? ? In addition, the large supporting characters will make some readers want to skip reading. However, the author's updates are for the supporting characters for most of the month, and the data reflected in the data is a decrease in subscriptions (maybe some people like me turned on automatic but skipped) or have not read the book for more than half a month and gradually forgot about the book. It is recommended that the author let the protagonist directly participate in the supporting characters, otherwise readers will feel no sense of existence.

A very good novel, it reminds me of one of my favorite novels, "The Experimental Diary of a Mad Lich". The daily laughter is mixed with the heavy past and the highlights of human nature, including love and hate, joy and beauty, sadness and melancholy.

First of all, this book is not bad. I personally like it quite a lot, but I have some suggestions that I would like to express directly to the author. First, I hope the author can have better control over his desire for expression. The desire for expression is certainly not a bad thing in itself. Who would write novels without the desire for expression? But a good novel requires the author to restrain his desire for expression. Especially in the book club circle, it is really not appropriate to spoil this kind of behavior. I can understand that when the author sees that his carefully foreshadowing and foreshadowing are not noticed or even misunderstood, he will feel that something is hidden and he can't help but mention it. But this is almost devastating to the reading experience, because the joy of reading and book friendship circles lies, to a large extent, in finding clues between the lines, communicating with book friends, and the joy of being slapped in the face for making wild guesses, or the joy of being lucky enough to guess right. But once the author comes out and seals the coffin, it becomes boring. Second, it is restraint in expression. It can be seen that the author is trying to restrain himself. He does not write about the world view in a long way like Xiaobai's novel. Instead, he tries to introduce other characters and make side remarks (I hope the author will not suddenly jump out and say, "I actually made it up now, without thinking about the settings in advance" to slap me in the face). However, the explanations are still too bloated in many cases, and I hope the author can better streamline or split them up. In terms of plot, I hope the author can leave more blank space and set up and maintain suspense better. Thirdly, I hope the author's descriptions can have more of a "movie feel" as Prince Ma said, because at present, there are still not many scenes that I can picture in my mind. There is also the fact that the switching of scenes is really stiff and lacks the connection and transition between scenes. This aspect also needs to be strengthened. Fourth, the emotional line. I feel like everyone feels this way. It's stiff and abrupt. The author himself also said that he didn't feel like he wrote the emotional drama well. It can be seen that the author is laying the foundation for the emotional line between the protagonist and Anna, but it still feels unnatural and does not have the feeling of being natural and natural. Having said so many shortcomings, let's talk about why I like it. Because I like this story, I like this setting, and I like the interesting dialogue that sparks ideas. These comments are just my expectations for the author as a reader, because I hope this spiritual story can be better crafted and made more exciting. As for how to operate it specifically, I really don't know how to refrigerate...

Two hundred thousand masterpieces. The protagonist is a bystander, the supporting characters are the core, and the story unfolded in a novel setting is very exciting and fascinating. However, the novella with the protagonist as the core and many supporting roles is relatively green. I didn't continue to look back, time didn't allow it, and I didn't know what would happen next. I only hope that the author can find his own way like the Andre members.

The author is thoughtful (profound thoughts and unique insights), and can incorporate them into words (fluent writing style and solid foundation of skills). The last book I read in a similar style was "I Am XX Fourteen", which gave me the illusion that all female writers are so eloquent. There are two points that impress me: artificial intelligence in the future and lawyer litigation now. I don't know much about cyberpunk, so I read that chapter which was very obscure and a bit confusing, and my consciousness was touched; but the chapter about lawyer litigation started to think about the current social reality with a smile. It is very similar to the plot in the novel, the profession of lawyer... The author will try to end the basically important and independent parts of the narrative in one chapter, which seems to be relatively long. This is a good habit. I hope not to lose it after it is published 🤓

The needle is not poking Every character is full and three-dimensional I just like this process of describing the protagonist's learning ability. It gives me a sense of reality, unlike the kind where you can learn skills in one click and then apply them skillfully, just like playing. The rhythm of this book is probably that of Academy_Real World Travel_Academy, so it feels like the protagonist's promotion is slower than other novels, but it's just right for me The needle doesn't poke.

It's very interesting. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Update quickly. I saved 17 chapters. I finished reading it in ten minutes. You are the reason why no one will reward you because you are slow to update. It is best to update five chapters a day

I have read more than 600 chapters so far, and I can't help but want to exchange a few words. Although this author who writes for fun may not necessarily listen to it... Let's talk about what's interesting first. The funny style of the lichs enjoying themselves in death complements the protagonist's behavior as a "normal person" but out of common sense. Just like the two characters in a cross talk, humor and humor are added with a spoonful of seriousness, which is very delicious. On the other hand, the various settings of this fantasy world are also very eye-catching, such as light bats, floating cities, delusional stories, etc. Various settings build a rich and lifelike fantasy world. Let's talk about the part that makes you feel out of touch. The lich seeking death is very interesting, and the three scoundrels in the literary club are very funny, but these humorous plots are independent notes. They are just scattered there, without a continuous tune to create a sense of rhythm in the main body. There is no good connection between chapters. Each chapter is like an independent event. Without a good line to connect them, there is a lack of overall rhythm. If I have to say it, Raymond and Holy Light are the line that continues from the beginning to the present, but it is a pity that the protagonist is not the lich who will make Holy Light invincible in the world. There is no mystery of death, no bitter hatred of brothers and sisters, and no faith and obsession. The protagonist has several friends, and has several labels such as "pure one", "evil god" and "traveler", and then he has done a lot of amazing things, and many girls like him. But I still don't seem to recognize this person. Can't see his motives, can't feel his emotions. Maybe it's because I don't have enough understanding. With the appearance of the villain Sheli Tong, this feeling of tearing becomes more obvious. The villain is so cool, extremely resourceful, evil and cruel, causing trouble one after another, and escaping unharmed again and again, as if there is a vulgar set note on his face like "I will live to the end to fight the protagonist to the death." Where is the protagonist? The protagonist has no sense of existence and is just running errands for family and friends as a tool. Anyway, in the end, with just a shout, the protagonist can summon the seven aunts and eight aunts, and use the power of "fetters" to defeat the lonely villain. Well, that's all.

It's just that the promotion is not strong enough. Good novels will eventually be discovered. Authors must not be eunuchs and write in the odd time they have every day.

What I want to see is the story of the protagonist, not the story of a supporting character. It's okay if you want to write a story about a supporting character, but can you not interrupt the protagonist's plot by inserting large sections of the supporting character's plot? The chapter title complains "Who is the protagonist?" Do you think you are humorous? Could you please stop focusing so much on the story of the supporting characters? Do you know what it means to readers when writing like this? The emotional description of the epidemic doctor is not even as much as that of William. Who wants to read William's story? In the witch chapter, some people complained that the protagonist suddenly disappeared, and a lot of new characters appeared to interact with each other. The protagonist only appeared after the interaction. I thought it was jelly grass, but I didn't expect it to be a poisonous weed pretending to be jelly grass, or a poisonous weed that only becomes poisonous after eating it at a later stage.

I can only say one word about the relationship between Arianna and the protagonist, "abrupt". The twist is abrupt, otherwise I would have given up on the previous writing, and would have turned it on and off again. There is no need to forcefully write it. If you don't have a heroine, it doesn't mean you don't have a wife. The protagonist can get married. It can be written in a subtle way and the wife does not appear.

The mission of the blood book editor (1/100)

The irresistible charm

It feels like a fantasy to explore the new and unknown. But is it really okay to read light novels?

I subscribed to Qidian specifically for this book. Now that I have read it, I want to complain. It feels very good, but the protagonist is too inconspicuous. Compared with the people around him, the protagonist's character is very ordinary and there is not much plot, so there is no sense of immersion. And compared to the surrounding bosses, the protagonist is not too strong. The look and feel is very strange. An ordinary, weak protagonist feels like a supporting character among a lot of bosses with distinctive personalities and superior strength. It feels the same with or without him. I hope there will be an unexpected turn later

The only drawback of this book is that the main character is a living person

After reading about 400 chapters, I felt a little bit unbearable. The protagonist was led by the nose the whole time, and I felt that there was no growth at all after 400 chapters. His strength is still insignificant compared to the general environment. When something happens, he either calls his parents or the evil god. Highlighting a "passive" one, I keep getting cheated. I know that the author may want to create laughter and show the feeling of harming friends. But being passive all the time is really a bit frustrating. Learning is passive, emotion is passive, and even participating in the competition is completely passive. It is not impossible to be passive in light novels, but completely following the crowd makes people feel uncomfortable. The more I read, the more frustrated I become. The protagonist is like a marionette. After 400 chapters, I can't even find a single highlight moment. If you want to say that the main character is to survive in the cracks, the protagonist is not very motivated and does not pursue power. I feel there is no good balance between funny and serious

I feel that the protagonist is too weak as a time traveler, his performance is very mediocre, his subjective thoughts are pitiful, and he is inexplicably liked by the heroine. He often tries to commit suicide and leans towards the evil god. In short, he is not like a normal human being and cannot be brought in at all.

The protagonist is no different from a retard Maybe my language is too strong, but it is true. If the protagonist is better portrayed, I will read this novel earlier, instead of only reading it now and then when the novel is completed and has no achievements.

Don't read book reviews. Don't read book reviews. If I read this book after reading the book reviews, I feel like I can't stand it.

I have read more than 30 films and found that the portrayal of the supporting characters is unparalleled, but the protagonist always feels that he has no personality charm of his own. This is the first time I have seen an author who writes the supporting characters better than the protagonist. Will it still be like this later?

The book is a good book, but I like to fill it with all kinds of water, resulting in a lack of continuity and excitement in the plot. Various events mixed with a lot of humanistic values ​​lead to an anticlimactic ending. Generally speaking, I come to read a complete story. You can write about humanities and values, but it must be the realization when the story is almost finished, rather than instilling a lot of humanistic values ​​at the beginning of the story, and then the plot ends in a sloppy way.

Someone tell me, will the emotional line still be like this in the future? What are you going to write about the next plot? Does it look good? And where will the emotional line go? I can't stand this description anymore. I jump from 175 to 185 and then to 200. I just feel a thorn in my heart. It's not easy to see the protagonist finally understand the identity of the lich, and this "heart" emotional line is about to be unsustainable. Here, let me tell you what's behind and see if you're interested.

I've finished reading the free chapter. There's nothing wrong with the plot, but I'm not satisfied with the cheats.

The prostitution party completes the copy and leaves a mark. If this is the author's first book, his level is comparable to that of a great master, far exceeding that of most newcomers. I read the book when it first opened. It suited my taste very much. The disorder of the lich was deeply portrayed in just a few sentences. But at that time, I couldn't afford to wait for updates, so I forgot about it as soon as I started it. I recently finished reading it in one sitting, and I have to praise the author for the perfect ending of the first book, which has filled in all the holes. It is better than many great writers who are used to bad endings. I like the book very much, so I will talk about the shortcomings after reading it. The overall level is above first-class. It's almost a masterpiece. It has the flaws that many people have said. It's a bit messy in the later stages. Some extra chapters are actually chapters to compensate for the character background of the supporting characters. They are sandwiched in the middle of the main text, which sometimes interferes with the compactness of the plot. It's not that these extras are bad, these extras portray the supporting characters very well. However, like the Green Dragon Sacrifice episode, the text suddenly jumps to her plot, and after reading it, I realize that it turned out to be another corrupted personality that has been re-merged. But I was confused when I first watched it. After all, characters in time suddenly appeared, and the sense of fragmentation was strong after all. Then let's talk about the plot that I still remember. At first, the protagonist studied medicine, and then discovered the Holy Light. Well, destroy it. After joining the Lich Academy and starting to learn necromancy, there was also the use of studying medicine. Because studying medicine, the creation of necromancy was too normal. Pretty good setting. But the back is completely gone. That's right, not only this setting, but the entire protagonist is almost gone. The portrayal of the supporting characters reduced the role of the protagonist to very few, but I still watched it in one sitting. I don't know how it feels to not see the protagonist for dozens of chapters if I am following up on it. The early plot is very good. You take risks to learn about mysteries, unlock talents, solve events, and see the scenery in other parts of the world. You also encounter enemies by the way. Step by step, nothing too fast and nothing too slow. In this way, no one will talk about it. The content, world view reveal, and progress are all perfect. It also dug some holes and revealed a corner of the nature of power, the extinction of dragons, the war of the Holy Light, the corresponding power of several special locks, and the crown of the royal family. I particularly like the setting of the ethnic group. The copy of Vampire is also very well written. The uncle is portrayed very charmingly in it. I was a little disappointed that my uncle was never mentioned again. In the end, there was no plot for the uncle, the dream messenger. As mentioned earlier, the dream messenger takes much longer to study than ordinary people, so the protagonist thought of his uncle. I thought the uncle's story would reach a climax later. Thinking about it, the reason is that there are too many supporting characters and the story cannot be allocated. By the time the dragon is resurrected in the middle, the story begins to run amok. I thought about it, and readers all said it was the reason for the chaos in the later stages. At first, we followed the protagonist's path of learning necromancy. The protagonist goes on adventures, unlocks talents, and improves his necromancy. Along the way, you also learn the secrets of your friends in Lich Academy and learn about their clan stories. After resurrecting the dragon, there were too many parts about the five dragon clans. Too much information was released at once, and the protagonist seemed invisible again, which made it feel very confusing. Even though the writing of Fire Dragon's Life Sacrifice is very good, the reading experience is not good. The protagonist of the Five Dragons part suddenly changed. Many readers here said that the combat power has collapsed. Indeed, ordinary soldiers who did not use the power of the clan were infinitely resurrected. It's not as good as the previous war between the Rat King and the Holy Light Legion. As for Raymond, isn't it normal for his combat power to collapse? He is a tenth-level boss. However, the concepts behind it are contradictory, and it is indeed too abstract. Another question, the protoss part. It was acceptable for a protoss in front of me, but suddenly there was a protoss extra in the back. This is so unfriendly to readers. There is no setting at all, and it is too difficult to understand how to get into the trap. I still watched some interstellar. I don't even know the story behind this star spirit setting. World of Warcraft? The appearance is a bit similar, but the following extras are clearly the Interstellar Light Punisher and Dark Punisher. The problem is that the holy light that Star is not using seems to be psychic energy. All these make readers say that the later period is chaotic. In addition, I like the Lich even more. The description of the Lich in the later stage was too much scene-stealing. Of course I still have to say that as the first book, the author's ending is considered perfect. The boss is killed, everyone is happy, the story is over, and there is a lingering aftertaste. I hope that the author will get better and better as he writes. When he writes a masterpiece, he will subscribe to the full book and save it as a souvenir. 2023.8.18. Remarks on reading

After seeing a few pictures after they were published, I always felt that the author was in a hurry. Don't listen to those people who say you don't want water. So much useful information in one sheet. I couldn't eat it at all, but felt very choked. Appropriate amount of water, water, buffer it. I was very tired after reading it. Good stuff, good stuff, good stuff. Too dry and the relationship line with the mermaid. It just feels very abrupt.

I regret subscribing. I feel the same as a certain Lu. I write based on my imagination. It's okay in the early stage but not later.

Thoughts after reading It can be seen that the author is in a hurry to finish the last chapter. Although the plot progress is reasonable, the connection is no longer concerned. The reader must go back and re-read the previous content several times to understand the cause and effect. I feel like it was sent by Raymond? Hey, Raymond is alive again, hey, he wins. When reading, I might read each chapter twice to appreciate the details and foreshadowing, but I finished it and read it together. There are only dozens of chapters left to finish, which makes it unrealistic for me to change my mind. It should be said that the author's writing in this whole book is very stream-of-consciousness. The sentence structure is often fragmented, and it feels like reading a foreign book translated by a computer. Just highlight one thing that feels good to write, translate the picture in your mind into words, and the rest depends on how much the reader can understand. In order to keep up with the author's train of thought, the reader has to read quickly to feel the artistic conception from the sentences that lack subjects or cohesion, rather than the details. But when the finale comes up with details, they have to slow down and read. As a result, the readers who are reading along with the book have not yet turned around, so all these details have not entered the brain. After looking at the plot, I just felt that it was a bit hazy, as if there was some foreshadowing, but at the same time, there seemed to be none. If the author's purpose is to make people watch it over and over again and sort out the plot by themselves, I can only say that his purpose has been achieved...