This Mage Is Too Cautious

I read it in one sitting and it was pretty good. Compared to the appetite of gamers, it is better to be reborn. There are also good ideas, the conspirator, the single-player novice village, and the corpse whip are quite interesting. It's nice to not have too much introduction, and some historical background is also opened from the perspective of NPC. I am just worried that the quality will be too high and slow down the update.

Chapter 2: Abandonment His father is written here as wise, a genius without any connections? Didn't he have a mentor who appreciated him? If not, he wouldn't be able to reach the position of genius at all, especially as a civilian? ? And you died of depression during the investigation? Has the alimony been swallowed up? Why do you get alimony without redress? Rehabilitated, do you need alimony? Please be smart when writing, don't work hard to create the main line, just write a light novel, isn't it good?

I can do the mage and assassin again, the main character is cute.

I abandoned it when I saw Chapter 4. The profession introduced that the priest is his biological son and has always been strong. However, he chose a mage who was useless in the early stage but was as powerful as the priest in the later stage. I don't even know what's the point of choosing this? Is it worthy of your rebirth?

I originally read the introduction and thought it was a good book, but there is a conspiracy at the beginning. Could it be that a game novel cannot be written without hatred or something like that? How nice it is to play games happily! But in reality, we have to make some enemies. Is this interesting?

I haven't read the others yet, but I was happy to see that the author was finally not the older sister in the beginning, but it turned out that the younger brother Ya was just a decoration, and the cousin successfully replaced the younger sister. However, in Chapter 20, there is no past lover, current school beauty, beautiful female assassin, female warrior, female priest, or female shooter. It feels really cool.

As a pure newbie, the book I wrote was signed for the first time. I was lucky enough to test the water and push it out. I was recommended by category once. To be honest, I was very happy. However, the data of the recommendation was average and still incomparable with the big guys. I won't push it next week. In fact, I am a very timid person and I usually don't dare to do it. I read the comment section because I was afraid of being scolded. I remember one day when I clicked on Writer's Assistant and saw a comment. I opened it with great interest, only to find out that it said I wanted to abandon the book. Of course, I don't accept criticism. There will definitely be logical loopholes or poor thinking when writing a book for the first time. I am not a god, and there will be unreasonable places in the book, but I try my best to build a fairly complete world. Some comments mentioned that starting to attract hatred is actually a learned trick to increase the chance of signing a contract. Having said this, I would like to express my deep gratitude to those who gave me serious comments and praised me. How should I put it? I was really happy after seeing it. It felt like my efforts were recognized. There are also readers who voted for many recommendations at once and gave me rewards. All these gave me the motivation to continue coding. I have written so much, and I don't know if anyone will read it. I feel that there is no need to post a single chapter, so I posted it in the comment area. If you have any good suggestions and ideas, you can post them in the comment area and I will read them. Finally, thank you all for your support. I am going to code. Recently, I feel that my mental endurance has become much stronger. Writing a book can really train one's mentality.

After reading three chapters, I complained that the main character is super selfish. To put it simply, he is a super white-eyed wolf!

The introduction is like this, why do you want to take revenge after your younger brother was killed before he was reborn? It's another routine. By the way, are there any Rebirth online games that are not about Rebirth and Revenge?

Let's start a chapter to persuade him to withdraw. Never again.

I gave up after reading three chapters. Why? The content of these three chapters looks like the beginning of the novel I read five or six years ago. There is nothing new, and the writing style is a bit poor, just like a running novel. Although the title of the book could attract me immediately like the current work, the content could not attract my attention immediately and put me off immediately.

. . The blacksmith hasn't paid back yet 😅

I just watched two of them, just this routine, and this name, what about Hua Aoyun, Hua Heng, I just couldn't stand it. It's already 2020.

The awkward points written earlier were all okay. The overclocking section made me want to read it, but as soon as I entered the dungeon, I lost my taste. It seems that what readers like me want to see is the protagonist using existing means to use skills to win instead of relying on the European Emperor to descend on Lissandra. The protagonist is like a waste. I really have some expectations in the beginning. Why does it become more and more boring after finishing the book? The tutor has to be a sexy beauty, and he has to be surrounded by a bunch of warblers, how can he tolerate this? The first 40 or so cards count as food and grass - the later ones. . .

520 Creation is a good day.

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