Red Mansion Calligraphy

This book tells the story of Lin Daiyu's stupid question about dog-licking. There are different logics. Let's just say that Lin Ruhai's mother and family members showed their kindness, but turned a blind eye (not to mention that the protagonist is too young, and the protagonist has an uncle in the family). Then, when the Jia family's affairs were told to the protagonist, the Jia family's affairs were very clear, but in the end, things were not done logically, and what was thought and what was done were separated. The same goes for the protagonist. You clearly decided to be prudent, but in the end, you told Lin Ruhai everything you read from the Dream of Red Mansions book, and later even asked Lin Daiyu to find out the bugs. I see this has gone viral. The protagonist has a stable and scheming character, but ends up doing things so brainlessly. Forget it, I don't want to read it anyway

Did Xiao Huang write too many poems and was banned? Judging from the author's previous update frequency, it doesn't seem like he particularly cares about his grades 😅

At first I thought it was a book about eunuchs and I didn't want to read it, but there was a recommendation on the book list, so I gave it a try anyway. Now that I have read Chapter 50, I feel that the book eunuch is not unreasonable. I'll keep reading and see. Comprehensive score 3.5/5 Problems: 1. There is too much popular science content. Internet articles are fast food literature, and readers usually have little patience, not to mention that some content is not necessary for popular science at all. The necessary popular science can be left in the author's words or in a single chapter. 2. There is a problem with the narrative rhythm, the main line progresses slowly, and the hidden lines are poorly laid out. Just read the title and skip a few chapters without affecting your reading. What should be omitted is not omitted, and what should be expanded is not expanded. 3. There is too much foreshadowing of the worldview. Fan fiction itself has an advantage in the development of the worldview, because readers already have a general understanding of the composition of the worldview before reading. Therefore, there is no need to put too much effort into explaining the world view over and over again in the writing. Even if necessary, it should not be like this book that directly throws the main line aside and uses conversation to unfold it, which is very fragmented. 4. The description of the political struggle is too bland, and it reads very different from ordinary historical texts. It wasn't until a reader speculated in the book review section that it might be a female author who had previously written a female channel, that I realized where this sense of incongruity came from. This is not because there is any prejudice against female authors of historical literature, but it is quite strange to deconstruct and launch political struggles from the perspective of women's love for children, and I don't really agree with some of the political understandings in the book. 5. The author buried a big hole for himself in the emotional drama and the characterization of Lin Daiyu. The same character looks different in the eyes of different readers, and the same character looks different in different fanfics. For example, the character Qin Keqing, in some fan fiction, is a housekeeper who uses a sparrow to achieve enlightenment, while in others she has had five affairs and has a chaotic private life. Therefore, the character must be viewed separately from the original work. The problem with this book is that it always emphasizes that Lin Daiyu lacks education and has a bad reputation. In this way, the subsequent relationship development with the protagonist will inevitably be criticized. In the book review area, a brother spoiled the identity of Lin Daiyu's real wife. Many brothers argued endlessly about whether Lin Daiyu could be the main character's wife. Those who were negative were influenced by the author's emphasis and believed that the main character was taking over, which was disrespectful to the promising main character and Shi Lezhi's behavior. Those who support her are based on Lin Daiyu's family background and character in the original work, and they are well matched. So this is why most Red Mansions fans downplay Lin Daiyu's upbringing problems, or arrange for her nuns to educate her. In the original work, no one of the Jia family's daughters came to ask for marriage when they were of the right age, and no one made the decision when Lin Daiyu reached the marriage proposal age, which also shows that reputation was indeed a big pit in ancient times. Lin Daiyu herself was already sick, had no maternal upbringing, was disrespectful and did not mourn, and did not pay attention to the protection of men and women. Fan authors always find ways to downplay or resolve disagreements, but the author of this book has been emphasizing the big pitfalls from the beginning. How to get back to it later?

The author should not let Lin Daiyu marry Jia Baoyu, the most incompetent person.

The author's writing skills are good, and the combination of text and white is quite natural.

It's a good book, it shouldn't start a harem. I basically gave up after reading 200 chapters. The author's writing is good, and the story was good in the early stages, but then it fell apart. You still have a harem. I can only say that an 80-point online book dropped directly to 20 points! Not only the group of female surnames in the later period, but also Yinglian in the early period should not be accepted. Well, if you have a crush on a girl and suddenly sleep with other women, the plot arrangement feels inappropriate.

How to say it! So many books on The Red Mansion have always talked about loan sharking, but in fact, before the collapse of the Jia family, loan sharking was a small matter. I don't know why the current author thinks that this can control the lifeblood of the other party. Specifically, you can watch some crime-solving TV dramas from ten years ago, the kind that wiped out the evil forces, such as Ren Changxia? Before the evil collapsed, how many people had no way to seek help? Before it was wiped out, even if there were officials who made decisions for them, the final result was basically that the official would be demoted or... This was still the case twenty years ago, let alone the world called feudalism hundreds of years ago. The evidence of guilt will not be found until the building collapses. Holding the opponent's lifeblood is probably not holding the blade.

The protagonist helped the Lin family to make great achievements, risking a narrow escape, and snatched an account of salt merchants bribing powerful people throughout the court and delivered it to the Yamen in person. However, the emperor rewarded the Jia family with a palace maid as a concubine. This was too far-fetched. Well, the Lin family has been separated from the protagonist's family for many years, and they are quite distant relatives. The Jia family and the protagonist's family have nothing to do with each other. Not to mention that the Jia family is sister Lin. This is the first time in more than ten years that I have heard of the protagonist being a distant relative!

What disgusted me about this book was that the author clearly wanted to expand the harem. In the early stage, the relationship with Daiyu was written as if they were a couple for the rest of their lives, but later on, the previous masterpiece of poetry turned into a joke.

Jia Baoyu is not a good match, and Lin Daiyu is not a good wife. It would be too insulting to match the protagonist with Lin Daiyu.

Everything else about this book is good, except why Lin Daiyu was chosen as the heroine. Every time she is involved in the plot, the author skips it. Doesn't the author feel depressed? It's not that I hate her, it's that the author made her hateful. From her situation in the article, as a man, he wouldn't want her. Maybe the author likes her. If it were me, I'd rather marry a well-matched woman who doesn't like her but doesn't hate her.

Update soon. Can the author come out and say something? So many people are waiting to see it?

After a month's break, who can go to the author's home to see if it's getting cold?

The most disgusting book "The Red Mansion" was probably written by a woman, right? The male protagonist is just an introduction, turning each golden hairpin into a variety of bitches in modern society, and the author has substituted himself. . . . .

This book is suitable for readers who like logic and can calm down and feel. Those who just read the novel will not find it interesting, but those who can read it will find it very interesting. The author's description of the married life of young couples with ancient knowledge is really great. The picture is very strong. It quietly makes readers feel that Daiyu is really happy, and it has completely changed Daiyu's fate without being far-fetched. My wife suffered from mild depression before we got married. Her surname is Lin, also known as Sister Lin. She often feels sad about spring and autumn, and secretly sheds tears. After marriage, I worked hard to fulfill the promise I made when we got married, patiently guided her, often took her to play outdoors, and paid great attention to the details in life, so that she could feel my love and care for her. In less than a year, her depression was really cured. Now she is happy every day, and she is much more cheerful and cheerful. Her personality has really changed a lot. So I was really happy to see Daiyu and the protagonist meet, get acquainted, know each other, fall in love, and then happily be together. Life is not so grand, but the most trivial details. I hope that good men and women in the world can find good partners to spend the rest of their lives with. I hope that families with good husbands and good wives will always be happy and happy.

When will the author come back to update the article? It would be a pity to abandon such article

The author is really willful, either not updating, or updating more than a dozen chapters at a time, which makes people love and hate him 🤫🤫

I'm too lazy to say too much, so I suggest you read Chapter 69 directly. In a word, you deserve to be thrown into the street

Abandoned. Are there any non-stalling stories in Red Mansion? Some modern people who live in feudal society say they are from modern times and treat maids as equals, and at the same time they accept beauties one after another, and they almost have twelve hairpins. Daiyu was only twelve years old. Even if it was because of her good impression in the book, wouldn't it be abnormal for modern people to have feelings for girls of primary school age? I can still accept fifteen or six, but twelve is too young.

The more I read, the more speechless I feel. The beginning of the writing is good, but the rest is a mess

After reading the previous fifty or sixty chapters, to be honest, the writing is okay and some allusions are good, but the plot is really a bit boring. It's like sit-ups, ups and downs. If you repeatedly lay the groundwork and write about a node, you won't want to read it anymore. The plot develops too slowly...

The author has ideas, but this is an online article