Infinity Begins on the Edge of Tomorrow

I had already deleted the book, but accidentally read this book again and saw a single chapter named by the author Let me write down my feelings in detail The author did describe that he tried his best in the first part, and then his teammates were still killed, but he also wrote about the feeling of pretending to be cool after his teammates died In the first part, he did not reveal his strength to his teammates at all, and let his teammates do useless work. In the middle, after all his efforts, all the teammates were still dead. How did he describe it later? Original text Ning Yang was unmoved, and the corner of his mouth suddenly curled up as if he hadn't heard Li Hu's words. Instead, he looked at Bat Kai with a smile and said, "I don't know who the target is, but I want to remind you that you and I are no longer ten meters away." My teammates have died so much to protect you, you The corner of his mouth is raised, he is still smiling, and then he tells the enemy about his abilities without telling his teammates. Doesn't it look like he is showing off, and he has no feeling at all about the death of his teammates If you are discovered, you should ventilate with your teammates in advance, let them cooperate with the protagonist, let the protagonist get close to Bat Kai, and then kill him directly. , And then pretend to talk after the kill, instead of revealing one's weaknesses before the fight I told another book friend "Ye Yuzhi Maple" that the mentality and behavior are inconsistent. You did write that the protagonist tried his best, but you also wrote the feeling of being brainless and pretending. He was completely indifferent to the casualties of his teammates. If he didn't kill the enemy quickly, he was busy first. Pretend, very leisurely Can kill people completely, the enemy will ask why before dying, and then say it to show off There is no communication with teammates at all, relying on oneself seems to be invincible at level 4, but still can only watch teammates die, you are the strongest within ten meters, why can't you ventilate with teammates first?

The protagonist can learn aerodynamics, some weapon structures and telekinesis, and strive to break through to the molecular and atomic level. It would be best to break through to the proton level, so that the protagonist can be said to be invincible even with one kilogram of telekinesis.

Tell me your opinion. Let me first state that I don't want to criticize the author. If you agree, just think about it. If you don't agree, forget it. The main problem discovered so far is that in the author's writing style, the protagonist's mentality and behavior are not coordinated in some places, which is reflected in the interaction with his companions. The writing style gives people the feeling that the protagonist can deal with immediate troubles with ease, but when he is replaced by his companions, he is a step slower. However, when he is a step slower, the protagonist does not give the reader the feeling of nervousness, anxiety or powerlessness, so it is very strange. To put it bluntly, the protagonist's sexual behavior is inconsistent. The protagonist can act willfully, emphasizing spontaneity; It can be insidious and cunning, framing today and poisoning tomorrow; It can be cold and ruthless, you will die if you die, it is best to die quickly; It can be the Virgin's blood, never let go of any companion, everyone Everyone can be saved; It can be upright and upright, and everyone is responsible for the rise and fall of the country; In the author's writing, I feel that the current protagonist puts his own interests first, but when he can, he is also willing to help people who are friendly to him or people he likes, such an ordinary person. However, judging from the performance, it is really impossible to unify character and behavior.

I know that the author wants to create a protagonist who is self-centered but not lacking in willfulness. But I watched more than half of it, and I found that it was getting more and more uncomfortable to watch. It always gave people a feeling of half-finished work, and some people were not prepared to save the protagonist, so don't sigh before they die. It's a pity this, it's a pity that, and then wait for them to die. Be decisive, okay? Either save it and lead the team to victory, or be cold-blooded and win by yourself. In the A Nightmare on Elm Street section, the protagonist did nothing, just watched his teammates die one by one, and then took out medicine to save them when they were about to die, but then failed to save them. It can be said that the content of more than ten chapters, from my perspective, does not advance the plot at all, it just describes the deaths of teammates one by one. I even feel that the captain is more of a protagonist than the protagonist

I couldn't stand the first plot. When entering this kind of reincarnation space, the first thing to do is to think about finding teammates? So awesome? Infinite rewind to gain favor with teammates, and then this female teammate becomes the most important teammate. Do you know the plot? Made a rollback? Then what? Can you just rely on your teammates? How old is the author? I've seen this movie. I don't know how much worse it is than the main character in the original movie. I'm speechless!

It was so frustrating to see you. You said you just made the protagonist a sharp-tongued person with a sharp mouth and a tofu-like heart, wouldn't that be enough? If you insist on writing a ruthless and indifferent character and then behave like a good person, are you completely hypocritical to the readers?

I just want to know, is this the 2 billion score? Millions spent, where is the rest? You know where you are, but you still dare to stay? What about blood? What about martial arts? What about special items? What about medicines? What about weapons? If you don't exchange it for anything, why keep it?

We need to be more tolerant of newcomers and new books. Just discuss it rationally. Great masters can also write short stories, and great masters can also make the protagonist's words and deeds inconsistent. Just like in life, each of us has many sides. When we face a stranger, it is in line with normal people's reaction to be conservative. Superpowers can be compared to real money, and this part of the debate can be compared to the business competition between two business groups. This is the first time the protagonist's business group has met and cooperated. In the first commercial competition between the two groups, the opponent seemed to be strong, but our side lost its armor. Moreover, the protagonist still suspects that there is a mole in our team. Dare I ask you, would you reveal that you have enough money to kill the other party? What's more, the protagonist and the opponent are only 50-50 apart, and it depends on performance. Of course you have to be conservative. One last question for you. Does your best friend know how much money you have in savings? If you don't know, then there is no reason for you to ask the protagonist to reveal his trump card to someone he meets for the first time. It's too hard for you, everyone.

Except for the first Edge of Tomorrow world, what are the other worlds? They are too rare. Don't blindly pursue novels and have no resonance. Even if you write about vultures, it is better than writing about hunters.

The first and second dungeons were pretty good, but from the third dungeon I started to let myself go. All the style and atmosphere in the front were completely washed away. I barely finished the third copy and couldn't stand it anymore.

The protagonist's combat prowess is so great that he reached level 4 after the first mission. According to what the author said later, he is obviously higher than level 2 and 3 advanced ability users, but it is so difficult to block a bullet, and his physical fitness is so high that he is still hurt by bullets, huh. . . . Looking for a ghostwriter?

After watching the first plot, I thought it was OK, but when it came to the second plot, I was dumbfounded. A man named Meng Chongmo ruined a pot of soup Slowly, the protagonist's IQ was also lowered. I'll take another look. I don't have much hope with just this recommendation vote.

I watched the first original copy. The setting is pretty good and the imagination is quite big, but it just feels frustrating! Obviously it was the heroine's own superpower that allowed the murderer to establish an alliance with me. He constantly used his superpower to create timelines, kill other people, and shape the direction of the world. As a result, not only the family was destroyed, but also the people he loved became insane. . .

Author, I want to ask you a question. I feel like there is something wrong with Jingso, because I feel like this thing is useless and can only be used to buy things. But why do other people need this thing? What's the use? Change it to something else? So in the end, what does a person who doesn't need to change rent use this? So this thing should be used to strengthen equipment.

Except that the pig's feet are disgusting to kneel down and lick! I like them all

I've read more than 40 chapters and I don't want to read anymore. Let me tell you about each poisonous point and loophole! The disadvantage is that the real world is too complex and the settings are quite high. I'm afraid that later on the protagonist is already very awesome in reincarnation and then discovers that there are even more awesome beings in the real world. Not any better. One poisonous point is that you said that you did not get the benefits or legacy of the Wall Breaker, but after you returned to reality, you immediately caused trouble in the real world, don't your teammates understand? What's more, there are people with super powers. Anyway, I haven't read it yet, which doesn't make me feel any better. It seems frustrating to watch.

I remember the protagonist knows how to cook. It was written in Edge of Tomorrow

By the way, Dreamless Medicine should only be something that requires points. I think it would be more comfortable to buy some without lacking points

Personal opinion, rational discussion After the return of Edge of Tomorrow, the protagonist has the memory of reincarnation, but others do not, but the last reincarnation of the protagonist is used as the criterion. Does this mean that the ability of rebirth has a higher priority than the main god 🤔 If it is a bug, it is too obvious Please ask the author to clarify my doubts (Of course I only saw it here, maybe the author explained it later and I didn't see it, forgive me 😁)

You can still read it at the beginning, but the later you go, the harder it is to understand what is written.

This book is quite nice. Edge of Tomorrow is very well written, but the length after that is a bit lacking.

I regret booking all of them. I don't like the worlds I wrote about later.

This author has a bit of a literary youth feel. What can I say about writing a book? Self-pleasure is a common problem of every literary youth author, but it is still acceptable and can be read. It is considered good. The main thing is that the character of the protagonist is very different from ordinary people -_-||, he always has to show his unique personality (ﾉ_ _)ﾉ. I can't tell whether it's better or not, but I can read the book and endure it, after all, I want to live a good life, right? Are you reading a book? Don't shiver. . . . .

In just one sentence, the first world received 400 million reincarnation points! If you can accept it, continue!

The book does have some minor flaws, but to me personally it's like a fairy tale, so keep it up 🤭

It's too draggy and a little watery

When I reached the Holy City, I felt like the novel had already been finished.

It looks a little uncomfortable, not my cup of tea...

It's a pity that the first world was too exaggerated. The protagonist received 2 billion reward points. The author didn't even know how to spend it on the protagonist.

I remember the setting of Edge of Tomorrow was the circulation ability brought by blood. The first world had so many deaths, seriously? I don't need to say more about the blood lost from a severed limb, right? In such a large environment as the battlefield, there is no situation where he is paralyzed and comatose after being bombed? ? ? Even if you have much more blood than the protagonist, you can't withstand such a torment, right? If this heaven-defying ability were mine, I would never be willing to deliberately reincarnate many, many times. If you die, you will lose a little bit. Unless you die immediately with every headshot, you will leak it every time. If you die, you will die when you really need it.