
Taoist Priests Are Cruel
道士凶残
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 189k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Mythic Cultivation
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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81Chapters
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Is the protagonist a time traveler? Looking a little confused
The protagonist's world should be one of the 3000 worlds, right? Revitalizing Taoism?
I read a few chapters and found the pace a bit fast. If you meet a girl on the road and give her steamed buns, what kind of girl is she? What clothes to wear and what hairstyle to wear? Just saying that she looks like a porcelain doll is not enough. Readers are tired of porcelain doll-like descriptions. What are the specific characteristics of the long face, round eyes? Small mouth? Fair and rosy complexion? I saw the business houses of wealthy families. What kind of business house? The one with blue bricks and large tiles? What color clothes does the servant wear? What does a lady look like? A head full of pearls? What impression do facial features give people? I can't feel the picture. We know that the protagonist is an unpopular Taoist priest. When he went down the mountain and was hungry, a little girl gave him a steamed bun. It happened that the girl was possessed by evil spirits. Then he went to her house to solve her problem. Then her mother reported it to the government and the protagonist was imprisoned. I didn't feel anything in my mind after watching it. The image is not strong. Maybe the author can consider working on the details to make each character more distinct, so that when readers recall the characteristics of the characters, they can have one or some recognized characteristics. It's a family thing, if I say something wrong, please don't scold me. Just turn over