Double Image Under One Person

It's enough to mention the handsome protagonist once or twice, but it's meaningless if you mention it all the time. There are also women who jump off buildings for him, which is a bit poisonous. Author, please do it well, don't be so mean.

I just want to ask where did Zhang Chulan get the opportunity?

I am really mindless and seize the opportunity. I am afraid that I want to try Sister Baoer's burying skills or taste the fragrance of Master Tian's breakfast.

After seeing such a stupid introduction, what chance does Zhang Chulan have?

Just by looking at the introduction, you know it's not good looking.

No, author, you are still toying with the mainstream. To be honest, these pictures almost made me crazy.

If you still have investment opportunities, please give me a quota, I promise to keep updating... ~ I am humblely asking for investment.

The male protagonist is like a Shabi. This reality is already disgusting to Shabi. I am reading a novel and you have to feed me two handfuls of shit. I am convinced. The author 👍 should quickly ask the male protagonist to donate his eyes.

The current situation is a bit confusing. I don't know whether it is appropriate to write like this and how big the audience will be. The plot really dragged on, hey... If you feel like you can't stand the foreshadowing, just skip to Chapter 30. Because around chapter 30, the plot is about Zhang Chulan. It has been updated to chapter 13 so far, and there are still 17 chapters left, three chapters a day, just six days, very fast. For friends who have been poisoned by the previous one, wait and see after six days. If you still can't accept it, then it's better to get together and part ways. Some of the previous characters will be important in this book. Because I don't want to copy everything from one person. Otherwise, wouldn't you be happy just copying one person's plot? Just wanted to express something different. Well, that's it~

To put it bluntly, just looking at the introduction, it's not reasonable at all. Zhang Chulan's opportunities were all given by his grandfather (such as the source of Qi Ti, connections) and it is impossible to take them away unless you treat him as his elder brother or younger brother and then kill him. Only in this way can it be taken away. Maybe Zhang Huaiyi will not pass it on to you because he thinks you are too murderous. So um it's not reasonable.

Really, the problem you have now, author, is that it is too disconnected from the plot of One Person. I know you want to write a setting and complete the background of One Person. What is the problem now? Chapter 19, it doesn't even give me the feeling that the protagonist is in the world of Under One Person. If you change the names of Zhang Chulan and the others, they can directly change their names to urban powers. The sense of disconnect with Under One Person is too serious. There is a lack of interaction with the characters in the original plot. It doesn't mean that you just name them and interact. It's a fan of the same person. The biggest attraction is to interact with the original characters, rather than setting a background by yourself. In that case, you might as well write your own original work. At least I read 19 chapters of your book. If it weren't for the title of the book, I wouldn't be able to relate to it at all. This can no longer be called a fan. That's what I'm saying. It's up to you, the author, to think about the follow-up. But I think it's too procrastinating. No reader will wait for you to use 30 chapters to lay out the setting. By the time you finish laying out the book, the book will probably be cold.

This book is very special. If I hadn't read the names of Feng Baobao, Zhang Chulan, Xu San, Xu Si, and Xu Xiang in the book, I wouldn't know what you were writing about. The protagonist's origin and experience should be written in more detail. It's a mess of personnel matters. In the early stage, the protagonist directly abused the protagonist. The protagonist said that he was weak, but he was still able to join the company. Why is the company a garbage dump? Are there many aliens? Not a lot but not a lot, but do you know why there are so many scattered people? He's not strong enough. It's not ridiculous that the protagonist who's not strong enough ends up joining the company. Alas

I read the introduction and found that Zhang Chulan had some chance, but the chance did not bring him any good things. Even Zhang Chulan's IQ was somewhat inadequate (for example, his hair was getting less and less). I just wanted to ask, does your protagonist have Zhang Chulan's IQ?

Taking advantage of Mao's opportunity, are you planning to steal someone else's identity when he has been under surveillance by a state department for more than ten years, Feng Baobao can see through the lies, and Zhang Chulan is his grandfather's grandson?

Does Zhang Chulan have a chance?

Author, you are too stupid. In addition to knowing the background of one person, the rest of Chapter 11 has nothing to do with the work. You are not even making progress like this, which is really boring.

Putting aside the issue of you being an eunuch, you have to write so many chapters to get to Luotian Dajiao. What do you want to do?