Zombie Legend of the Heavens

The author writes very well. The storyline is pretty good. It's just that the writing is a little bad. It can be strengthened and improved. You can add some scene descriptions. Make readers feel more involved. The above suggestions are from me to the author. But I wrote the Uncle Nine movie. Be sure to describe it clearly. For example, if I were someone who had never seen the Uncle Nine movie, I would definitely be confused. So at this time, you should write that the protagonist knows what the plot of the movie is? Then the reader can add some sense of involvement. Know why the protagonist does such-and-such.

A zombie is written as the Virgin, you are amazing

I saw a dozen of them, and they successfully persuaded me to reject a mentally retarded protagonist, and the Virgin is a zombie. So what is the Virgin doing? A zombie is written in such a holy way. I wonder if the comment section keeps saying it is good-looking. Are they mentally retarded or paid actors?

Can the author change the heroine? Ren Tingting's writing is terrible. Ao Tianlong's daughter, Ikkyu's female apprentice, or the heroine in Musical Zombie would also work!