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Confused! "Yeah", "I guess...", "Yeah", "Ah". I don't like the way it's written like a running account!

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I just hope the author won't talk about dragons and snakes. It's a bit annoying after reading too much.

After looking at two worlds, the first one is the Republic of China, and the second one is acceptable even if he does not become the emperor, but will open up overseas later. I still want to see such a historical protagonist become an emperor. I feel very bad if he is not an emperor to others, then why are you conquering the world? If you want martial arts, just grab it. I don't understand how it is written. The reality is that the company has laid the foundation and is about to go public. The company is given to others. You are an employee of the company. You work hard for the company and get a little money, but the boss gets hundreds of millions. This is suitable for being a dog. If you like to be a dog shelter, don't write it in the book

From the beginning of Liaozhai, I can no longer watch various acts of the Madonna descending to wisdom. From now on, I am completely mixed with ordinary people. There is also a power system that is about to catch up with the TV series adapted from the novel. There is also a horse riding in the realm of immortals. Forget about riding a horse but why is it still an ordinary horse? It has a fight with a fighting spirit horse. Forget about the collapse of the power system. Why is the pig's trotters as powerful as the immortals and earth immortals? Fighting for a long time, even if the strength is lower, it takes several rounds. And later, ordinary people can also push the pig's feet on the nose and face, and there is a serious licking.

The writing is very good. There are some typos, but they are acceptable. After all, it is easy to understand. It's not like you won't understand it if you make typos. Those who pass by can take a look.

There is no sense of substitution at all. It feels like a flowing water mat. What does the protagonist do today? What will he do tomorrow? What will he do the day after tomorrow? There are no highs or lows. It is as calm as a pool of stagnant water.

You have this system, why are you traveling through time? Can't you become a god every day? Modern society is much safer, but the movies are not good to watch, or the Coke is not good to drink, and there is no forced time travel. You just need to increase your physical fitness and mental energy a little bit every day. This setting is really stupid.

How can I put it this way? This novel has no soul. It's really like speaking in vernacular, haha.

I don't understand the story of the Qin State. If you want to protect the Qin State, why don't you help the First Emperor get the elixir? Helping Su is useless. Wouldn't it be enough to give the First Emperor one of the three elixirs of immortality?

I've always wondered why it's my first time traveling, why don't I just go back in time with all my attributes? It's not like you're about to die, you're just about to run out of money. You can satisfy this attribute by moving bricks, picking up scraps, or doing odd jobs! If you travel to a dangerous time, you will be GG. Should you change the pig's feet? It feels like this IQ is really being rubbed into the ground.

The Chinese and physical education teacher taught it! This writing skills sounds so uncomfortable, the basic sentences are all messed up.

I didn't want to read the second volume when I saw it. The protagonist rebelled and actually used businessmen to manage the territory he had conquered. The common people must not be exploited to death by these businessmen.

Do you really want to start with math and English? Don't worry, I will promote it to you when I encounter other Zhutian novels in the future. Of course, it will be negative. For example, what does this mean? Next door, there is Erque who wants to learn math and English first to venture into other worlds.

Let's review it after I've finished writing it. The whole article is a running account, and it's very long-winded. There are too many problems with sentence fragmentation and typos. Keep it simple and add a little polish. After reading dozens of chapters, I just can't stand it anymore.

Junior high school student level, a comparison of water

My writing level is better than that of a scumbag like me. Why do I always want to use the writing style of a high-level literary and artistic youth? It is neither fish nor fowl, with no poisonous points and no climax. It is a flowing work.

I think the conceptual theme of this book is very good, but your writing style is a little too anxious. It seems that this system is invincible. It doesn't matter if you can't write mathematics or high IQ. Just like you wrote about stacking meat, you don't have to be so anxious about this time travel. You have started to have savings, you are not sick, and you want to see the grace of the heavens after getting the system, but you don't have to be so busy, right? If you are in a hurry to travel through time before the contacts are completed, and you almost write your protagonist to death, you can prepare for three and a half months. At least you have a return ticket. Make all preparations and learn wilderness survival swimming, Chinese medicine, skills that can help you survive in ordinary circumstances! What do you think you wrote? It seems that you are so anxious that if there is a dog chasing you behind you, you will be killed immediately if you don't travel through time. Normal people will be invincible with your system.

It's just a running account, there's no sense of involvement at all, it's too bland.

It's so powerful that you can break through your innate nature and become an immortal...

Ever since the protagonist recognized the time and space artifact, his personality changed drastically at the beginning of the myth. He obviously did not agree with monarchist ideas, but he was so loyal to Qin Shihuang. Moreover, his behavior style was inconsistent with his previous behavior, and his force value basically did not change from the acquired realm. . . So what is the author trying to do? The JiaDian flow has disappeared and the style of the novel has changed drastically. We readers can see that Shinhwa here likes JD flow, Mang King Kong and the like. As for the plot ideas in the article, as long as it is not terrible, we can continue to read it. . . . I hope the author can change it later. After all, your writing style is suitable for being reckless, otherwise no readers will spend money.

The sea! You are full of water! ! !

I didn't even hold on and read Chapter 111. Lingyun Cave didn't want to read it, so I left. Alas~

I have always wanted to know why adding points is done by people like Huang Fei and Ip Man in the martial arts world. I really don't understand.

This is too dull and boring, and the story is too weak. It's just about grabbing various things, then upgrading, and fast-forwarding over and over again. I can't stand it anymore when I see the fourth world.

Even though he was cheating, he was still the same as ordinary people. He could only improve it to 10, so I just laughed. Moreover, the system gives you not enough opportunities to be stubborn. I am really convinced. If you wait for three months and there is a return point, you can wander as much as you want.

Thank you to the author for teaching me how to write a running account

I was also drunk. I guess the author didn't expect that he would be on Daily Poison a year after the book was finished!

I really couldn't hold on any longer and upgraded without thinking. At least there is a price to pay for upgrading! One level at a time. Is the upgrade experience so awesome? Click to get a Dragon Slaying Knife, which is not as fast as your leveling up!

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