Luigi's Fantasy Adventure

Rating 2.5 Stars Evaluation: Chicken ribs sprinkled with some cumin. Advantages: 1. The "real" protagonist, whose thoughts and actions are very down-to-earth, the most typical ones are "Eat and Sex" and "Shilipo Sword God", which can make many readers feel immersed in the novel 2. The lack of respect for the original plot is the most characteristic of the author and the biggest advantage. Every time you enter a world, you can clearly feel the protagonist's thoughts of "I just want this world to be what I want it to be." This can satisfy the reading needs of most readers and is also one of the charms of secondary creation. Disadvantages: 1. The characters are not fleshed out enough. It is reasonable that the protagonist does not have a distinctive personality, because this is the window for readers to enter. However, the supporting characters are too thin and do not have a fleshed-out image, or there are not enough examples to construct their image. But I could vaguely feel the author's careless intentions from the beginning. This may be due to the fact that the book was unsatisfactory, and subsequent development was aborted. 2. The branch world is formulaic. After changing the original plot in different planes, there is no more in-depth deduction of subsequent changes. It always feels like a superficial taste. The charm of the original plot and the customized plot are not revealed. Others: 1. The interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters is also one of the advantages, but this book failed to reflect this well. For example, what I still remember is the first core mission, Mr. Detective's various tests and complaints about the protagonist, which is indeed very interesting. 2. In the author's previous work, the presence of supporting characters has always been very high, and the presence of Arthur and Merlin is interspersed throughout the text at a certain rhythm. But in this book, there seems to be a breaking point between supporting characters and protagonists, supporting characters and supporting characters, supporting characters and planes, and it ends before you even get into it. Comparison: The point of not being afraid of the original plot is also reflected in other works of the same type, but it is fundamentally different. Other unlimited streams, changing the plot is the way to gain profits. The author here, changing the plot is the purpose, I like it very much. Conclusion: Compared with the previous book, this book is really bleak, but the author's personal style is really attractive. I hope that the author's characterization and plot deduction can make more progress. I want to see the protagonist and his friends learn, grow, travel and do things in various worlds together.

Spoken from memory. It gets a little blurry as time goes by. I remember this book was a surprise to me before it was put on the shelves. There were three cool spots that he saw, but he avoided them. As far as women are concerned, he is quite righteous. He avoids some readers who like to mess around. As we all know in terms of justice attributes, most readers now like darker, brainless genres. I dare not say absolutely, but it is still 70%. Some of his justice is unnecessary, and it also affects the sense of satisfaction. The other thing is personal rhythm. Everyone knows this kind of unlimited flow. You can't write too much, too long, too wordy, or too many private things. No matter how well-written it is, it will end in 100 chapters. If it is not well-written, it will end in 10 or 20 chapters. If I remember correctly, when the author was writing the copy, he created something of his own, which he thought was original. Anyway, it was ugly and verbose, and I can't remember the details. If the reader is the author's bread and butter, this logic exists. Obviously, the author's son is very rebellious and violates the principle of entertainment. He engages in creation and innovation. In fact, what Infinite Streaming requires is patterns, text and copies. You can come up with some new ideas in the story, but if you borrow someone else's character or physique and then say it's your own, it's inappropriate. The fact is that his innovation failed. He abandoned entertainment and the pleasure that readers feel when reading. He paid more attention to his own performance and inspiration, but his performance and inspiration were not restricted, so he went to a dead end, making his own path narrower and narrower, and the book was half dead. In the end, his idea may be I worked hard to create a self-righteous masterpiece, but the public did not buy it, and the results were very poor. Then he became autistic and abandoned us readers who liked him. In fact, we also like your works. As long as you are not willful, everyone is still willing to buy it. But the result of the fact is that you abandoned your readers first, and then the readers abandoned you. Don't reverse the relationship. If you care about the readability of readers, you cannot spend your indulgence too wantonly and create new copies by yourself. You clearly know that the result is unknown, and you will use your inspiration wantonly. You made a bowl of chowder and you put something in it that you shouldn't have. To put it in game terms, what do you think of the actual game modes? They are not all the same. The games you can see now are all terrible. I don't think what they like is the game mode, but the people who accompany him. The people you are familiar with are no longer here, so half of this game can be given up. The copies and so-called innovations you create happen to be renovating the things they are familiar with. It is like you have created new friends, but others do not want to make this new friend. Can you understand what I say? What I said is not absolutely correct, because my impression of this book is vague, so my evaluation is biased. But overall, I like every novel written by this author, and his creative concepts are very trendy. I also like the characters he writes about, and maybe he would have done better if his stories weren't so indulgent. Maybe this is because of what I like about him. These things are the reasons why his performance is not outstanding. After all, we are now an older generation of readers and may not be able to keep up with the times. Everything is possible. In the new era and new society, I dare not say what young people like nowadays. Maybe, maybe, we are still young people in front of the older generation, but I know that we have gradually fallen behind and been eliminated by the times. It becomes more and more different from the world we like and know, and the stories we know. The closer we get to the end, the less things are left. There is no such thing as a sense of identity. Every reader is a lonely soul. How lucky that we met a hundred years ago. If you see it, I hope you will come back and write. It doesn't matter what you write. I appreciate your new thinking, but all new thinking does not mean that the story is also brand new. This kind of thing cannot be done. Most old bottles put new wine in, opening everything and overthrowing everything. It's not a story that you and I can do. Let's talk about this, let's continue it if we are destined.

How to put it this way, this book is quite interesting and suitable for reading with a playful attitude, because if you read it carefully, you will be turned off by the low-grade setting, the low-grade protagonist, and the childish lack of knowledge. But if you ignore all the irrationality, it's quite interesting.

What I admire about the author is that although the subject matter and writing style are okay, he can perfectly bypass all the exciting points that readers want and make the wonderful copy world boring.

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I suggest you take The Last of Us 2 to 1 and let Joel play it and see what it feels like.

I took a look and found that the author was still using this account on August 16th and was reading like crazy. I don't know the specific situation. Either I changed my career, or I don't want to write a book for the time being. So what about you, the author, please tell me whether you want to write it or not!

I vomited when I saw that in addition to the protagonist there were teammates, I hate this kind of single protagonist, but ended up playing with multiple players, I didn't like it 🔨

It's been over half a year and there's no news about a new book. It's so sad.

Originally, I came to this kind of infinite stream just to see the protagonist reveal himself as a saint. The mystery of identity is one of the cool things. How did the protagonists in this and the previous book do it? The reader just saw the cool thing about pretending to be B. The protagonist immediately confessed all his identities to the natives of the plane. The previous book was better, but this one was more brutal. Not only did he explain everything about his world of braves, but he also explained everything about the diaosi who was waiting to die in bed before he was reborn. He had to explain it once in every world. Who can blame him for his poor performance?

Both harem novels and single female protagonists can be written well, but the question is, does the author have the strength to write a harem novel well? There is no threat and there is no need, because I was quite happy to read it. I just saw that some readers would give some personal opinions on the things that don't work. This is also a suggestion that I hope the author will write better and better. It is undeniable that the plot is still very attractive to me now, but is it necessary to have in-depth communication with the female characters? The reason why harem stories are easy to explode is that most girls become accessories or vases, which does not help the main plot. It is just a water plot The impact on the male protagonist is that he is a bit too lustful. After all, cultivation is a one-step process, and in-depth communication is also a one-step process. The only difference is the difference in time description, but it is the same to the readers! [After all, in-depth communication can be done in one chapter, and hard practice can be done in one chapter]. For readers, it is just a chapter Although I can accept it, "My point of view is that a dying person is reborn and is living his own life seriously. I think it should be acceptable to do these things?" I have read good harem stories where the character's personality drives the plot, rather than the author's desire for the protagonist to take over. The female character has her own personality and her own plot, and even overly wants to see the heroine's plot be greater than the protagonist's plot 😜 This is very important, not just a flower vase The female character's values ​​are "too traditional or deviant", or her personality "doesn't care", etc., Which prompts the male protagonist to get a harem! It also prevents the story from being ugly because the characters all have "souls and feelings" and will develop like this. Although readers may not accept it emotionally, they can understand why the plot becomes like this If in addition to maintaining the main plot line, characters can be added to promote the plot, and the emotions can be sublimated, instead of simply stopping at the in-depth communication between the sexes, the emotional aspect will no longer be a place where the author is disliked Come on, author, I think the story is written very much!

It's getting boring, and the sperm is really getting to my head later. The setting is also very boring, so let's leave it at that.

It was well written before. But there was some water in the back. Personally I think it's okay. But I didn't like the later plot very much. The protagonist is a brave man, and his purpose is to deal with the big devil. During this period, you can travel to other worlds to increase your strength, which is good. But later on, other characters were gradually added, and even characters from the plot world who were doing tasks by themselves were summoned to become heroes together, so I didn't watch it that much. The result can also be guessed. However, I prefer personal heroic novels. You summon many plot characters with superpowers in the world to become brave like you, and they will definitely collapse in the later stage. After all, everyone else has the same golden fingers you have. So are you sure you can be better than others? If you are not as powerful as your partner. Then you must have less authority to speak, or you will be like a subordinate licking a dog. Of course, after all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables.

No. . Since they were sure that there was an enemy behind them, why didn't they just kill him instead of letting him go? Are you happy waiting for them to grow up and be disgusting? . .

There is nothing wrong with the logic and plot of the author's writing, but he can't grasp what the readers want to enjoy. He briefly mentions the exciting parts and explains the dull ones in detail. For example, not telling the true origin can give people a sense of mystery, but you have to escape completely, and tell all your information truthfully when you meet the characters in the plot. Yes, this arrangement is fine in terms of plot, but it makes readers feel uncomfortable.

Okay, farewell🙂

The rest of the book is okay, except that the main character feels like a human-shaped pile driver, and seeing a woman fuck him made me sick to my stomach.

Everything else is fine, but the villagers are unwilling to take up arms. This is really ridiculous.

How come this old boy lets himself go and then becomes a pigeon?

I'm speechless. I've passed through several worlds. Why did you summon Gil? Is the sperm in your brain? None of the previous books were this outrageous. Farewell

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Is the author not going to continue writing new books?

My writing skills are really not that bad.

Are there any new books? Almost two years

The author is back! Chapter 3 of the new book has just arrived! Qing Mimi's updates are not even willing to send a notification 🙂

The real thing about Fast and Furious is that if Elena is not the heroine, don't write it in the same way as a heroine. If you are a lover for a period of time, don't write so much. It's really disgusting to write it like this.

No, what about the prologue? I looked lonely. . There is no mention of it around this village.

It's been two years and you haven't finished writing the new book yet?

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...