It's a Showdown. the Player Is My Younger Brother.

You don't need to read it from the love apartment, it's not worth it {"TopicId":"587582127428665344","TopicName":"Book Review"}

It really means I can't understand the messy writing.

Interesting and beautiful. There are too few updates. I can't even read a chapter in a day and I don't have much time to follow.

I just finished reading the free chapter. The writing of this book is okay and it is good enough, but it is too slow and not enjoyable enough. If You Are the One, I won't go into details. It's just an overdone plot just for the sake of being excessive, and it doesn't contribute to the whole story at all. Instead of writing about this, I'd rather write about foreign reactions to the game. And it's really not cool enough. I managed to gain control of the first world, but it ended up being used to screen players when opening a new world? There should be no limit to the number of people who can fully obtain world power. Why not transform it into a world where players with quick minds, calm personalities and engineering experts can be screened? The protagonist's sense of existence is too low. The benefits of gaining world power can be taken away by simply injecting the T-virus. Not to mention all, at least some of the special abilities of some zombies can be written down. The participation of national forces is written too little, and there is not even a single person in the army? Whether it is to quickly gain world power (soldiers are definitely better than ordinary players in terms of character and skills) and with the support of the country behind them, countless think tanks will analyze the character according to the original work to better contact NPCs. The elite of elite players did not feel it and only saw the take-off of the European Emperor players. My suggestion is that you can write a real engineering boss, and then enter the game to make gunpowder, and use your bare hands to make a simple musket or homemade grenade. Recruit a group of minions, use them to attract attention, and plant explosives to almost kill the final boss or kill the boss to open the door to a new world for players.

I just want to ask if the one who must play the game is a bit too often. I feel very annoyed. It would be okay if you were the protagonist. It's not what you keep writing about him. It's disgusting. He is already famous in both worlds. You still want him to always be the first. Write it well.

The wasteland cracked after that (▔ ,▔)ㄏ

I don't know what I wrote after the first fantasy world. I even thought that someone had to write it at the beginning.

Hold your Cai Luoli and drown her to death

The writing of this book is okay, but after the wasteland, it felt a bit boring. It changed too quickly, and each world was treated as a separate game in the early stage. I would get bored after reading it twice more. I hope that the next book will be in a big world, and I don't need to change the map frequently. After all, I just feel a little bit about the wasteland, then it ends, and I start a new one. It ends again before I start to invest, which makes it easy to get tired.

I set up a fan value to speak, and specially ordered a chapter to speak What should I write? Send it, everyone only loves Cai Luoli, why don't you just say lkd, listen to the book party, me and him, my mother wants to vomit, what should I send?

I suspect that the author wrote this book in a flash. After conquering several worlds, he only used one apocalyptic world. I don't know what the use of conquering other worlds is. They also said that he was developing his own small world, but he didn't write at all about the extent of the small world, leaving us readers to guess. The protagonist's strength is not revealed at all. The writing style is actually quite good and the writing is quite interesting. I really hope that this book can be written better, but it seems impossible now. Alas...

Why are you writing about a blind date? I think my grades are good enough, but I'm poisoning the readers. I'm done with it.

What was written earlier is quite good. Later. . . It's hard to put it into words, is the world of Pokémon coming to an end 😐

The first two copies are okay, but the latter ones are hard to describe. I feel like the author has changed.

On the Qi~dian app, collect the points and read them for ten minutes, then you can invest in it. Only you young people understand these things, and you are a fool at playing them.

Newcomers need care (இдஇ; )

I always thought that the author accidentally changed the boss into a boss. But in fact the whole article is boos. . . I suggest you revise it. I read myocardial infarction. If you are not sure about the English spelling, I suggest you either use Baidu to look it up, or write it directly as leader, elite.

A copycat book that imitates "Infinite Adventure", of course, being a copycat is not a problem, it is also a matter of writing something that is more exciting than the original, just like "The Path of the Infinite Warrior" is far more exciting than the original "Infinite Terror". I just read the early stage, and I have to say that the writing style is a bit inferior. A common problem of novice writers is that they can be complex but not simplistic. Rather than describing all kinds of irrelevant descriptions, readers prefer to stop at the point where they can leave more room for imagination.

When I saw a blind date on If You Are the One, I quickly opened the comments to see if there were any female protagonists. I'm most afraid of seeing a heroine behind the scenes. It will be embarrassing if not handled well.

Whether it's a recommendation ticket, monthly pass, collection or subscription, please click if you can support it! Today I saw a reader saying that new authors need care and all the recommendation tickets have been booked. Thank you very much. If you have any suggestions, please feel free to comment in the comments section!

What did you think of suddenly writing about iPartment? No topic or ideas? Just go down to the hard water?

How to say it? Recommend a book, you will understand after reading it!

Big cheers for the author! Love you | ᴥ•́ )✧

It seems that not a single collection has increased in the past two days...

I traded PY with others to recommend a first-hand, sweet love article. The writing is indeed good. If you like to read candy, you can click and add it to your collection. Just give me the ticket.

I happen to be in school at this time and there is nothing I can do about it, and the book has not been put on the shelves yet, so the update is slow. I estimate that when I get home in mid-to-late July, the book will be put on the shelves and I will start writing. I can guarantee two to three updates a day. I once tried to update ten times a day, which lasted for three days. I am confident that this update will not miss you. If you want to see it, you can click and follow it first!

The beginning is fine, but the rest is fine. . . Alas, abandoned. The copy was changed too quickly. It would be interesting to write more realistic reflections. It jumps so fast.

I just saw Tianlong World. How can I put it? From my perspective, the Elf World is not as good as the Zombie World, but the Zombie World is a bit confusing (mainly reflected in the fact that time passes too fast and it ends if you are not careful). I feel that there is still potential that can be tapped. From the current perspective, what does this system have to gain? What does the protagonist need? There is no explanation and no details. It gives the impression that the system and the protagonist are doing "charity" without asking for anything in return. According to the current level of harmony, I think the impact of the system on the real world can be completely ignored, or the government can be ignored, and this part can be discarded directly. To summarize: the writing is okay, but needs to be improved.

There is actually a love apartment. I want to give up. I have no feeling at all.

I'll give you five monthly passes, and the author will continue to work hard.