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Later, he will definitely be the savior in danger. He barely wins the first round. After all, he plays even though he is sick. He has to fight to tears and improve the protagonist's strength. Later, when he is sick, he will kill everyone and become invincible. Then he will become various champions, defeat all the junglers, capture the 3 lanes, and then drive the family business and create an e-sports empire. It doesn't matter whether she has a harem or not, she must be an excellent goddess. It is also possible to revolutionize the entertainment industry. See if you have the ability to improve your physical fitness. If so, you might be able to dominate the sports world. Of course there must be a reversal during this period, otherwise the author's literary youth syndrome cannot be released. After seeing this, I don't admit that this is a cool novel. It is just a work of e-sports young people. But if the young people are young and the protagonist finally succeeds after going through hardships, then the author has the confidence to write a good book. But this kind of twists and turns due to illness can only be used once. If there are no twists and turns later, the quality of this novel will immediately decline. The insignificant training matches are well written, and the twists and turns and defeats in the game are brushed aside. This will not work. If you don't write in detail how to show the protagonist's strong character Remember that there will be twists and turns later, this book will no longer be a fun read. I will give you some suggestions. In the following games, after a winning streak, the team and the club will buy and lose. Teammates are threatened, relatives are in trouble, girlfriends are caught and must lose. The competition party threatens, uses tricks, frames, suspensions and disqualifications, teammates teach A car accident, a plane crash, encountering gangsters, drug dealers, gangsters in foreign countries, being shot, selling drugs, stabbings, losing teammates, clubs selling players, natural disasters and man-made disasters are all good. In the end, how about the protagonist Ping single-handedly winning the championship? There will be a sequel later.
, don't say it's spicy, the author has not stopped updating, he is just playing with the light and spicy.
Recall the dark history for the author🐶
Your writing style is that of the author of the previous book Champion Puzzle. This time, don't let it go out in just a few days.
I think Mr. Kang is quite good. He doesn't have grass fans. He spends money on prostitution and refuses spinach. He is all criticized. Unfortunately, his strength has declined too fast. He is the number one in e-sports. If he can maintain it, the people who criticize him will also turn to licking him, just like a poisonous coin.
I quit when I saw I was sick, it was boring
Height of 184cm and weight of 134cm, how fucking slim have you become? It's so ugly. I don't ask you to have muscles, you must have 150.
Write well
These chapters are really packed with words.
There are currently two issues with this book. First, there is the issue of competition for the protagonist's position. Kandi in S6 is one of the strongest ones and is known as the Son of the Dragon, and he doesn't have the problem of women being popular in S7. In this case, the competition between the protagonist and him is difficult to write - generally speaking, if the protagonist squeezes out the starter, he will either fail or have problems with his own people. The final result is that WE, who was originally the strongest player in S6, became the weakest one, and then forced his teammates to accelerate their growth to the state of S7... The second is the lineup problem. Looking at the main characters, we can see that the author wants to replace the AD with Ah Shui and the assistant with Liu Qingsong. As far as operability is concerned, there is no problem with support. After all, Zero is a bad guy. In the end, WE even traded The Shy and IG for ben4. Liu Qingsong's own situation is also quite average. But Ah Shui is different. First of all, my brother-in-law is the one who attracts the most fans in WE, and WE relies on fans to make money. If you replace your brother-in-law with fans, it won't cause a stir? Secondly, Ah Shui was trained by IG for a year in S7 and also played many training games. At the beginning of S8, he was still educated in various ways. Are you sure he is better than his brother-in-law in S6? And if he doesn't play in S6, he will have to wait until S8.
Just promised and it started again soon🐴?
After reading the first three chapters, I felt like a champion puzzle, and sure enough, it was an old eunuch.
I'm sick again, so I'm going to withdraw now. I'll read the next book.
I hate you, why don't you be a eunuch on Monday and push me down the sixth channel 😂😂😂😂😂
Real eunuch, I won't get a ticket next time
Xiuer? I just read your Champion Puzzle. You promised to write a good new book. Why, when I search, your new book shows that it was updated two months ago? So. . . Eunuch again? ? Alas~ The author is good at it and cherish it! In fact, the books you wrote are pretty good. At least they can still make a living in this era of book shortage. Why can't you just use eunuchs? I hope the author will adjust his mood, pay attention to his health, update or open a new book as soon as possible, and write well. I know that writing is not easy. Come on! ! Only if you can endure loneliness can you maintain prosperity! !
Nb, as soon as I invested, I was stopped for seven days.
The problem may be that we have always been a bad guy in my mind, playing bad jokes all day long and not doing well, so when the protagonist filled the cup in Chapter 7, I felt: That's it? Just this teammate? Take off? Nt, I thought about it again, why can I accept other protagonists' 4 kills and 5 kills and cup cup, but I can't accept this? Maybe it's because the author didn't portray the protagonist's strength well. In my mind, I feel like he just traveled through time after winning the championship? That crown? Who to fight? I don't even know, so I don't have a template for my impression of the protagonist? Ning? Wrong strength? Tian? No bad breath. Half of the author's old problem has been corrected. In the previous book, he always called the protagonist by his full name during the game. It still felt weird. Why can't he give him a nickname? Buddha man, flying man? It can also lead to some more jokes. There is also the author's passion. I am not passionate at all, and it's a bit embarrassing. The passion routine is useless.
Regarding the rhythm issue of chapters 28-30.
The author wants to say something here. I have only been exposed to alliance writing for a short time, and I am not sure which are the poisonous points of alliance writing and which routines have been written too much. The author has only read two alliance articles in total. One is "Who in the Alliance Contests" The other is "The Peak Throne of the Alliance" For those readers who have touched their poisonous spots, the author can only say sorry, because the author tried to change this paragraph, but there is really no way to change it. If you really can't accept it, you can just skip these three chapters! That's right. You can directly state the bad points of your alliance in this comment area, so that the author can learn from it and try not to make the same mistake in the future. Thank you everyone!