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The monsters are written too strong, and the bosses in the early stage are just miscellaneous soldiers in the later stage. In the end, facing the monsters, the apprentice level is just an ant, and the planet level may still be an ant. Only the star level can hope to be on an equal footing. According to the rhythm of swallowing the stars, the protagonist will be suppressed for more than a hundred chapters. Realism is realism, but it's a pity that I chose the wrong subject matter. Most of the people who clicked in came in for the fans of Swallowing Starry Sky. They had a good sense of Swallowing Starry Sky. As a result, the ceiling in the early stage of Swallowing Starry Sky was worthless in the different world in the fandom. To be honest, I felt uncomfortable watching it. If I were not a fan of Devouring the Starry Sky and simply wrote about that world of demons and chaos, perhaps my results would have been much better. It's targeting the wrong readership. Those who want to see original works will not come in if they see that it is a fan work. Those who want to see a fan work of Devouring Starry Sky will come in and feel uncomfortable and then leave. The writing ability has reached a level that I can follow, but I don't like the content very much. I'm looking forward to a major revision or the next book.

It is recommended to use Devouring Starry Sky as the main world and abandon the demon world, and the results will immediately go up.

What about updates? Where did your update go?

Some can't stand it anymore. The demon world chosen for the main world is really not good, and Golden Finger is not very good either. To be honest, in the world of demons, as a human being, with the protagonist's strength, being discovered by demons means death. The key is that it is not a secret that the protagonist is human, many people know it. Without Mrs. Bai Jing's various care, the protagonist would have died long ago. The author of Devour also arranged for the protagonist warrior to start the game. Force the inheritance of the Fallen Ink Star to Luo Feng? The question is why I clicked in to read this book despite its average performance? Because there is Devour, there are actually some readers who want to see the protagonist compete with Luo Feng and search for opportunities. The author took care of some students who didn't want to see the protagonist compete with Luo Feng for a chance, but he also lost the hearts of readers who wanted to see this.

If you are a fan who writes about Devouring, your introduction will directly persuade them to quit. The main theme of Devouring is about dedication and stressing that everything is for the ethnic group. You come here and just want to develop your own one-third of an acre of land with peace of mind? I'm not even interested in taking a look at it, so it would be nice to come over and complain about it.

I feel that these are professional writers, who are paid based on the number of words. They don't care whether their writing is good or not. They just need to know how to write essays after graduating from elementary school. They start with something, start with something, write one page to explain for several pages, and the defense is the best way to make up the words. You listen to me making up... No, you listen to me explaining...! The readers are not even given the chance to make up their own minds.

I don't know why, but every time I write a fanfic about Swallowing Starry Sky, I have to write a few more worlds. Isn't it good to concentrate on writing about Swallowing Starry Sky? (You have to make it yourself and no one will see it)

After reading more than thirty chapters, the author is very innovative and writes something of his own. Don't pay attention to those who are trolling, stick to your own ideas

This author didn't listen to the advice, and still focused on the world of demons and monsters. .

It would be understandable if apprentices at Level 9 below the Devouring Star level could not defeat demons. After all, it is purely physical output, even if you have hundreds or thousands of tons on hand, it is still physical output. Once you rise to the stars, you have to make a big change. Immortal level. Just talking about the cosmic level, one can directly survive on a white dwarf star, or even directly destroy the entire surface of the earth. If you still can't defeat the monster at this level, you can just die.

I'm speechless. It's so uncomfortable to watch. What is the universe level and what is the domain lord level? With such a high ceiling in the Devouring World, the Territory Lord level can rule a bunch of galaxies. The Silver-Blue Universe State in the Milky Way is where the Territory Lord level is sitting, ruling billions of living planets. As a result, converted to the main world, it is not even considered a big boss at the end of the level? Is that too much? What kind of world is this? A big place can still be the main level of energy production domain?

There is no problem with eunuchs. Devouring series warriors cannot be cultivated in continental planes. The strength and speed of warriors at the God of War level are suffocated in an ancient county. No matter how you look at it, it violates the rules.

In fact, it is a big loophole that you can bring things out. According to the current strength of the demon world, it is no more than immortal at most. However, the technological creations in the Devouring World can destroy stars and destroy immortals very cheaply. The protagonist now has so many cosmic coins of Hunyuan units and points. Even if he buys a huge and difficult-to-move Star Destroyer Cannon, he can just say "Who else!" When placed in the base camp. At worst, he will kill the land and die together. As for technological items, there are loopholes in the Devouring World, and it is really a bug when placed in the Demonic World. Of course it's not interesting to write like this.

I remember that in the original work, the star-level golden-horned behemoth withstood the detonation of a series of nuclear bombs in an instant before being seriously injured. It was all killed by several planet-level star-level wheels native to the earth. Alas. . . In the end, when we arrived in the main world, the author used the star-level analogy to compare the combat power of the demon king in the streets. However, according to the author's description, the destructive power of the demon king has just reached the planetary level threshold. . . Therefore, 99% of all Devouring fans who came here for the title of the book were filled with depression.

The author is capable, and this book is well written, but there are a lot of bugs, the subject matter is wrong, or the writing direction is wrong, and there is not enough space to write plots in both worlds. If one world has plots, and the other world is similar to the game world, it may be better to level up.

Write about Devouring the Starry Sky and sell it as dog meat.

It looks great, but it doesn't have the support of a big boss, so the results are poor. However, there are also disadvantages. I feel that the protagonist is playing a stand-alone game in the Swallowing Starry Sky. After all, the player's energy is strong. The world before the protagonist traveled has strong technology and a large population. He lands in the Swallowing Starry Sky world, and the earth is only a small part. It is still possible to practice in the Swallowing Starry Sky and the protagonist's previous world, and the technologies complement each other. Then some players log in to other high-tech planets, learn the technology and pass it to the players on the earth. Then it is normal for the earth to have a large number of strong people. There are still players jumping around in the front, but there are basically no players behind. I don't believe that what other players have learned in advanced civilizations will not be traded to earth players, such as kung fu, secret techniques, gene potion manufacturing, and other things. After all, there is a market if there is a demand. These things cannot be mass-produced by masters, but it is normal for those with talent to become masters.

Updates are too slow and infrequent, unable to update twice a day?

I read about a hundred chapters patiently. . . It's unpleasant to watch. . . Gone. . . This world of monsters. . . The writing is average. . . I think most Devouring fans will click through and watch this. Compared with other fan fiction, this book is characterized by the world of monsters, but unfortunately it is not well written. I wrote Devouring the World, but unfortunately the protagonist is very bad and mediocre. There is nothing exciting about a fantasy novel with a mediocre protagonist.

I said that no matter what I do, I won't be a eunuch.

It's numb, it's so good, why don't we update it?

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If the author has thought about how to write the next book, this book will give us the outline at the end, and then just start a new book at the end. I personally feel that the two worlds are very good, but it is better to write the plot in one world, and the other world is similar to the game world to increase the level. In addition, I feel that the author is not very good at writing emotional scenes. The emotional scenes in this book are not very good. I do not recommend the author to write emotional scenes in the next book.

The most disgusting thing is that any demon can enter the territory. What kind of setting is this?

The author writes about the demons in the lower world so powerfully. How can a demon from a continent be stronger than the warrior who swallowed it and entered the starry sky and universe? The aftermath of the battle between the two powerful men inside Devour can blow up a planet.

The two volumes of "Swallowing the Starry Sky" were written consecutively. . . Speechless

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