Online Game One Piece World

Write less realistic plots, especially plots like rescuing a wealthy lady. It's so toxic.

Four quite serious plot issues 1. How did the protagonist earn more than 30 million? There is no explanation at all Two, in the early stage, it was obvious that no one knew that Devil Fruits were cheap to store and could cultivate their own power. The protagonist was actually so weird that he wanted to exchange Bailey for money? ? Third, the protagonist used the cloning fruit to copy Akainu's abilities very early, but he didn't use them at ordinary times, but he still didn't use them in the dungeon where no one could see them? Have all your abilities been lost? How many chapters are there? Four, and you are obviously not talented in swordsmanship, but your fruit ability is awesome, and yet you haven't developed the fruit for so long? Or are you showing off with a sword?

Recommended votes are given. Many One Piece fans are defeated by the plot of the battle that is difficult to innovate and follow the trend. This time the plot of One Piece is just a background board and I think it is good. I hope the character portrayal will not collapse. Just keep working hard.

Come on, author. There are not many readers of novels with this theme, but there are still a small number of us who like to read them. It is usually difficult to find this kind of novel, but I was lucky enough to find it today. The preservation level is not bad, I will chase it to the end 🙂

For now, it's okay, I hope the author will keep

There are 440,000 words and 177 chapters, and you still don't have any recommendations? Is he responsible for editing the Taifu series or is the author on the blacklist? I can't feel the presence of this book

Wouldn't it be good to just clone the Draco and secretly control the navy?

Is it a game or a journey through the world of One Piece? If you are playing the game, upgrade it and understand who you think you are.

I feel that this setting is quite good. I remember reading a novel with this setting before, but the players basically did not appear in the later stage. It feels like a pity. I hope the author of this book can write it well. Come on!

After reading more than 60 chapters, it feels too rigid, as if everything is stipulated. There are no surprises when completing dungeons, just like a running account, and the equipment feels useless.

After reading it, I felt very immersive, and I can't write about that feeling.

I remember that I had read a book called One Piece: Complete Fantasy (it seems to be that name, I forgot it). The protagonist seemed to be a cloned fruit, but he could only clone one! Then he cloned Enel's Thunder Fruit

Can you clone someone else's wife? Hey-hey

Can you clone someone else's wife? Hey-hey

I send 4 recommendation votes 😁 every day, cheers for the author

I think it's ok, it's pretty good to watch, but it's a bit of a drama to write the pirates as pirates.

Is the protagonist not very smart or is the author deliberately writing it as not very smart? Too smart

My strength can be synchronized with reality and I'm still reading a ghost book

It's almost 20 photos, and the role of the protagonist's Devil Fruit has not yet been determined. Is it imitation? Clone? ? Not even using it?

It's not unreasonable to jump on the street. If you don't develop these settings at the beginning, you won't even be able to catch the readers' appetite. To be honest, if this book is played solo, without any guilds, and develops various ways to play the fruit, the results will definitely not be on the same level, and there will be pitfalls in the real world.

I feel that the author's rigid thinking cannot reach modern times. The first few chapters were okay, but then everything I did felt like it was ordinary.

Finally, I would like to say that this ability is too rigid for the protagonist to use. It feels like I'm back in 2005

Oh no, it's not just the way it's written that's rigid.

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